Revise your writing based on the peer evaluation and Miss Chen's comment.

(根据peer-evaluation和Miss Chen 给出的评价，重新修改作文。)

Take a picture about your writing and upload to this Padlet.

（把你的作文拍照上传在这个平台上。）

Give three comments to your classmates' writing.

(for example Miss Chen--> comments on 1. Cindy 2. David 3. 以若)

• Comment on one area that need to be improved.

• and three areas in which the student did well.

(看完大家上传的作文后，评论三个不同的同学的作品, 要评论一个需要提升的部分和三个这个同学做得好的地方)