Writing Process-THESIS STATEMENTS by Christina Zeltner https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs Made with a curious mind en-us 2019-10-29 17:55:01 UTC 2025-10-16 00:35:59 UTC hello@padlet.com The public should donate money to California’s first responders because, they protect us, first responders are working around the clock and we must all help our community. - Ms. Zeltner czeltner1_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404057846 https://www.cnn.com/2019/10/29/entertainment/john-cena-first-responders-donation/index.html



]]> 2019-10-29 18:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404057846 John Cena https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404508856 2019-10-30 15:15:05 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404508856 As Sea Levels Rise, So Do Ghost Forests mtvo1021_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404509201 Rising sea levels contribute to the death of trees because of  inland moving seawater, salt water seeping into soil, and the flooding of land.

https://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2019/10/08/climate/ghost-forests.html?searchResultPosition=1  ]]> 2019-10-30 15:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404509201 https://www.cbssports.com/nba/news/could-trae-youngs-historic-start-to-the-season-lead-to-an-all-star-nod-hawks-playoff-berth/ jdole1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404509845 Trae Young could lead the hawks to the playoffs because the points he puts up every night is helping them win games, passing the ball to get everyone involve, and shooting 32% from the 3 point is helping him put up points.]]> 2019-10-30 15:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404509845 https://www.cnn.com/us/live-news/california-fires-10-30-2019/index.html kramirez101_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510170 Wind gust hurricanes are ]]> 2019-10-30 15:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510170 building house that are destined to burn? mdnguyen1301_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510541 We should stop building houses near potential wildfires that are destined to burn those houses due to the increasing spread of wildfire and the hills affected by these fires will move on to burn down people's houses.
https://www.cnn.com/2019/10/29/opinions/california-wildfires-hill/index.html]]> 2019-10-30 15:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510541 Mental Health nle1152_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510652 It is time to treat mental health patients as you would treat other patients because most emergency departments are ill equipped to meet the needs of patients in the midst of a mental health crisis , the treatment of mental health often reflects the individuals weakness or poor life choices, and the care in asylums are far from the traditional health care and sometimes are treated unfairly
https://www.statnews.com/2017/05/31/mental-health-medicine/ ]]> 2019-10-30 15:17:39 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510652 Kevin Hart after a Tragic Car Accident jqpham110_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510937 We must appreciate everything in our lives before we can no longer do so, because we do not have complete control over of what may happen to/harm us, cannot predict what will occur, and don't know when our time is up.
https://www.cnn.com/2019/10/30/entertainment/kevin-hart-crash-video/index.html]]> 2019-10-30 15:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404510937 vbgonzalez1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512556 Cars are not always a good thing because, they cause accidents, they´re used for the wrong reasons, and cost a lot of money.
https://carbusters.org/2010/05/21/why-cars-are-very-bad/]]> 2019-10-30 15:20:10 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512556 Living in a noisy area increases the risk of suffering a more serious stroke tmnguyen151 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512582 While many people live in urban areas, the noise of a city may increase the risk of an ischemic  stroke by up to 30%. This is evident because patients from noisier areas present more severe strokes upon arrival in the hospital, people in noisier areas have strokes more often, and various studies that have discerned a link between noise and the factors that cause a stroke.
https://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2019/10/191029103311.htm ]]> 2019-10-30 15:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512582 zoo captivity omugica1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512608 zoos are needed to help animals because we need to help endangered animals from extinction ,they also provide medicines for the animals that they cant find in the wild , and save animals from poachers. ]]> 2019-10-30 15:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512608 James Harden & Russel Westbrook nom100 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512678  The two former NBA MVP's cannot win on the same team, because they both are ball dominant, cant play off ball, and are both in their prime.
https://bleacherreport.com/articles/2845269-a-russell-westbrook-james-harden-team-only-works-with-major-adjustments]]> 2019-10-30 15:20:21 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404512678 It's better to arrive earlier to your flight rather than arrive just in time because it's less stressful on you, you have a luxury of extra time, and its a solid way to manage your trip and make the flight. mpham110 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404513241 https://www.cnn.com/travel/article/airport-arrival-time-opinions/index.html ]]> 2019-10-30 15:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404513241 Drone strikes in Pakistan hrbooth100 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514112 Drone bombing in Pakistan causes 3% of civilian casualties as of 2008, high damage to buildings, and an increase in tension between countries. 
https://economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/defence/view-india-needs-to-expand-its-drone-strategy/articleshow/71711262.cms


]]> 2019-10-30 15:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514112 Federal and state governments should insist and assist people in California to install solar panels since it would reduce electricity bill, the excess energy would be sold back to utility provider, and is a clean energy source. jle131_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514244 https://primesolarquotes.com/california/congress.html?utm_source=google&gclid=EAIaIQobChMIgYaQi6TE5QIVx7R-Ch1eWw0hEAEYASAAEgKhafD_BwE]]> 2019-10-30 15:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514244 Dozens of wildfires have affected those living in California because, of strong wind currents, wildlife hazards, and traffic jams. https://newsela.com/read/napa-sonoma-wildfires/id/36193/ aedamasio1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514494 2019-10-30 15:22:51 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514494 https://abcnews.go.com/Business/wireStory/california-utility-sparked-deadly-2018-fire-66622322?cid=clicksource_74_null_articleroll_hed qnnguyen1131_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514810 Electrical equipment are the main reasons wild firers are destroying homes and killing people in Southern California because the lines from electric lines spark allowing the blazes to grow and since strong winds and dry grass lands help the flame grow it destroys more and grows faster making it harder to stop.

]]> 2019-10-30 15:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514810 College athletes should be paid since it will support them in profiting for their family, lower tuition costs to resolve financial issues, and serves as an incentive for athletes to proceed in playing for their school. vmphan101_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514902 https://vittana.org/14-should-college-athletes-be-paid-pros-and-cons]]> 2019-10-30 15:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514902 Is "Rapid DNA" technology ready for prime time? tcao103_3 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514962 ¨Rapid DNA" technology is not ready for prime time because of the right to privacy, companies misrepresenting their products, and the risk of contamination.
https://newsela.com/read/rapid-DNA/id/58028/ ]]> 2019-10-30 15:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404514962 Schools shoulld jayala1031_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404515104 2019-10-30 15:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404515104 Jose Altuve ibueno100 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404515167 Many people underestimated Jose Altuve because of his height, wasn't strong enough, and thought he wouldn't play for the next level. 
https://www.insidehook.com/article/sports/jose-altuves-dad-helped-build-the-hardest-working-man-in-mlb

]]> 2019-10-30 15:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404515167 Exercise should be a habit to keep because, it increases your potential life span, helps keep your thinking & judgement skills in check, and helps improve your overall mental health and mood. qmhatran1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404515627 https://kidshealth.org/en/teens/exercise-wise.html]]> 2019-10-30 15:24:30 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404515627 Shooting at a Long Beach party leaves 3 dead and 9 injured dnguyen188 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404516018 The U.S government needs to change gun laws because, too many lives have been lost at gun point, guns are easily obtainable by those who are mentally ill, and shootings happen way too often.
oh word.
https://www.cnn.com/2019/10/30/us/long-beach-california-shooting/index.html

]]> 2019-10-30 15:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404516018 Shooting at Long Beach Party jnphan1081_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404516278 The Federal government should reform gun laws because, gun violence has become more frequent, the innocent face a greater probability of death, and more families suffer the loss of loved ones.
https://www.cnn.com/2019/10/30/us/long-beach-california-shooting/index.html]]> 2019-10-30 15:25:24 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404516278 Why you shouldn't visit Sea World because, animals shouldn't be kept in tanks and be forced to perform for people, there are 24 and counting orcas that have died at Sea World, and it tears families apart with one of the orcas gone. https://www.peta.org/blog/top-five-reasons-protest-seaworld/ lgutierrez1011_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404517783 2019-10-30 15:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404517783 The Los Angeles Lakers most likely will win the championship because of their star power with Lebron James and Anthony Davis, their championship mentality, and their improved shooting and defense. mrodriguez1162_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404518194 https://fadeawayworld.net/2019/08/29/3-reasons-why-the-los-angeles-lakers-will-win-the-nba-championship/]]> 2019-10-30 15:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404518194 The death of ISIS leader Al-Baghdadi is important because it leaves the terrorist group without a leader, it weakens ISIS's force, and it could be a crucial moment in the Iraq war. dyvillarruel1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404518343 https://www.nytimes.com/2019/10/27/us/politics/isis-leader-al-baghdadi-dead.html]]> 2019-10-30 15:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404518343 The FBI should be tracking animals for animal abuse because, it will lead them to human abuse, to stop it before the abuse gets to far, and catch the people they are suspecting to being abusive. mmagallon1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404519358
https://www.popsci.com/to-reduce-violent-crime-fbi-now-tracks-animal-cruelty/ ]]> 2019-10-30 15:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404519358 Saving oceans as crucial to saving rain forests because, the phytoplankton in the ocean also provides a large percentage of oxygen that we breathe, the ocean has absorbed about 30 percent of the carbon dioxide that we've trapped from burning fossil fuels and has absorbed 93 percent of the heat we trapped. knguyen2021 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404519810 https://www.nytimes.com/2019/10/23/style/ayana-elizabeth-johnson-climate-ocean.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate]]> 2019-10-30 15:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404519810 jayala1031_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404519811 School should later because, prevent sleep deprivation, sleep is biological necessity and teens could also have after-school activities.
https://www.sleepfoundation.org/articles/backgrounder-later-school-start-times]]> 2019-10-30 15:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404519811 2 Million Could Lose Power in Shutoffs as Fire Spreads gihernandez1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404520156 Consumers in Northern and Central Califronia shouldnt be left in the dark by utility companies and be told why their power in their area is being shutoff because it creates fear and uncertainty.


]]> 2019-10-30 15:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404520156 Talking to your pet is good for your health because, it combats health issues about loneliness, lessens anxiety, and helps with social skills as well. jnguyen1951_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404521116 https://newsela.com/read/talking-to-pets-health-benefits/id/51852/]]> 2019-10-30 15:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404521116 Reports of protesters shot dead in Iraqi holy city of Karbala crreyes100 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404524149
Setting stricter laws in Iraqi is crucial because it would diminish attacks against protesters, make the public feel safe and allow the people to speak freely without fear.

https://www.cbsnews.com/news/karbala-iraq-reports-protesters-shot-dead-holy-city-disputed-today-2019-10-29/]]> 2019-10-30 15:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404524149 rbsmith100_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404538146 The California Fires are affecting peoples lives as they get bigger because, the strong winds, dry land, and no education/work. 

https://www.cnn.com/us/live-news/california-fires-10-30-2019/index.html]]> 2019-10-30 15:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404538146 vajenkins1001_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404572492 Mental health is just as important as physical because our mental health affects what we do in our daily life, it can lead to drug and alcohol use, you can live longer and happier if you have good mental health. 

https://everydaypower.com/mental-health-importance-2/

]]> 2019-10-30 16:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/404572492 Teenagers need 9 1/2 hours of sleep ysalazar101_2 https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/405530384 Sleeping for 9 hours is very important for teenagers, if they don´t get enough it can lead to sleep deprivation, which can effect a teenagers life badly. -Yuleaidi
https://www.nationwidechildrens.org/specialties/sleep-disorder-center/sleep-in-adolescents]]> 2019-11-01 16:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/czeltner1_2/ihmx6oazaefs/wish/405530384