sketch padlet by Logan O'Connor

Olivia1

s910654 — 2016-09-26 12:53:02 UTC

Basia1

s933333 — 2016-09-26 12:53:22 UTC

Attemt 1.1

s10190581 — 2016-09-26 12:53:30 UTC

Ella Johnston (my worst)

Leo 1st

s905824 — 2016-09-26 12:53:31 UTC

s913625 — 2016-09-26 12:53:39 UTC

Alyssa Gast

Caden Hammonds

s949448 — 2016-09-26 12:53:40 UTC

garrett smith

s924488 — 2016-09-26 12:54:33 UTC

Meeeeee :-)=Grace

s1013121 — 2016-09-26 12:56:06 UTC

This is my 3rd attempt. My best 😎😆🤗😃

Kate inside

s842430 — 2016-09-26 12:58:08 UTC

Olivia2

s910654 — 2016-09-26 13:00:52 UTC

Olivia2 is awesome😂

Grace 1

s1013121 — 2016-09-26 13:03:39 UTC

😝

Critique for Kate1inside by Olivia

s910654 — 2016-09-26 13:04:29 UTC

walls looked even. But maybe you could pinch a little bit softer. And make the walls as thick as bottom. but it is a really good pot!

Leo Commenting on Caden

s905824 — 2016-09-26 13:04:59 UTC

Caden, you could make it a little bit bigger and make the bottom a little bit thick.

Commenting on Ella J.

s842430 — 2016-09-26 13:05:04 UTC

I think that she should not pinch so hard have thicker walls and thicker sides.- Kate

commenting on caden by garrett

s924488 — 2016-09-26 13:05:05 UTC

you could of tried to make the corners even.

Ella Johnston, commenting on on Kate inside,

s10190581 — 2016-09-26 13:05:05 UTC

I would make the bottom thinner, and the left corner thicker, and i think you should have made the top even, but mine looks the same way.

commenting on Caden Hammonds

s913625 — 2016-09-26 13:05:09 UTC

The corners are a little uneven and thin. Also the sides are thick and could be pinched out some. Otherwise your piece is good.
-Alyssa Gast

commenting on Kate inside.

s1013121 — 2016-09-26 13:05:47 UTC

This is good for first attempt, but it is really thin. But yet awesome.
-Grace

gabe barney

s892840 — 2016-09-26 13:05:54 UTC

s967897 — 2016-09-26 13:06:06 UTC

my 1st

Caden Hammonds commenting on Leo's.

s949448 — 2016-09-26 13:06:07 UTC

I think maybe you should have made it a little taller and wider because it's very long. You also should have pinched a little harder to make it thin. Overall it is pretty good.

Commenting on Grace 1 by olivia

s910654 — 2016-09-26 13:06:55 UTC

The walls looked pretty even and it wasn't cracking. The walls could have been a little more thick and could have pinched softer and the top could have been a bit more even. But overall a great pot :)

commenting on Olivia 1

2016-09-26 13:07:15 UTC

It is grate.

Commenting on ella johnson i don't think she should pinch too hard

s967897 — 2016-09-26 13:07:43 UTC

commenting on caden by gabe you can do it better

s892840 — 2016-09-26 13:08:26 UTC

by smoothing it and also by making the corners less thick by pinching and also you could also make the walls less thick and also your left wall was thicker than the right one

To Grace

s842430 — 2016-09-26 13:10:11 UTC

Post the cross section

i like your cup commenting on Caden

s892840 — 2016-09-26 13:11:23 UTC

by gabe

i think that your pinch pot is good for your first one but your pot could use some work done on it by smoothing the inside of it.

s967897 — 2016-09-26 13:11:40 UTC

commenting on alyssa gast
yours looks awesome way better than me

s905910 — 2016-09-26 19:01:55 UTC

Morgan Arnurius

s905165 — 2016-09-26 19:03:17 UTC

Cooper Cross

s931396 — 2016-09-26 19:04:53 UTC

s9074661 — 2016-09-26 19:05:29 UTC

Lauren Thompson

s951652 — 2016-09-26 19:05:42 UTC

First One😱🤗
Name:Tater Tot

Brinley Murphy

s906164 — 2016-09-26 19:06:30 UTC

Grace

9141461 — 2016-09-26 19:06:39 UTC

Emma Moody

9141461 — 2016-09-26 19:07:13 UTC

attempt 1

s918812 — 2016-09-26 19:07:23 UTC

MR KORN

s904613 — 2016-09-26 19:08:11 UTC

DO NOT COMMENT

s918812 — 2016-09-26 19:08:57 UTC

Commenting on Hudson Hoffecker's

s905165 — 2016-09-26 19:09:31 UTC

I think you could make the side a little thinner by pitching harder. I also think it is a little to thick in the corners and you can also fix that by pitching harder.
By Ben Schaefer

Samantha Brody

s905439 — 2016-09-26 19:09:33 UTC

Cooper is commenting on Lauren Thompson

s931396 — 2016-09-26 19:09:46 UTC

I really like the way you smoothed out your clay piece and how you made the bottom of your clay piece pushed down well. Maybe you could make the top of your piece more in to your piece, but love the clay piece.

Emma Moody

9141461 — 2016-09-26 19:09:46 UTC

Attempt cross section

Morgan Arnurius commenting on Lauren Thompson

s905910 — 2016-09-26 19:10:01 UTC

I think the bottom of your pinch pot is a good thickness. I would suggest to pinch the corners inward

Samantha Brody

s905439 — 2016-09-26 19:10:26 UTC

Logan competing on Cooper Cross

s1013650 — 2016-09-26 19:10:41 UTC

I like your pot but, you could of tried a little harder to make it good.

commenting on Hudson

s906164 — 2016-09-26 19:10:45 UTC

You did really good on keeping the corners not to thick or too skinny something you could of done better is maybe straighten out the top a little more because its a little crumbled by maybe using more water so it will not dry out as much . Other wise good job!
by Brinley murphy

Lily Reynolds commenting on Samantha Brody

s1018370 — 2016-09-26 19:10:47 UTC

I think that you could have made the pinch pot more rounded because it looks really small i don't know if it was because it was so far away from the camera but it looks really good it was smooth and i liked it

Samantha Brody

s905439 — 2016-09-26 19:11:10 UTC

Lauren Commenting on Morgan Arnurius

s9074661 — 2016-09-26 19:11:13 UTC

Your pinch pot is very good, but maybe you could pinch less to make the walls a little thicker and try to even out the pinching

Hudson to Caden

s918812 — 2016-09-26 19:11:34 UTC

You could have pinched harder on the sides and softer in the bottom. The inside looks really smooth.

Commenting on Cooper:

907590_atstudent_knowschools_org — 2016-09-26 19:11:38 UTC

I really like it because it looks smooth, and it's thin.😐 (Also next time, try making the pot a little bigger) (btw its Ashlyn🙃)

Samantha Brody commenting on s905165

s905439 — 2016-09-26 19:12:26 UTC

I think that you did a very good job smoothing it out and getting fingerprints out. My suggestion is to maybe make the thickness even on each side. U maybe could have done this by looking at the top and on the side that was thicker, pinch a little more that way it is even. Other than that, GREAT JOB!!!!!

Grace

s1020200 — 2016-09-26 19:12:51 UTC

Grace commenting on Emma Moody

s1020200 — 2016-09-26 19:14:32 UTC

I like the shape of your pot but I think you could have made it smoother you could have added slip!But overall it was very good.

Jonathon's

s967915 — 2016-09-26 19:14:50 UTC

Baller

Cooper is commenting Samantha Brody

s931396 — 2016-09-26 19:15:37 UTC

I really like how you smoothed out your piece from the inside and made it curved, but maybe push down a little bit more so you can have some more clay to make your clay piece a little bit bigger, but great job otherwise.

Jonathon's comment on Samantha

s967915 — 2016-09-26 19:16:21 UTC

I think it is very good, but you could probably smooth the edges

Lily Reynolds

s1018370 — 2016-09-26 19:17:56 UTC

Samantha Brody commenting on Jonathan's

s905439 — 2016-09-26 19:18:44 UTC

I really like how you spread it out and made the thickness even. However, the thickness was even but it was pretty thin. You probably could have pinched with less force. Other than that, your pinch pot was very good.

Tater Tot commenting on Grace! Try to smooth the outer side with a little more force

s951652 — 2016-09-26 19:18:46 UTC

Lauren Thompson commenting on Alyssa Gast

s9074661 — 2016-09-26 19:18:54 UTC

Your pinch pot is amazing, especially for the first try, but maybe you could pinch a little harder on the bottom and the corners.

s967915 — 2016-09-26 19:18:56 UTC

Lily Reynolds commenting on s951652

s1018370 — 2016-09-26 19:19:20 UTC

I think that it could be on the inside more smooth and on the outside and on the sides more thick but i did like the size.😃

s967915 — 2016-09-26 19:19:41 UTC

s1000405 — 2016-09-26 19:20:03 UTC

Abi C. commenting on s951652

s1000405 — 2016-09-26 19:20:22 UTC

You could pinch the walls with a little less force, and you could also round it out more. I like how big it was and the general shape. In general, it is pretty good. 😊

Grace commenting on s951652

s1020200 — 2016-09-26 19:21:01 UTC

I like the shape I think the walls could be thiner made next time you could have pressed harder! I real liked how you the product turned out.

s967915 — 2016-09-26 19:21:37 UTC

s918812 — 2016-09-26 19:22:25 UTC

Lily Reynolds commenting on grace

s1018370 — 2016-09-26 19:24:23 UTC

I think that it had a good thickness and a good shape and I liked it so good job

Number 1

s1013650 — 2016-09-26 19:25:49 UTC

My pot!

DO NOT COMMENT

s904613 — 2016-09-26 19:25:55 UTC

The Cross Section1

s1013650 — 2016-09-26 19:26:39 UTC

The cross section!

Samantha Brody

s904613 — 2016-09-26 19:26:53 UTC

you could pinch harder but other than that yours is good
FROM MR KORN

Samantha commenting on Logan

s905439 — 2016-09-26 19:27:57 UTC

Logan, your pinch pot is REALLY GOOD! I loved how you made it round. My suggestion would be smooth it out better.

2016-09-27 12:43:52 UTC

Grace F. Commenting on Kate Inside

s1013121 — 2016-09-27 12:45:07 UTC

I think that you could have made the walls a little bit wider. The walls were kinda slouching because of the thin walls were thin. It was a really good first attempt pot though.

s924488 — 2016-09-27 12:45:19 UTC

this is the bad comment

s924488 — 2016-09-27 12:45:56 UTC

this is the good

commenting on 967915

2016-09-27 12:46:11 UTC

i think that the walls look great. i thing you should smooth in the inside a little more so its not too lumpy. other than that i think it looks great.

this is da good one

s924488 — 2016-09-27 12:47:34 UTC

basia commen

s933333 — 2016-09-27 12:49:12 UTC

Jacob Crossection Attempt 1

s906261 — 2016-09-27 12:50:00 UTC

basia commenting on garrett smith

s933333 — 2016-09-27 12:50:01 UTC

I like your because it is very well shaped. 😉🙏🏼🐴 wow.

Olivia Rhea Commenting on Emma Moody

s910654 — 2016-09-27 12:50:07 UTC

You did really good! You could smooth the outside a little bit more. And from the outside the walls looked a bit uneven. But the pot looked great for a first attempt! i'm exited to see what it turns out to be!

Commenting on Davis Jones

s913625 — 2016-09-27 12:50:33 UTC

I believe your pot is decent but you could pinch a little lighter on the bottom. Also you should even out the sides and top. Otherwise you have created a good piece. - Alyssa Gast

commenting logan peterson cross section

2016-09-27 12:51:21 UTC

i think it looks fantastic! but maybe just smooth out the inside a little bit. thats my suggestion other than that awesome job

liaEpayne — 2016-09-27 12:57:58 UTC

s905296 — 2016-09-27 13:00:15 UTC

my firs attemt

=] :] :} =}

s892840 — 2016-09-27 13:02:09 UTC

3rd attemp

liaEpayne — 2016-09-27 13:11:32 UTC

DO NOT COMMENT

s904613 — 2016-09-27 19:02:40 UTC

Madeline Tucker 1st attempt

s913437_student — 2016-09-27 19:04:48 UTC

This is my 3rd attempt

s931396 — 2016-09-27 19:17:05 UTC

Cooper Cross

Grace commentin

s1020200 — 2016-09-27 19:21:29 UTC

Commenting on Samantha Brody

s9074661 — 2016-09-27 19:21:43 UTC

Your pinch pot is very well rounded and you did a great job keeping the sides the same thickness, but maybe you could make the sides a little bit thinner by pinching a little bit harder, but overall great job

Madeline Tucker 1st attempt cross

s913437_student — 2016-09-27 19:23:54 UTC

s1020025 — 2016-09-27 19:24:27 UTC

Ella M Commenting on Emma Moody

s1020025 — 2016-09-27 19:27:30 UTC

Emma, it is a really good pinch pot, I liked the shape of the pot, but the walls are 2 different sizes. You could fix this by adding more clay to the thinner side. It is an amazing pinch pot-good job!
Ella Morse

1st full

2016-09-27 19:29:20 UTC

Aiden Hemsley

2016-09-28 12:12:41 UTC

cross of first by Aiden Hemsley

Commenting on Davis Jones

s905824 — 2016-09-28 12:43:43 UTC

You Could make the bottom a little more thick by not pinching to hard down.

Grace A.

s1020200 — 2016-09-28 18:44:48 UTC

Cooper is commenting on Grace

s931396 — 2016-09-28 18:55:53 UTC

Grace, I really like how you smoothed out your the edges of your pinch pot, but maybe press down a little bit harder on your pinch pot so its not that chubby.

Chloe Ayo

s906468_student — 2016-09-28 18:57:14 UTC

My first attempt cross!

Aiden Hemsley

s904613 — 2016-09-28 18:59:19 UTC

you could pinch harder on the sides and other than that it is good

Elizabeth Tikhonin attempt 1 cross

s943406_student — 2016-09-28 19:00:17 UTC

Cooper is commenting on Davis Jones

s931396 — 2016-09-28 19:00:49 UTC

I really like how you smoothed out you piece, but maybe pinch a little harder so your piece is not as chubby. By the way sry for commenting on your piece, I just to savage (:<

s927793 — 2016-09-28 19:01:19 UTC

My first attempt cross section

Chloe Ayo commenting on Madeline Tucker

s906468_student — 2016-09-28 19:01:41 UTC

Well done Maddie! I think that the bottom of your pot is very even and the perfect thickness! It looks absolutely great! A suggestion I would give to you would be to make your left side of your pot just a little bit thinner to match your right side. You could do this by pinching just a little more. Overall, it is a great creation, and you did a very good job!

DO NOT COMMENT ON MINE

s904613 — 2016-09-28 19:02:18 UTC

Madeline Tucker commenting on Elizabeth T.

s913437_student — 2016-09-28 19:05:16 UTC

Your pot looks wonderful! It is very smooth and is the perfect size. However, the walls are a bit thick and uneven. You could fix this by pinching a bit harder and a bit more evenly. But overall, you pot looks very nice and is very good for a first attempt.

Elizabeth Tikhonin commenting on Caden Hammonds

s943406_student — 2016-09-28 19:28:47 UTC

I like how the walls are smooth, but if I could make a suggestion it would be to not pinch so hard at the bottom.

Aiden Hemsley commenting Chloe Ayo

2016-09-29 18:47:06 UTC

You could push down harder on the bottom and pinch a little harder two or more fingers on the walls. I like of smooth the inside of your is. 😃

Connor Nelson 3rd attempt

2017-03-02 13:41:08 UTC