7th grade writing by Lasha Blair https://padlet.com/26lblair/ilw2a58j76fthlf4 en-us 2020-12-23 15:14:08 UTC 2021-04-19 21:27:29 UTC hello@padlet.com 26svanterpool https://padlet.com/26lblair/ilw2a58j76fthlf4/wish/1348014032 ☆ I like how you connect the data and claims come down to the warrant. It makes the ideas seem organized and connected.

☆ I liked the way you did the “Call to Action” at the end of your piece. It makes people want to react to the situations quicker!

Wish- I wish that you would have taken your time and made sure the spacing and grammar is good. I noticed some grammar mistakes but otherwise your essay was great!]]> 2021-03-24 13:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/26lblair/ilw2a58j76fthlf4/wish/1348014032 2 stars and a wish 26anazariosharpe https://padlet.com/26lblair/ilw2a58j76fthlf4/wish/1435270897 ☆I like how your writing was clear and you said exactly what needed to be said.

☆ You found some really good pieces of data

Wish-  I wish you would’ve added more creativity into your piece. It would have made it more exciting to read.
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