https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu Brainstorm at least 3 strengths and 3 areas for improvement (point to specific page numbers and sections of the essays) en-us 2022-04-06 18:36:45 UTC 2022-04-07 03:36:46 UTC hello@padlet.com agomez0925 https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133223560 Strengths: 
1. Follows instructions and addresses questions directly
2. Makes it personal by including anecdotes about her life, growing up, culture etc. 
3. 

Areas for Improvement: 
1. 
2. 
3.

]]> 2022-04-06 18:38:16 UTC https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133223560 https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133851438 Strengths
1. The intro directly addresses the prompt with detail. 
2. MAP – good specific example
3. The writer shows passion for their students. 
Improvements
1. The intro is a bit dry. A little bit of personal perspective and/or thoughts can be included in order to make it human-like, rather than a simple description of tasks.
2. Addresses the prompt with detail, however, it would be nice to include the motivation – the reason why the writer chose specific research topics and methods, etc.
3. The writer is a bit vague about how they applied the research to help the students.]]> 2022-04-07 03:16:03 UTC https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133851438 camilapanozochumacero36 https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133857857 Strengths: 
1. There was a clear cause-and-effect way of writing that allowed for her talents to be displayed.
2. Provides appropriate context for the way she answers the questions asked.
3. Illustrates good examples of how she takes initiative in the work place.

Areas for Improvement: 
1. Keep an eye out and be cautious of using run-on sentences.
2. Stray from using "and" too frequently.
3. Be more specific, in regards to the anecdotes used and how they influenced her professional development.

]]> 2022-04-07 03:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133857857 https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133862475 Strengths: 
1.  Answered the question very eloquently and added examples to back up her statements (Page 1, Section 1)

2.  Includes personal experience as a first-generation graduate ( Page 2/3, Sentence 2)

3.  Including past experiences of activists who've inspired her teaching to her students (Section 3, Last sentence)

Areas for Improvement:
1.  Include the meaning of the abbreviations (KIPP LA, ELA) Section 1

2.   The author needs to elaborate more on how she is spreading awareness and transparency (Section 4, last sentence)

3.  Add more detail in how her framework will be implemented (Section 2)]]> 2022-04-07 03:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/agomez0925/ifqhnfphmsm97dfu/wish/2133862475