Child Zero - Draft Two Scene Cards by Nathan Miller https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r en-us 2019-03-05 19:45:25 UTC 2025-11-16 21:51:20 UTC hello@padlet.com ACT 1: Picking dresses to go to the event. Evie trying to solve a really hard theory. Chloe learning a rap. Mum coming in and out. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338107736 Mum is representative of uptight family. We need to root for Chloe from the beginning, make her fun + also more cool.]]> 2019-03-05 19:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338107736 Lucy arrives, in her dress, her and Chloe go for a smoke. Chloe starts throwing up, which is really shocking. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338107790 Set themes of perfectionism/individualism/neoliberalism.]]> 2019-03-05 19:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338107790 Doctor gets brought over to the house. Sense that he is hiding something from her. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108175 2019-03-05 19:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108175 Loads of reporters outside the theatre. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108393 2019-03-05 19:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108393 When he's escaping, he runs head first into Chloe. She tries to talk but he's disparaging. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108500 2019-03-05 19:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108500 ACT 2: Evie is with the tutor, a spindly math professor. She gets so frustrated she hits him. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108558 2019-03-05 19:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108558 Father talking to doctor, the truth is worse than we realised. Doctor promises not tell her. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108641 2019-03-05 19:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108641 Raises issue with family and friends at sunday brunch. Mini-throw up into napkin - it's serious I need to see doctor. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108718 Remove the boring dialogue. Make clear conflicts. Chloe vs. dad. And lucy trying to get with gabriel. ]]> 2019-03-05 19:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108718 Evie is asked why acting this way. She starts to atone but then is really rude. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108820 2019-03-05 19:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108820 Doctor decides to tell her. But father will know he betrayed if she says. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108902 2019-03-05 19:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338108902 She uses contacts to find actor. (fuck it) nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109081 2019-03-05 19:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109081 Her father checking in on Roberta. Add more urgency to research. + She is trying to restart affair. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109176 Make sure Susie is non GM.]]> 2019-03-05 19:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109176 He knows who she is. But now she has some information (her illness) which could destroy company. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109293 2019-03-05 19:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109293 She leaves date night with gabriel to meet actor. Gabriel calls Lucy. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109472 2019-03-05 19:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109472 Test to see if she’s serious. She doesnt die. (include teaser) Set in pub. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109574 2019-03-05 19:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338109574 Evie apologises to tutor. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110291 2019-03-05 19:50:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110291 Meeting, invaded by the police. Matt escapes, leaving her. Which should be set in pub. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110420 2019-03-05 19:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110420 ACT 3: Father talking to Mother, Chloe still hasn’t been home. Gabriel and Lucy at his house, they are called by Chloe’s parents. Mother realises that they're together late... nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110499 2019-03-05 19:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110499 She is interrogated, but doesn’t budge. Given a chance to return to her world and betray them. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110581 2019-03-05 19:50:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110581 With the board, it’s serious, we need to accelerate plan subdue. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110776 2019-03-05 19:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110776 Turns out to be a test, which she passes. (officer radcliffe is in on it) nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110885 2019-03-05 19:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110885 Chloe returns, where her parents are waiting. Dad confronts where she has been. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110992 2019-03-05 19:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338110992 Goes to room. Dad gets a hint of where she's been (maybe he had her followed?) nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338111105 2019-03-05 19:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/338111105 Intro Party. Intro Gabriel. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342180838 2019-03-17 21:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342180838 Disturbance during father's speech. He should mention GM aperitifs. Matt more charismatic + non GM!. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342181158 2019-03-17 21:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342181158 Chloe gets attacked when she arrives at the theatre late. Matt helps her. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342181204 2019-03-17 21:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342181204 Evie self harming. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342183468 2019-03-17 22:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342183468 Officer Radcliffe gets a text. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342185290 2019-03-17 22:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/342185290 Gabriel and Lucy sit next to each other at a table. She innocently teases out his feelings for Chloe. nathanmiller64 https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/343410486 2019-03-20 16:06:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nathanmiller64/id2wz361lq0r/wish/343410486