https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5 Write your thoughts on the crit! en-us 2022-02-16 18:07:03 UTC 2022-02-17 09:59:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3a8.png https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052719244 Fun]]> 2022-02-17 08:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052719244 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052719583 hey]]> 2022-02-17 08:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052719583 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052719862 Hi]]> 2022-02-17 08:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052719862 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052721217 👌]]> 2022-02-17 08:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052721217 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052722031 Hi]]> 2022-02-17 08:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052722031 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052722112 hi]]> 2022-02-17 08:34:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052722112 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052723405 :))]]> 2022-02-17 08:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052723405 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052726493 Could the money have been made out of ceramics/clay - not sure it works with the paper money (colour etc).]]> 2022-02-17 08:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052726493 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052727191 Love the sculpting element- Pollution element? Plastics? Nets? First hand observation of octopi? Is there an issue with sea pollution in Russia? ]]> 2022-02-17 08:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052727191 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052730502 Could you add more sea elements/coral in relation to Courtney Mattheson? ]]> 2022-02-17 08:39:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052730502 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052731538 Good context
Great influences to the piece 
Taking into account different techniques 
Lots of artists ]]> 2022-02-17 08:40:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052731538 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052731818 Intelligent- money.
Connect to pervious work( consumption)
Money box octopus can use for real
Study Artist techniques and use to sculpture
Decent Research for artist
Different money from around the world]]> 2022-02-17 08:40:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052731818 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052732478 I love the way it’s sculpted, and the textures are lovely. It could use some more water elements maybe?]]> 2022-02-17 08:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052732478 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052732907 Money grabber 
I really like the ideas behind the sculpture and reasons why she chose an octopus ]]> 2022-02-17 08:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052732907 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052733208 money grabber 
capitalist/consumerist impacts on wildlife lots of movement created tentacles - functioning moneybox

]]> 2022-02-17 08:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052733208 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052734194 I really like what you did, I think it’s really cool how all the tentacles coil in different ways. Overall it looks amazing]]> 2022-02-17 08:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052734194 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052738800 Your refinement from box project in October is much improved- does it have a Title? ]]> 2022-02-17 08:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052738800 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052741025 Good experimentation
Artist references are good 
Colour psychology 😆]]> 2022-02-17 08:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052741025 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052741327 love the presentation, and how the colours change with the different colours of LEDs underneath, I think it’s a great continuation of her box project :)]]> 2022-02-17 08:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052741327 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052741389 Harriet did you purposely leave the led lights underneath visible?]]> 2022-02-17 08:46:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052741389 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052742263 harriet light box
pretty clours and dimension within the resin
experiment with changing led colours?

]]> 2022-02-17 08:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052742263 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052742472 really good, perhaps have it in a darker room? (rose)]]> 2022-02-17 08:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052742472 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052743737 Use a black acrylic to enhance to resin balls ]]> 2022-02-17 08:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052743737 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052744855 I like how they are all so different from each other. I’d really would’ve liked to hear you explain more on the sensory factor of it and how that maybe is relevant to you]]> 2022-02-17 08:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052744855 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052745404 Led light look good can change LED light
The work look so clean and look minimal
Relate to previous work (light, color)


]]> 2022-02-17 08:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052745404 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052750039 Have you read Angela Carter’s fairytale re-tellings? The Bloody Chamber and her book of fairytales.]]> 2022-02-17 08:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052750039 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052751269 i love the idea, even though mia didn’t have the time to do the animation the idea was very creative, i also appreciate mia sticking with her very creepy concept, as well as staying with her fairytale theme. and a love how different the characters look, they have different hair outfits and faces which is lovely, why did you chose snow white though? ]]> 2022-02-17 08:52:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052751269 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052751525 I love the aesthetic of the dolls. They are made beautifully with so much detail. I’m really excited to see the something done with them!]]> 2022-02-17 08:52:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052751525 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052752683 Lots of influences for characters 
Backgrounds are simple but effective because it keeps the focus on the figures
Really creepy but cool 👍👍
Wire arms add to the surreal-ness


]]> 2022-02-17 08:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052752683 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052752724 could incorporate parts of your box project to add a 3D aspect to the setting? eg sticks (rose) ]]> 2022-02-17 08:53:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052752724 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052753522 I think there are some brilliant details on there, the dry brushing technique on the little knight is a really nice touch. I feel like the arms would be great if they were a little thicker. The garments are very cute, I like them a lot]]> 2022-02-17 08:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052753522 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052755230 The mask look creepy
The background look so good
The hair look great]]> 2022-02-17 08:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052755230 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052756141 Creepy & wonderful love the hair and costume - consider the twist at the end ? music ? Narration ? Storyboard it… ]]> 2022-02-17 08:55:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052756141 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052757198 The dolls are well constructed, how will you use stop motion to emphasise the creepy/ scary theme]]> 2022-02-17 08:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052757198 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052760169 That mitred frame is spectacular… ]]> 2022-02-17 08:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052760169 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052762791 Love the connection with crosses-lives-Rachael whiteread library-holocaust ]]> 2022-02-17 09:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052762791 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052763235 if you’re looking at religious projections look at Bill Viola ]]> 2022-02-17 09:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052763235 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052763400 I like the simplicity of it. It’s also an unusual size which makes it stand out more. What would you paint on the frame? Would it ruin the simplicity perhaps?]]> 2022-02-17 09:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052763400 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052764332 1,260 crosses , me like 👍 ]]> 2022-02-17 09:01:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052764332 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052764459 i like how the crosses interchange between inverted and sticking out??? I also actually like the all white frame. And I like how the plates themselves aren’t stuck on particularly straight. What does the quote mean to you and why did you chose it? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052764459 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765323 The repetition of the same cast has a really powerful effect. What is the meaning behind the projection?]]> 2022-02-17 09:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765323 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765454 Paint a large version of the cross you used over the whole thing ]]> 2022-02-17 09:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765454 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765460 Eleanor 
is there a significance to the number of the of tiles?
I like the clean colour used and the texture created by the tiles ]]> 2022-02-17 09:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765460 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765820 Eleanor K
Are the plates lined up properly. Gaps are all different ]]> 2022-02-17 09:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052765820 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052766456 I think it is very powerful, would you mount it on a wall? (rose)]]> 2022-02-17 09:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052766456 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052766996 I don’t think the frame really needs to be painted, I think it would be cool if different images would be projected on it - coloured ones as well maybe. I really like how personal it is through the fact that you used your own necklace.]]> 2022-02-17 09:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052766996 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052769688 Can we paint like pixel picture for each cross.]]> 2022-02-17 09:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052769688 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052770763 Bill viola - Nantes triptych- still image slides ]]> 2022-02-17 09:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052770763 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052772192 Excellent research well done! ]]> 2022-02-17 09:06:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052772192 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052774229 I’m unsure of the shape of the underlying landscape ]]> 2022-02-17 09:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052774229 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052775642 Bit of a long title]]> 2022-02-17 09:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052775642 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052776563 Like the refinement related to previous work well done getting there! ]]> 2022-02-17 09:08:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052776563 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052777368 Can the hand wearing watch aswell?]]> 2022-02-17 09:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052777368 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052777845 I like the idea of it painted white and red. ]]> 2022-02-17 09:09:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052777845 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052777980 The use of dead leaves adds to the effect of death and rotting.]]> 2022-02-17 09:09:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052777980 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052778159 Are all the hot glue strings in purpose and do they represent anything, they remind me of spiderwebs? 
I like that you used naturally dry leaves, it adds a sense of fragility too ]]> 2022-02-17 09:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052778159 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052779047 Very well thought out. And Johns clocks are amazing, as well as a cool title. The idea with the white and red sounds really good, i think distinguishing the hand and face in red would be a good idea.]]> 2022-02-17 09:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052779047 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052780309 Is the hand ment to look like black lives matter]]> 2022-02-17 09:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052780309 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052780765 I think making the hand and face red would  remove them too much from the overall landscape - would it not be better to keep it the same as the rest and have the stand out colour somewhere else ? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:11:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052780765 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052782102 John 
liked themes of circle of life/time running out and the height created by the arm/branch 
Good texture 



]]> 2022-02-17 09:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052782102 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052785288 Are you going to do anything with the clock? I feel like if they’re wax they are more difficult to paint, but the colour they are the clock face is really hard to read or just see the numbers]]> 2022-02-17 09:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052785288 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052785791 Rosa de jong - explore the model-making potential more - moss, sponge, undulating landscape make found objects part of the landscape ]]> 2022-02-17 09:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052785791 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052789381 Are the hand and face supposed to be connected because they look like very separate entities because the if the hand is on the left side of the face it should be a left hand?]]> 2022-02-17 09:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052789381 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052789419 Sound element? Found sound - use garage band ]]> 2022-02-17 09:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052789419 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052791468 Fading like the connection to erosion! Could still have more of colour element ]]> 2022-02-17 09:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052791468 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052792407 To Tom,

Could u have added a background? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052792407 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052793317 I like the fading]]> 2022-02-17 09:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052793317 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052793647 Tom 
i like the detail and realism - 3d affect and shadows 
maybe a background and more colour? 

]]> 2022-02-17 09:19:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052793647 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052794536 Would’ve been good to have the whole thing in colour or half coloured and half black and white - but it also looks really cool and works well with the idea that life is running out. 
We’re you thinking of colouring the background or leaving it white?]]> 2022-02-17 09:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052794536 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052794845 Experiment with scale ]]> 2022-02-17 09:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052794845 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052795933 We’ll drawn.
 you could use the negative space to increase the impact of the image?]]> 2022-02-17 09:21:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052795933 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052796110 Tom - strongly suggest the colour is more intense and then fades as it progresses down the spring.]]> 2022-02-17 09:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052796110 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052797594 I really like this, maybe fade it a bit more towards the bottom, it seems to cut off quite suddenly (rose)]]> 2022-02-17 09:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052797594 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052800180 You could you drawing to you advantage to ‘repeat draw’ - similar to the impact of Gormley’s ‘repeat men’ - if you made one small man and then repeatedly drew it ? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052800180 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052804171 Drawing - in sketchbook must be same quality. Refer to the coloured pencil artist I showed you ]]> 2022-02-17 09:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052804171 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052806361 Certainly one of the strangest pieces I’ve ever seen! Love the connections - genuinely creative what artists are you relating this to? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:27:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052806361 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052806631 Very inventive 
Love the sarcophagus elements on the wood 
Will it be presented on a board on the wall or on the floor?

]]> 2022-02-17 09:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052806631 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052809492 Body and brain- connections with Egyptian art in sketchbook plenty of drawings in full colour of this ]]> 2022-02-17 09:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052809492 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052810501 I think the detail of the story line is beautiful. The brain sculpture has so much detail and despite it exploding you made it work. Do the hieroglyphics at the top have a meaning? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:30:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052810501 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052810949 kidin 
I like the scale and the detailed painting/story
what colour will the background/ board be?

]]> 2022-02-17 09:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052810949 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052811398 How and why brains in art]]> 2022-02-17 09:30:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052811398 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052811600 The tiny drawing on the wooden pieces are great, i also like the size of the project, and how Kidin worked with the fact that the brain exploded and managed to find a way to make it work. ]]> 2022-02-17 09:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052811600 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052812690 I like the narrative that runs along the beam- but wonder how the overall aesthetic is going to work - how will you ‘polish’ the rest of the sculpture ?]]> 2022-02-17 09:31:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052812690 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052819898 How are you going to make this personal and meaningful? How can you relate the imagery to yourself (images in the mind’s eye?) ]]> 2022-02-17 09:36:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052819898 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052821391 Find artists who’s style and aesthetic you like. What materials do they use ? What about the way it looks so you like? Could you use the same process and techniques as them?]]> 2022-02-17 09:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052821391 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052824277 You need high quality colour studies and drawings of Egyptian tombs/sarcophagi Tutankhamen etc - and you must say why important to you? Should you be relating to Thai temple structure/religion? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052824277 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052825293 From John

Remember how you did you box project, looking through a spy hole and seeing what’s inside, possibly look at doing that with a pyramid instead, looking through a pyramid and looking at Egyptian history ? Just a thought ]]> 2022-02-17 09:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052825293 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052826574 Zoe is there a reason there are five men and only four women?]]> 2022-02-17 09:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052826574 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052827095 Great exploration and refinement. Love the linear element- gradient? We’re all on a spectrum? Should there be everything from purple dark/light blue pink/red ? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052827095 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052827280 Why the orange one is not in the middle
Do u miss one of girl resin.]]> 2022-02-17 09:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052827280 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052828141 I wonder how much depicting men as blue and women as pink actually goes to subverting the stereotype ? Are you playing into it slightly? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052828141 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052828881 zoe
very clean and impactful appearance from use of acrylic - good personal connection and thought provoking 

]]> 2022-02-17 09:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052828881 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052829029 From John

Love it but could u do it on a larger scale, possibly look at making it more 3d or making curtain body parts ? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052829029 rrs5 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052829493 Would you maybe display it above a toilet door? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052829493 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052830174 I very like the reason why there are more boys ]]> 2022-02-17 09:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052830174 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052830312 Great topic and I love how it relates to Zoe personally. overall it’s great :)]]> 2022-02-17 09:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052830312 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052830760 Zoe is there a reason why the women and men have been separated?]]> 2022-02-17 09:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052830760 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052833325 Why the first boy don’t have head like other]]> 2022-02-17 09:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052833325 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052839394 Same could for all E.g green or purple?]]> 2022-02-17 09:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052839394 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052841273 Extension - scale - life size prints? Cutouts? (Look at lubaina himid) explore prints more! Look at saturation of colour and gradation/spectrum ]]> 2022-02-17 09:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052841273 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052842368 Anachronistic! Love it ]]> 2022-02-17 09:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052842368 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052842665 Title…..]]> 2022-02-17 09:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052842665 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052843308 How is this personal and meaningful for you? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052843308 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052843950 The handling of light and chiaroscuro is great ! ]]> 2022-02-17 09:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052843950 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052845817 Presence of recurring death element ]]> 2022-02-17 09:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052845817 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052845943 Paul Gauguin also paints himself in the background of his paintings and they usually look quite sinister which ties in with the people in the background being led to death.]]> 2022-02-17 09:52:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052845943 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052846228 I like the use of yellow in the background ]]> 2022-02-17 09:52:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052846228 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052846692 Rose
I live the way the candelight reflects on the figures and darker figures surrounding main characters 
the fabric of the dress has a lot of movement 


]]> 2022-02-17 09:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052846692 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052847150 i love the silhouettes in the back, and how dark and stylised the painting is. ]]> 2022-02-17 09:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052847150 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052847455 The painting is amazing. I love how you worked with light]]> 2022-02-17 09:53:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052847455 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052847857 Contemporary mask - wearing ? ]]> 2022-02-17 09:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052847857 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052848517 The plague ]]> 2022-02-17 09:53:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052848517 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052848522 I love the dark and light aspects and the ‘history of illness’ ]]> 2022-02-17 09:53:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052848522 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052850795 Staring death in the face]]> 2022-02-17 09:55:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052850795 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052850806 Did you edit the colour digitally before painting it because it’s for example the blanket is quite different? I quite like how the painting is slightly stylised and the colours aren’t always fully blended.
The people in the background are a bit confusing, they look like they’re dancing around a fire and you can’t tell if they are celebrating or mourning]]> 2022-02-17 09:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052850806 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052851992 Stunning treatment of chiaroscuro- write about this in your sketchbook ]]> 2022-02-17 09:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052851992 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052853294 Orlando 
Good colour and form especially on the skull 
man in the background refine face or is it intentional?

]]> 2022-02-17 09:56:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052853294 lac10 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052854066 Some scale issues with background figure]]> 2022-02-17 09:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052854066 haspiror05 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052854130 I like the title. It’s a great painting, but I don’t see the theme of death clearly enough. I interpreted it as the pressure put on pupils fo be the best and the father looking over him, increasing that pressure and ignoring the son’s suffering ]]> 2022-02-17 09:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052854130 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052854206 Very linear and great use of tone and depth. 
I like the mixture of still life and real life. 

]]> 2022-02-17 09:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052854206 18bhumithadadechl https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052856478 Who is the model for painting]]> 2022-02-17 09:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052856478 https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052857394 Looks like the boy reading the letter has read the news of a close relative whom has died at war]]> 2022-02-17 09:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lac10/ia2y21indwhbcxo5/wish/2052857394