https://padlet.com/jocelyn_robles/i9x4ovdyf0rt Jocelyn Robles, #9, 2nd period en-us 2016-11-17 16:02:32 UTC 2024-08-08 12:04:20 UTC hello@padlet.com jocelyn_robles https://padlet.com/jocelyn_robles/i9x4ovdyf0rt/wish/138469571 As the Spirit Bear is destroying Cole he grunts and tries to move his hopeless body out of the Spirt Bear's claws and mouth as theres seagulls squawking in the distance in the dark gloomy sky.

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