https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt Made with the strength to succeed en-us 2022-04-04 11:03:36 UTC 2022-04-04 13:06:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128421375 “Perfect opportunity”- suggests that there is a lot of opportunities if you work in the pub 
“High quality service”- suggests that the pub is very well presented and up to a high standard 
“”Someone looking for life outside big city”- suggests that the pub is a great new place of scenery for someone to experience and to learn new skills ]]> 2022-04-04 11:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128421375 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128421673 Community - connotations of closeness and familiarity, suggests that the pub is a place where people go to socialize.
Perfect - connotations to it being ideal, suggests that the pub is a good place to be.
Opportunity - connotations of chance and good fortune, suggests that the pub is a good investment.]]> 2022-04-04 11:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128421673 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128424224 the word 'high quality' suggest that is a pub of good standard and creates a picture of the pub to be worth someone's time.
the word 'perfect opportunity' suggest that it is a place that will b worth someone's time and will not disappoint them.]]> 2022-04-04 11:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128424224 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128424295 "high quality" gives connotations of the area being very good and of a high standard 
"community" suggests that everyone all works together helping each other
"opportunity" helps to give an idea of the pub being a good investment for potential owners.]]> 2022-04-04 11:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128424295 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128424704 The word choice of "high quality" helps to create a picture of the pub as it emphasises the the pub is of a good standard as "high quality" has connotations of being superior to others.                                                                                   The word choice of "perfect opportunity" helps to shown that the pub is a great place to be for new opportunities.                                       The word choice of "community" creates a sense of belonging and feeling secure.

]]> 2022-04-04 11:18:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128424704 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128427645 "perfect" word choice creates a positive image of the pub as it suggests that it is an ideal and pleasant place to spend time at. 

"close-knit" word choice suggests that there is a close bond between the locals further adding to the positive image of the pub. 

"high quality" word  choice portrays the idea that the pub is very well respected and maintained as it is able to maintain it's high standards.

]]> 2022-04-04 11:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128427645 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128430091 Word choice of “regular” suggests boring and uninteresting people, making them uninteresting to watch for a television show ]]> 2022-04-04 11:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128430091 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128431881 Ordinary - connotations to plainness and dullness, suggests that master chef might have been received badly and with little intrest.
rubbish - connotates to low quality and unappealing, suggests that the show was received with negativity.]]> 2022-04-04 11:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128431881 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128432969 "ordinary" word choice suggests that the contestants are nothing special or any different to us cooking at home, which conveys the idea of the show being pointless as we are not learning anything. 
"rubbish" suggests that some participants are very poor at what they are doing and again questions viewers as to what exactly are they gaining by tuning into the show. ]]> 2022-04-04 11:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128432969 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128433096 "rubbish" suggests that the show is not worth the viewers time and that their time would be better spent doing something else
"ordinary" suggests there is nothing intresting about the contestants, making it boring to watch.

]]> 2022-04-04 11:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128433096 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128434054 "ordinary" suggests that the people are boring and there is nothing interesting about them that would make you want to spend your time watching the show.

"rubbish" suggests that the food that is made is below standard, and that no one would want to watch the show because of the poor quality. ]]> 2022-04-04 11:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128434054 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128434409 the word 'ordinary people' suggest that anyone can do it but not everyone wins and can easily dishearten those that lose into not cooking again.

the word 'industrial warehouse' suggest an unnatural area to cook and prepare food whereas having it set in an actual kitchen would make it more realistic 

]]> 2022-04-04 11:27:21 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128434409 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128434699 The word choice of "ordinary" helps to create a sense that the shown isn't unique and plain as ordinary as connotations of being inferior and not being special.                                                                                                 The word choice of "rubbish" suggests that the food being prepared may not be of high standard compared emphasising that the show isn't special.

]]> 2022-04-04 11:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128434699 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128435035 "rubbish" suggests that the tv show would be a waste of time to watch and is not interesting
"ordinary" suggests that there is noting special about the tv guests ]]> 2022-04-04 11:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128435035 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128446517 The Semi colon of “over talk; short to respect” the use of the semi colon shows that Khan learned in lockdown and that she wants her birthday to be an intimate thing
List of “ quick, sweet and life-affirming. This list shows that khan wants to have a very easy flowing party without no distributions to make her night more enjoyable ]]> 2022-04-04 11:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128446517 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128447894 The list "keep the party small...life-affirming" emphasises the amount and variety of different things that she has learned from lockdown that she wants to be a part of her birthday.

"quick, sweet and life affirming" the list emphasises the fact that she wants her birthday to be small and intimate.]]> 2022-04-04 11:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128447894 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128449043 'I've learned to keep the party small to prevent overtalk, short to respect screen time exhaustion;' a list suggest that she is keeping her friends in mind when deciding how to celebrate her birthday so it is enjoyable]]> 2022-04-04 11:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128449043 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128449685 “And to aim to do something quick,sweet and life affirming” this shows that she wants to do something small but good for her birthday . This also highlights that she doesn’t want to have a big party . This is effective because of the writers use of list showing what khan wants from her upcoming birthday.]]> 2022-04-04 11:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128449685 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128451214 "Short to respect screen-time exhaustion"- The use of a short sentence helps to emphasise that Khan wants keep the time of watching TV low in order to prevent people feeling worn-out by the screen.      The use of a list "quick,sweet and life affirming"helps to highlight the closness Khan wants by feeling comfort in those she invites to her party.

]]> 2022-04-04 11:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128451214 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128456516 Short sentence "Like start the planning earlier" emphasises the need for a birthday party with adequate planning]]> 2022-04-04 11:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128456516 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128456517 Question 4
Parenthesis. “That I don’t want …money” 
The use of parenthesis gives us a detailed insight into the normal and realistic birthday that khan wants and to stay away from the more ‘realistic’ birthday ]]> 2022-04-04 11:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128456517 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457104 "-that i don't want a fuss or for people to spend money-" use of parenthesis emphasises that she believes that gifts or big celebrations are necessary. ]]> 2022-04-04 11:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457104 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457412 "-that I don't want a fuss or for people to spend money-" shows the range of normal birthday ideas that Khan doesn't want to have as part of hers.]]> 2022-04-04 11:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457412 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457463 minor sentence "Like starting the planing earlier." This helps to highlight the writers point of what they have learned from their past experiences. They know from this experience what they need to do to improve this year. ]]> 2022-04-04 11:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457463 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457589 the use of parenthesis '- that i don't want a fuss for people to spend money -' show us that she doesn't want a huge deal out of her birthday and just wants to have a relaxed day even though her mother will never understand]]> 2022-04-04 11:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128457589 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128458607 " - that I don't want a fuss or for people to spend money - my mother will never let it happen"
The sentence structure is effective because the use of the dash is used to elaborate on the writer's point of not wanting to have any trouble or fuss for her birthday celebration, showing her mother's very strict manner.]]> 2022-04-04 11:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128458607 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128458637 The parenthesis "-that I don't want a fuss or for people to spend money-" adds extra information to emphasise Khans need for her birthday to be low key and for it not to be a big deal

]]> 2022-04-04 11:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128458637 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128459334 "-That I don't want a fuss or for people to spend money" The use of parenthesis helps to give the extra information that Khan doesn't want the stereotypical gifts that associate with a birthday party and emphasising that Khan would rather just have the company of others.]]> 2022-04-04 11:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128459334 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128465024 2022-04-04 11:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128465024 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128465192 short sentence- 
“Online shopping has rocketed” 
The use of short sentence identifies its straight forwards and gets to the point that online shopping has proven benefits to shoppers who may not have the ability to leave there homes to access these retail facilities ]]> 2022-04-04 11:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128465192 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128465210 Long sentence "Last month...permanence" Length of sentence emphasises how it seems to be lasting for a long time, emphasising the writer's point that online shopping is going to last indefinately]]> 2022-04-04 11:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128465210 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128466976 "-when asos and boohoo bought hight street stalwarts Debenhams and Topshop-" the parenthesis shows how online shopping is taking over the way we shop by giving examples of stores which have been turned into online only sites. ]]> 2022-04-04 11:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128466976 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128467007 "Online shopping has rocketed:"

the use of sentence structure is effective because the use of a colon is always used to introduce a certain point or idea, which shows that it is used here to introduce her main point of the sudden boom in online shopping.]]> 2022-04-04 11:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128467007 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128467382 "Online shopping has rocketed: UK sales... according to Office for National Statistics" use of a colon helps to emphasise the writer's point that there has been a boom in online shopping over the last years. ]]> 2022-04-04 11:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128467382 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128468389 The use of a short sentence "Online shopping has rocketed" helps to create a sense of urgency when i comes to online shopping due to COVID-19 pandemic.]]> 2022-04-04 11:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128468389 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128468437 The colon "Online shopping has rocketed: UK's sales were up 61.4%" introduces new information to emphasise the statement that online shopping has become much more popular, creating a pause to emphasise her statement.]]> 2022-04-04 11:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128468437 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128477996 People may undo their bookings close to the booking time, causing losses due to not having time to re-book, thus having a lack of customers.
People may also not go to their bookings, again causing losses due to lack of customers]]> 2022-04-04 12:02:37 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128477996 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128478989 the writer suggest that the dash of potential customers could cause future problems.
the writer also suggests that it could cause a big loss to the businesses effected. ]]> 2022-04-04 12:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128478989 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128479714 It may cause people to call off their appointed arrival for the event.

It may also cause the said performance to no longer go ahead. ]]> 2022-04-04 12:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128479714 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128479853 their is a long waiting list for many beer gardens
worried that people don't turn up or cancel at the very last minute

]]> 2022-04-04 12:04:02 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128479853 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480131 - Frantic reservations could result in people backing out with short notice.
-People reserving a table could not appear to their reservation.]]> 2022-04-04 12:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480131 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480132 .People may change their mind in the short time they have left to amend a space
. People may decide to not turn up at all ]]> 2022-04-04 12:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480132 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480209 -people may quickly book a table because of the high interest but will no longer need or use their booking, leaving an empty table.

-people will realise too soon before their booking that they can no longer make it, so there isn't enough time for someone else to book the table.]]> 2022-04-04 12:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480209 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480276 - pubs are worried for people not to show up
-many pubs are worried for being overrun 
- mnay wory about being over booked ]]> 2022-04-04 12:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480276 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480432 The writer believes that due to the up rise in reservations being made, it could lead to the termination of these reservations. People may also cancel reservations leading to a loss of income due to the large lack of customers as new customers are unable to make a reservation in time. ]]> 2022-04-04 12:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128480432 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128483468 The writer makes it clear why the problems may be problematic as people will book tables and not even show up or even cancel last minute reducing numbers. This also shows that there is such a demand to go out people will book tables for the sake of it ]]> 2022-04-04 12:06:35 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128483468 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128488438 We learn that his death was not predicted or foreseen and that it was revealed to the public by his spouse on his social media fan page]]> 2022-04-04 12:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128488438 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128488479 the boxer had died surprisingly out of the blue 
the boxers partner had revealed the sad news of his passing via social media

]]> 2022-04-04 12:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128488479 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128488962 death made public via social media

Passed away suddenly at place of residence

]]> 2022-04-04 12:10:33 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128488962 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128489274 He passed away at a very sudden notice.

He passed in his own house, where he lived.


]]> 2022-04-04 12:10:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128489274 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128489577 We learn the death of haggler was very mysterious because it happened out of nowhere which causes confusion to the situation ]]> 2022-04-04 12:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128489577 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128490050 - he passed away out of the blue
- a close family relative publicised his death on social media on an account for admirers of his work.]]> 2022-04-04 12:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128490050 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128490309 fans were made aware of the boxers death by a social media post
The boxers death was sudden ]]> 2022-04-04 12:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128490309 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128491061 The boxing legend Marvin Hagler was discovered having passed away in his own household by his spouse. We found out about Hagler's death as his spouse let the news spread through social media.]]> 2022-04-04 12:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128491061 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128492290 - he passed without reason at his home 
-the news was released on a trustworthy social media group by his wife]]> 2022-04-04 12:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128492290 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128492323 His passing was a shock to everyone as there was no previous indication he was going to die.

His passing was first announced on an official social media account by his spouse. ]]> 2022-04-04 12:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128492323 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128492380 His passing came a shock to everyone 
He died in a very pieceful setting surrounded by all things he loved and alot of made memories ]]> 2022-04-04 12:13:07 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128492380 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128493631 We learn that haglers death was published on Facebook for everyone to see by his wife. 

We also learn that he died from his house. It was also very sudden and shocking.]]> 2022-04-04 12:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128493631 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128530142 In "Mrs Midas" and "Valentine" Duffy explores love. In "Mrs Midas" Duffy shows how a loving relationship can change. In "valentine" Duffy compares a loving relationship to an onion and shows some of the negative aspect of love. 

In both "Mrs Midas" and "the way my mother speaks" Duffy shows striking imagery. In "Mrs Midas" when she is describing Midas turning things to gold. In "the way my mother speaks" through the train journey and the imagery of the journey.]]> 2022-04-04 12:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128530142 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128530501 Heart - represents love, links to The Way my Mother Speaks, Originally, Valentine and Mrs. Midas
Trees - represents nature - links to Mrs Midas, Originally, TWMMS "browsing for the right sky"
Holding hands - represents love and connections - links to Originally, Valentine, TWMMS, Mrs Midas
Clock spiral - represents the passing of time and change - links to Originally, Mrs Midas, TWMMS, War photographer, Mrs Tilcher's Classroom, Valentine
Angel and Demon - represents morality and polarity - links to Mrs Midas, Valentine, War photographer]]> 2022-04-04 12:37:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128530501 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128531374 The devil and angel could be referring to Mr and Mrs Midas and Mr Midas is being shown as the devil as he kills anyone he touches and Mrs Midas is shown to be the angel and she is represented as innocent and unharmful. The picture with the couple holding hands could be a representation of their physical relation ship dying as he cannot touch her without killing her. The woods could be shown as the place Mr Midas was sent too in order not to harm anyone. The weird clock could be the large amount of time the couple have been separated emphasising the end of their relationship. The heart could be a signal of what their love once was but is now broken. ]]> 2022-04-04 12:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128531374 https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128574102 2022-04-04 13:00:22 UTC https://padlet.com/claire051184/iir2hdm9xy8jhcwt/wish/2128574102