Transitions by Cara Anderson https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t Post your original and your revision with an effective transition here. en-us 2017-11-16 01:31:32 UTC 2017-11-16 21:54:52 UTC hello@padlet.com Transitions: cartaylo https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207494430 Create a post on here that shows a piece of your praxis essay that you revised to include an effective transition. 

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 ]]> 2017-11-16 01:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207494430 cartaylo https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207918199 Original:

Revised: ]]> 2017-11-16 21:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207918199 Original: I wanted to open them up to an experience I never had. That is my goal as a literacy teacher, show a world of writing that was never offered to me. I am the facilitator. That is all. When I step into my classroom, those are the words I have to remember. https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207918261
New:]]> 2017-11-16 21:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207918261 https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207918341 Original: Part of being a teacher is figuring out how you are doing as a teacher, if your students are grasping the concepts you are teaching. 


Revised: Part of being a teacher, is figuring out how you are doing as a teacher. That is, if your students are grasping the concepts you are teaching. ]]> 2017-11-16 21:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207918341 https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207919368 Original:I will teach equity to create generations of understanding and tolerant people. I would like to create a classroom that is also an affinity space (gee) where students can create new ideas without judgement or power structure. 

Revised:  I will teach equity to create generations of understanding and tolerant people
. I will do this by creating a classroom that is also an affinity space (gee); where students can create new ideas without judgement or power structure. ]]> 2017-11-16 21:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207919368 Original:My role as a teacher of language arts is to find a way to make learning English fun, enjoyable and a reason for students to come to school. I want to engage the students and cut out the cast disconnect between the teacher/student relationship and the teacher/parent relationship. Students who have parents actively engaged in their school and home life have a higher rate of graduation and success after school then a child who’s family isn’t engaged at home and at school. https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207921222 New: My role as a teacher of language arts is to find a way to make learning English fun, enjoyable as well as a reason for the students to come to school.  In order to cut out disconnect between the teacher/student relationship and the teacher/parent relationship, I will have an actively engaged classroom. My classroom door will always be open and parents will be welcome to stop in or help.  Students who have parents actively engaged in their school life have a higher rate of graduation success then a child whose family is not engaged at their child’s school. ]]> 2017-11-16 21:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/cartaylo/ih71jwmgol5t/wish/207921222