https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j Overall Score & Rationale for Evidence & Commentary Score en-us 2021-01-11 20:17:21 UTC 2021-01-15 18:53:46 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f9d0.png karen_savella https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1076092321 Evid. & Commentary Score: ____
There are textual references, but they are limited.]]> 2021-01-11 20:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1076092321 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490448 2021-01-15 18:44:09 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490448 htischner22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490486 Evidence and commentary score:2
Makes textural references but is very simple. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:10 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490486 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490676 Evidence & Commentary Score: 1
Limited textual references and little to no commentary that only summarizes.]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:12 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490676 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490784 +3 for evidence/commentary
there are texual references "sword breaking a featherbed", but the commentary is simple.
+1 for thesis]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092490784 sdoody22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491014 Evidence/Commentary Score: 1
Provides little commentary.]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491014 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491193 The commentary definitely explains the relationship between the evidence and thesis, somewhat limited]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491193 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491495 Evid. & Commentary Score: 3
Textual evidence is there but is simple]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:23 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491495 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491630 Overall Score: 2
Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Provides textual references to defend thesis, but limited commentary.

]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:24 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491630 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491868 Evid. & commentary score: 3
Makes textual references but is limited and incomplete

]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491868 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491966 evidence/commentary: 3
explains relationship between evidence and thesis]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092491966 asmith22a https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092492640 Evidence and commentary-2
In the AAA essay there is good evidence but it is lacking analysis. This person uses a piece of evidence from the excerpt but then there commentary is simple, like they say "He hopes that the reader will realize that the king is only human and makes mistakes just like all mankind" to explain both pieces of evidence. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092492640 rschubert22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092495909 Evidence- 2
makes textual references to defend thesis, but commentary is simple]]> 2021-01-15 18:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092495909 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092497013 Evidence & Commentary Score: 2
The evidence and commentary seems to misunderstand passage, and is often vague.]]> 2021-01-15 18:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092497013 sdoody22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092497902 Evidence/Commentary Score: 1
Summarizes, provides little commentary.]]> 2021-01-15 18:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092497902 htischner22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092499128
Evidence and Commentary Score: 3
Makes textural evidence that supports thesis and ties it to the thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092499128 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092500105 +2 textual evidence doesnt connect back to the thesis
+1 for thesis]]> 2021-01-15 18:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092500105 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092501095 Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Simple commentary to support textual references. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092501095 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092501374 +1 for thesis
+2 since there are textual references to defend commentary but commentary is simple.]]> 2021-01-15 18:46:32 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092501374 sdoody22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092502764 Evidence/Commentary Score: 3
Commentary explains relationship between evidence and thesis, is a little limited. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:46:50 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092502764 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092503517 Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Commentary is vague and doesn't always connect to evidence. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092503517 rschubert22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092504069 evidence- 1
vague reference to text, little to no commentary]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092504069 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092504281 +4 connects to thesis, great commentary
+1 thesis
+1 sophistication]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:11 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092504281 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092504675 +2 There was textual evidence ]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092504675 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092505391 Thesis: 1
Evidence/Commentary: 1
provides vague reference to text]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092505391 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092506124 +1 for thesis
+4 for evidence, consistent and explicit in explaining relationship
+1 for sophistication, complex understanding of the rhetorical situation]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092506124 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092506292 Evidence & Commentary Score: 5
Expresses a good understanding with great examples from the text that support the thesis. It also exhibits consistent evidence that explains the relationship between the thesis and evidence.]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092506292 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092507220 +3 evidence connects to thesis, commentary is good
+1 thesis
+1 sophistication]]> 2021-01-15 18:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092507220 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092507813 Evidence and Commentary Score: 4
Commentary consistently demonstrates the textual reference connection to thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092507813 rschubert22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092507847 evidence- 4
defends thesis, consistently explains textual evidence very well]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092507847 htischner22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092508564 Evidence and Commentary Score: 4
Textural evidence defends thesis and consistently explains the relationship to thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092508564 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092509048 thesis: 1
evidence/commentary: 4
Sophistication: 1
demonstrates complex understanding of rhetorical situation]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092509048 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092509283 Evidence and Commentary Score: 3
Good use of evidence to support thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092509283 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092510028 +1 for thesis
+2 for defending thesis with textual references, but commentary is simple]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:29 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092510028 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092510667 +4 was very well done and had textual evidence ]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092510667 rschubert22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092511173 evidence- 2
simple commentary]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092511173 sdoody22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092511646 Evidence/Commentary Score: 2
Commentary is simple, evidence is provided to defend thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092511646 asmith22a https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092512866 Thesis: 1
Evidence and commentary:3
All evidence seems to refer back to thesis but analysis and use of sophisticated language is lacking ]]> 2021-01-15 18:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092512866 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092513341 Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
simple commentary, disconnect between textual references. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:49:14 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092513341 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092513717 evidence/commentary 1
provides little commentary]]> 2021-01-15 18:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092513717 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092514069 Evidence and Commentary Score: 3
Was able to provide good evidence however commentary was lacking to fully connect back to thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092514069 htischner22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092514678 Makes textural references to defend thesis and explains the relationship to the thesis. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092514678 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092514896 +3 Has textual support to back up the claims]]> 2021-01-15 18:49:36 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092514896 asmith22a https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092519795 thesis:1
Evidence and commentary:4
Sophistication:1 
Amazing essay]]> 2021-01-15 18:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092519795 asmith22a https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092524081 2021-01-15 18:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092524081 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092525859 Evidence & Commentary Score: 1
Little to no commentary along with the quotations used that are not well developed.]]> 2021-01-15 18:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092525859 asmith22a https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092528177 Thesis:1
Evidence and commentary:3
good thesis, great evidence but lacks sophistication]]> 2021-01-15 18:52:32 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/id54w773wlv7139j/wish/1092528177