https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-09 13:48:23 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011414 It was really creative! The only thing would be make the voice clearer

]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011414 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011422 I really like the creative aspect of this project. A rap video is very creative and it was excellently executed. The only polish I would suggest it to slightly raise the volume on your voice to hear your voice better.]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011422 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011437 Praise: good speaking and nice song
Polish: more eye contact]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011437 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011464 I like that he used rapping to get across his message. It would have been better if you had different people, not only yourself.]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011464 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011471 Praise : The vibes and the background are really cool the lyrics are also really good
Polish : Could flow little better.]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011471 morenosc000 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011473 Praise: great job with your creativity!
Polish: your sound quality could be fixed with a mic]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011473 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011507 Praise: Good lyrics! It had a good storyline!
Polish: There could be a better flow tranisioning from the dad to the grandpa]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011507 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011524 Polish: Add someone with you in the video.
Praise: I love the music and they lyrics that he had. ]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011524 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011550 The video was great and the backdrop you added made it colorful. I think you should’ve been a little louder when singing. The costumes where well made and creative ]]> 2018-02-09 13:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011550 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011650 Praise: The background lighting made the room look groovy like the song beat.
Polish: The background music is really nice and groovy]]> 2018-02-09 13:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011650 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011660 I really liked the presentation. It was interesting to watch and I liked the beat. ]]> 2018-02-09 13:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011660 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011718 Praise: the lyrics were good
Polish: the flow could be a bit better ]]> 2018-02-09 13:53:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011718 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011821 Praise: I thought his idea was really creative and he executed in a good, funny way. 
Polish: I would just say for his voice to be a little more clear. ]]> 2018-02-09 13:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011821 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011908 I like how he has a musical video visualizing how a grandparent would react. Also the lyrics were good. 
Something to polish would be talk clear.

]]> 2018-02-09 13:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230011908 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230012045 Praise: The video is very creative, I like how he uses a stereotypical mentality from someone who grew up in time where transgender people weren't as known about as today. 

Polish: The only thing I would ask you to change is to speak a bit louder.]]> 2018-02-09 13:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230012045 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230014059 You’re a lyrical genius!!! lolol.... the only thing I would change is your actual stage presence.]]> 2018-02-09 13:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230014059 https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230022005 I absolutely love your creativity , with the song, it would of been cool if you had the lyrics as substitis so we could better understand what was happening :).]]> 2018-02-09 14:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/iccyyb6fgblh/wish/230022005