Write about changes of a place. You should write at least 100 words. by Oanh Lưu Tú

Write about changes of a place. You should write at least 100 words. by Oanh Lưu Tú https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h Think a place that you like or have been to and make comparisons between now and before en-us 2021-11-05 08:29:05 UTC 2026-01-19 18:24:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f60d.png Marking criteria oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869485467 Did you use past tenses and present tenses?
How many words have you written?
How much has the place changed?
Are the changes positive or negative?
Did you use comparisons to describe the changes? ]]> 2021-11-05 08:34:13 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869485467 First draft oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869501890 My favorite place is my hometown. It's a beautiful place. The last time I went to there was 3 months ago. The first entrance of my village still had cement on it. My aunt house was still a really old, and my neighbor's house was still in construction. Yesterday I went to my hometown, I saw that now my neighbor's house is nearly completed. The first entrance of my village is now completed. My aunt's house is now under construction with a much more bigger house. There may have some awkward changes, but I still like my hometown.]]> 2021-11-05 08:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869501890 First draft baoquyenhn245 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869502219 I love my house and over the years it has changed in many things. For example, the house that I’m used to is now way more beautiful and more convenient. There’s now a wall separating mine and my parents’ room. The living room is brighter than before because of the new lights. Back then the living room seemed dead. And now it looks like an actual living place. The bathroom isn’t as disgusting as before and it’s cleaner now. The difference isn’t very big but I like the house more now. I like it the way that it is now.

]]> 2021-11-05 08:47:18 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869502219 First draft minhnguyenducvt https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869507317 It has been 5 months since I came to Thaou. Yesterday, I went to Thaou and there were so many changes. They made a big improvement by building wind turbines but it makes the town as not pleasant as before. The turbines are noisy and farmers cannot work as efficiently as they used to. Due to Covid, the street is not as narrow as before. Houses are also built with cement instead of traditional communal house and people start to use lots of motorbikes makes the air highly polluted. All of this make an adverse effect on this small town and I don’t like it as before

]]> 2021-11-05 08:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869507317 First draft https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869508617 Ha Noi has changed really much in the past years because of the population, the pollution there is in Ha Noi. Many years ago, Ha Noi was a country with nearly no polution and the population wasn't really that much, but many years later, they invented many different transports like motobikes, cars, and buses, the worst thing is that the population grew really quick since then. But the good thing about it is that the

civilization of Vietnam grew a lot, the best is probably technology. I still think living long ago is better than now. I hope the population will grow slower and the polution will be less.

]]> 2021-11-05 08:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869508617 First draft honganh6c1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869509084 One of my favorite places ever is the countryside. The last time I went there was about 6 months ago. Now, the road has been rebuilt with concrete instead of stone which makes it easier to go through and looks better. Now every house in the street has become more modern and beautiful than it is before. There are also random chairs around the road, which means people can sit down and relax easily. But unfortunately, now there are fewer trees and plants than there is before/ there used to be.]]> 2021-11-05 08:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869509084 2nd draft baoquyenhn245 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869509534 I love my house and over the years it has changed in a few things. For example, I remembered that it was very inconvenient to do an online class without interruptions from family members. Now there’s a wall separating mine and my parents’ room. The living room is brighter than before because of the new lights. Back then the living room seemed dead. And now it looks like an actual living place. The bathroom isn’t as disgusting as before and it’s cleaner now. The difference isn’t very big but I like the house more now. I like it the way that it is now.

]]> 2021-11-05 08:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869509534 final draft honganh6c1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869514084 The last time I went to the countryside was about 6 months ago. Now, the road has been rebuilt with cement instead of stone which makes it easier to go through and looks better. Now every house on the street has become more modern and beautiful than it is before. There are also random chairs around the road which means people can sit down and relax easily. But unfortunately, now there are fewer trees and plants than there is before. But now there is a big restaurant and a gas station at the start of the town so truck drivers can sit down and relax. Because of that, more people are visiting the town than before. In conclusion, my countryside has changed a lot for the better and its becoming more like a modern city]]> 2021-11-05 08:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869514084 No one fix anything so this is my final draft noobsboss57 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869514217 When I was a child, I often cycle in the pavements near my house. I was too scare to cycle on the streets at that time. Sometimes I almost hit people which I still to this day. If lucky I can meet my friend too. The pavements are not crowed, just some walking people and maybe a motorbike. It hasn't changed much since then. The bookstores, the buildings, the alleys,... the same as before. Only my feels is not as the same as before. I don't see this as my home anymore, just a place that I have come before.]]> 2021-11-05 08:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869514217 Draft 1 miadoan2018 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869515291 I used to live at my grandparent's house but now I live in a different one. My grandparent's house definitely changed a lot since I last been there. It's certainly not the same as it was before. It's surprisingly peaceful, and there are more children playing there. There used to be some noisy neighbours that lived next door but now that they're gone, it's much quieter.
A new supermarket just opened recently, now my grandparents don't have to travel a long way to get their groceries.]]> 2021-11-05 08:57:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869515291 First draft chilan2511 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869519049 My house has never been the same since the past years. My family moved to an apartment 4 years ago. When we first moved there, the house was so beautiful: the wall paint, furniture. The house has always been like that. But there were lots of other differences. On my bedroom wall, there are lots of artistic paintings that I have been drawing. My room is a bit messier than it was before. The living room is filled with toys and books over the time, more lively than the cold, lonely living room before. My parents' bedroom has lots of diapers, baby toys since we just welcome a new family member. The house has change a lot with noisy, lively and happy atmosphere. ]]> 2021-11-05 09:00:51 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869519049 1st draft chutienvuong1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869519928 I used to visit my grandparent's house every weekends. But due to the pandemic, I have to stay home. After weeks the government stopped the quarantine, so my family had a chance to visit them again. It was very different because my young cousin, who is living there, went to first grade. I got to see his books and notes... which is not interesting. Then, they have some new sports tools and games, which I really enjoys going. I love visiting my grandparents because they always greet me with smiles and welcome and they cooked us tasty meals every time we visit them.]]> 2021-11-05 09:01:34 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869519928 Draft 2 miadoan2018 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869521508 I used to live at my grandparent's house but now I moved into a different one. My grandparent's house definitely changed a lot since I last been there. It's certainly not the same as it was before.
The neighbourhood is surprisingly peaceful, and there are more children having fun outside. There used to be some noisy neighbours that lived next door but now that they're gone, it's much quieter.
Also, a new supermarket just opened near my grandparent's house, now they don't have to travel a long way to get their groceries. It's useful for me too, because I can go get snacks whenever I want.
Everything has changed for the better or stayed the same. I think my grandparent's house is a much more pleasant place to live now. ]]> 2021-11-05 09:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869521508 Hưng giahungidc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869522458 I love my countryside very much. The lasr time I went there was 2021 Tet. There was many changes compared to the years 2012-2013. It was became more modern. Many groceries are built. Streets was more smoothly. I think I like these changes because I like groceries or convenience stores like Circle K. ]]> 2021-11-05 09:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869522458 First Draft https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869522679 I have lived in my hometown since I was born until now. It didn’t change much. There are still a small road many houses next to each other. But it’s more polluted and noisier. My house change a little bit. My dad painted the wall again with cream white color because when I was a child, I drew on it. It’s so beautiful. My dad also bought a new computer so we can study online.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869522679 First Draft nguyentruongsonhuminson https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869523066 1 month ago ,my hometown changed so much. There was a big park and stadium. I remember that there have had a smaller stadium for 2 years. But this stadium was more larger and more beautiful than the old one. This place was the place that many children in my hometown loved. The park was so new for my hometown. People could exercise and play there. The park was so fresh and clean too because of the people in my hometown like it and want it to be fresh. I really like those changes and I want to go to my hometown 1 more time to play and have fresh air there.]]> 2021-11-05 09:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869523066 1st draft sonnt712 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869529316 At now I am at my hometown, my hometown doesn’t have covid 19, so I can go outside, play with friends,.... So I think there are no change for me. My parents can go to my hometown and meet me because they are in green land and they all have 2 shots of vaccine.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869529316 draft 1 ;-;(edit) https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869535187 One of my favorite places, when the summer is coming, is my hometown. It has a lot of beautiful rivers as many as it used to have but they have a little bit different from the last time that they don't have any trash in rivers anymore. It also has more houses than last 2 years. The sky is blue the air is fresher and there are more trees. people go out less and the road is clean, it looks like those people have changed a lot as much as I could see. After that trip, I feel more different from the last time because I can see the work they have done so far I feel happier and more confident.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869535187 draft 3 (way longer than before) baoquyenhn245 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869536342 I love my house and over the years it has changed in a few things. For example, I remembered that it was very inconvenient to do an online class without interruptions from family members. Now there’s a wall separating mine and my parents’ room. The living room is brighter and livelier than before. Back then the living room seemed dead. And now it looks like an actual living place. But we didn’t make dramatic changes to the living room, just added some lights with a yellow tint. However, we did change the stand the TV was on. It was just an ordinary table we found. Now the TV is hanging on the wall and there’s an elegant looking shelf next to it. The table that used to be my storing space is now replaced by a wooded shelf. The shelf is way more compacted than the table and it fits with the room. I like it the way that it is now.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:14:23 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869536342 Draft 1 chimaihoang1019 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869537297 My hometown has changed a lot. My grandparents’ house is now bigger, there are more lights in the house. My neighbours’ house and gardens are bigger. The streets are wider than it was which makes everyone feel comfortable There are more works for people here because there are more factories so people want to live here. My hometown also looks more urbanize. It’s not really good because urbanize may cause more pollution of air, water,… and more nature beauties can be destroyed. My hometown is now better and better everyday and I really want to comeback there again.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869537297 trinhphucbuf https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869540195 My street is my favorite place. I really love to be there because I have spent all my childhood here even to now. It used to be a very polluted place at first, but now it's clean and with fresh air because everyone here is friendly and always ready help the street cleaner but when we first come here, no one even care about us, they just stare at us and then go do their work. Flowers bloom in the spring is very beautiful, even in the summer too. We play football here for many times but we don't do it usually due to Covid-19 but instead of that, we try to do it during night so no one complained about us. I love my street so much]]> 2021-11-05 09:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869540195 IMHUY https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869543540 Ha Long bay is a beautiful beach. But it has changed alot. The beach isn't as clean as it selves before. Plenty of plastic bag, water bottle, etc. are floating on the water, the oil everywhere. But the food isn't too bad. But the resort service is really wonderful. They always appearing when you need. This is also a advantages for the island.]]> 2021-11-05 09:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869543540 Ms Oanh Tu Luu oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869544623 work (uncountable noun)
works of art; tác phẩm
jobs should be used to talk about things people do
go back

]]> 2021-11-05 09:20:49 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869544623 Quyen ( draft 1) baoquyenhn245 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546019 -You should work on your grammar.
-It's too short.
-I don't think this fits the topic.]]> 2021-11-05 09:21:34 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546019 hong anh honganh6c1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546170 i think you should write some more changes not just the pollution]]> 2021-11-05 09:21:41 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546170 1 duyan29429 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546277 It's been four years since the last time I went to my hometown. It has changed a lot since four years ago. There are more houses and more vehicles than before. The streets aren't as quiet as before but traveling is much better now. Many things changed but there are a few things that I like and haven't changed. Such as the delicious food and how friendly the people in there are. Nature is still the same even houses and streets are growing insanely. I'm very happy with what has changed in all those four years.]]> 2021-11-05 09:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546277 Nguyễn Đức Minh minhnguyenducvt https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546632 I dont see any changes. The changes must be about the place(just think)]]> 2021-11-05 09:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869546632 sonnt712 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869547538 Guts]]> 2021-11-05 09:22:45 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869547538 son2510elephant https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869547594 Trọng minh: 'polution'
row 5]]> 2021-11-05 09:22:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869547594 Tuấn Minh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869548502 Your writing looks really good, and how can your countryside be so modern?

]]> 2021-11-05 09:23:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869548502 Cuc ( draft 1) https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869548836 Too much grammatical mistakes
Your ideas aren't linked, they don't flow]]> 2021-11-05 09:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869548836 hong anh honganh6c1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869549307 I think you should write some more changes not just the houses]]> 2021-11-05 09:23:35 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869549307 Xuân Phúc trinhphucbuf https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869549604 You miss some words in the sentence and it will decrease your points when you do the paragraph so try to check and edit it ]]> 2021-11-05 09:23:47 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869549604 tran minh tranminh1107 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550075 2021-11-05 09:24:09 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550075 Comment - Minh Anh :) miadoan2018 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550353 1. "the wall paint, furniture" -> the wall paint and furniture.
2. You shouldn't start a sentence with the word but. I'm not very sure but "but" is a conjunction which means it should be in the middle of a sentence. [sentence 5]
]]> 2021-11-05 09:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550353 liêm https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550376 -nice but you should add more adj and more interesting things than just that ;-;]]> 2021-11-05 09:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550376 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550989 there is a tiny mistake, but yours is good overall]]> 2021-11-05 09:24:44 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869550989 Vinh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869551338 It's ok but kind of short]]> 2021-11-05 09:24:58 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869551338 Trong Minh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869551380 +Too short
+Link the sentences together
+Use less "buts"]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869551380 Quyen baoquyenhn245 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869551766 -You can't count cement, so don't add s
-The entrance. Not the first entrance
-great writing overall. Keep up the good work :D]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869551766 Xuân Phúc trinhphucbuf https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552459 In your 3rd sentence, your grammar is incorrect. there are change to there is because a small road is one so use is]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552459 huy ( draft 1) IMHUY https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552497 nothing is link to topic
still using ... ??? ]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:37 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552497 Duy An ( draft 1) duyan29429 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552737 -Too short
-Grammar mistakes
-Wrong topic
-Don't use "..."]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552737 Tran Minh tranminh1107 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552917 Short
Use some connecting words]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552917 Ms Oanh Tu Luu oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552962 I enjoys should be changed into I enjoy (without s)

]]> 2021-11-05 09:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869552962 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869553203 Nice. I can really see the positive changes in your living room that you're describing :D]]> 2021-11-05 09:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869553203 Minh Anh miadoan2018 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869553903 1. "everyone here is friendly and always ready help the street" -> and is always ready to help
2. Your 3rd sentence is a bit long, seperate it into 2 sentences. ]]> 2021-11-05 09:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869553903 Vuong chutienvuong1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869554295 I don't find any mistakes so I think it's really good]]> 2021-11-05 09:26:44 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869554295 Tue Anh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869554301 -Your house is interesting =))
-Very good writing but I think it's a bit too long]]> 2021-11-05 09:26:44 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869554301 Vinh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869554611 Thank you! I'll change it.]]> 2021-11-05 09:26:58 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869554611 Mai Chi chimaihoang1019 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555061 Your writing is a little bit short ://]]> 2021-11-05 09:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555061 Hạnh buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555524 First line: "since I have come..."
6th line: "the town is not as pleasant as before"

]]> 2021-11-05 09:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555524 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555755 I get what you mean, but it's kind of choppy]]> 2021-11-05 09:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555755 Nguyễn Đức Minh minhnguyenducvt https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555896 Mistakes:
- Tense
- Nuon (nostalgia not nostalgias]]> 2021-11-05 09:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555896 liêm https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555919 you should add some positive changes ;-; and i think you should add more information about a specific thing. ]]> 2021-11-05 09:27:49 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869555919 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869556670 F in the chat for the people that you almost hit]]> 2021-11-05 09:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869556670 hong anh ( draft 1) honganh6c1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869557083 - the writing is off-topic. I don't see you talking about the actual changes
- as everyone has said before: grammar mistakes
- In my opinion, your writing is a little bit too short]]> 2021-11-05 09:28:41 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869557083 Tuấn Minh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869557176 My village has 2 entrance so I must call the "first entrance"

]]> 2021-11-05 09:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869557176 Hanh buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558037 First line: you should use :"changed a lot"
Third line: "Pollution"]]> 2021-11-05 09:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558037 Tr Sơn ( draft 1) nguyentruongsonhuminson https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558040 - Soooo short
- I think u need 'as'
- Check again your grammar :)]]> 2021-11-05 09:29:26 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558040 Mai Chi chimaihoang1019 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558091 Your writing is really good. I like how you describe both positive changes and negative changes :))))]]> 2021-11-05 09:29:28 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558091 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558160 thank and will edit it if I can ;-;]]> 2021-11-05 09:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869558160 Trong Minh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869559243 It's kind of the same]]> 2021-11-05 09:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869559243 Tue Anh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869559701 -Nice
-''The streets are wider than they were'' not it was
-Basically the writing is good =)))]]> 2021-11-05 09:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869559701 Nguyễn Đức Minh minhnguyenducvt https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560039 4 years ago cannot come with present perfect (line 3)
Other I think I wrote well :D]]> 2021-11-05 09:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560039 Tuấn Minh https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560082 that is really short]]> 2021-11-05 09:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560082 Minh Anh miadoan2018 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560328 In some sentences you add unnescessary words.
"They sky is more fresh" -> use a different adjective to describe the sky.]]> 2021-11-05 09:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560328 Quyen baoquyenhn245 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560394 The writing's great. I dont think there's any major mistakes. Keep up the great work :D]]> 2021-11-05 09:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560394 Duy An duyan29429 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560407 -Missing words
-Some grammar mistakes]]> 2021-11-05 09:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869560407 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869561091 good job bro :)))]]> 2021-11-05 09:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869561091 Hanh buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869561103 First line: "It's has been..."]]> 2021-11-05 09:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869561103 Tr Sơn nguyentruongsonhuminson https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869561110 U did a good job and u need to check again bit mistake bout your grammar.]]> 2021-11-05 09:31:44 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869561110 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869562770 Check your work again for some grammatical mistakes + should be longer]]> 2021-11-05 09:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869562770 Hanh buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869564448 Good writing. I think it's perfect isn't it]]> 2021-11-05 09:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869564448 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869566227 some tenses mistakes]]> 2021-11-05 09:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869566227 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869567535 I think this is really good since I don't see any mistakes :D]]> 2021-11-05 09:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869567535 Cuc https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869568648 "more larger" and you can remove "the old one" in the 4th sentence]]> 2021-11-05 09:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869568648 Hanh buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869568978 Great writing. =)))))]]> 2021-11-05 09:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869568978 the author noobsboss57 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869569580 F]]> 2021-11-05 09:37:57 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869569580 Duy An duyan29429 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869570325 Good job! I don't see any mistake]]> 2021-11-05 09:38:28 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869570325 Ms oanh tu luu oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869571942 has changed ]]> 2021-11-05 09:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869571942 Thy duongyenthy2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869575558 "This place was the place that many child in my hometown loved".

Correction:
This place was the place that many childREN in my hometown loved.]]> 2021-11-05 09:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869575558 first draft and I have edited it for a couple of times https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869577730 My hometown is Hanoi and it has been constantly changing over the past century. In the past, according to my dad's stories, Hanoi was outdated and people lived in poverty. There were shortages of food and safe water.
Now, it sure has changed a lot. People are provided with better education so that they are able to get decent-paying jobs. The government also ensures that people have good-quality food and clean water. The streets surely are upgraded, too. They are filled with trees and beautiful flowers. Even though this city still has a lot of flaws and lacks in many aspects, I love the way Hanoi is now.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869577730 honganh6c1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869577817 thank you everyone]]> 2021-11-05 09:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869577817 Khoa part 2 noobsboss57 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869581412 in the street -> on the street

]]> 2021-11-05 09:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869581412 Khoa noobsboss57 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869583252 as not -> not as
narrow (dude Covid can't make streets wider)

]]> 2021-11-05 09:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869583252 Khoa noobsboss57 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869585106 It's (It has)
and haven't... (that haven't...)
even (even if)]]> 2021-11-05 09:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869585106 Khoa noobsboss57 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869586942 There was (are)
Streets was (are)]]> 2021-11-05 09:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869586942 First draft duongyenthy2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869589806 There have been many differences since the last time I went back to my primary school.

The last 2 years - the time when I was studying in my primary school, it didn’t have as many technological devices as it has now. I think the biggest change is the school’s color of paint. It has turned from milk-white into white. Even though the school’s vastness didn’t change, but it looks newer. Besides the good sides, the number of trees is not the same as when it was, the school has fewer trees. The school is now cleaner and fresher, I love this part the most as I’m a clean person :))).

So overall, my primary school has changed a lot. Some of the changes are good, but I don’t like some. However, I still love my primary school so so much, and I hope I can go back to my school one day, after the lockdown.

]]> 2021-11-05 09:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1869589806 First draft https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1872503367 Ha Noi has changed a lot over the past years. There are more buildings and more people than before now. That makes the city more polluted and more dirty. Some places and rivers are as dirty as before. Despite all of that, there are many good things too. Many of the streets are polished and fixed, the parks looks so much prettier than the old versions. The only thing that hasn’t changed is citizens’ friendly attitude towards eachother. Those things make Ha Noi prettier, and it also makes me want to explore Ha Noi more.

]]> 2021-11-07 10:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1872503367 2 duyan29429 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1884402951 It has been four years since the last time I went to my hometown. It has changed a lot since four years ago. There are more houses and more vehicles than before. The streets aren't as quiet as before but traveling is much better now. Many things changed but there are a few things that I like that haven't changed. Such as the delicious food and how friendly the people in there are. Nature is still the same even when houses and streets are growing insanely. I'm very happy with what has changed in all those four years.]]> 2021-11-11 14:59:21 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1884402951 Second draft :/ chutienvuong1 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1886881783 I used to visit my grandparent's house every weekends. But due to the pandemic, I have to stay home. After weeks the government stopped the quarantine, so my family had a chance to visit them again. It was very different because my young cousin, who is living there, went to first grade. I got to see his books and notes... which is not interesting. Then, they have some new sports tools and games, which I really enjoy going. I love visiting my grandparents because they always greet me with smiles and welcome and they cooked us tasty meals every time we visit them.]]> 2021-11-12 15:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1886881783 Second Draft https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887672408 I have lived in my hometown since I was born until now. It didn’t change much. There is still a small road many houses next to each other. But it’s more polluted and noisier. My house change a little bit. My dad painted the wall again with cream white color because when I was a child, I drew on it. It’s so beautiful. My dad also bought a new computer so we can study online.]]> 2021-11-13 00:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887672408 Organisation oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887672850 Introduction
Topic + controlling idea
Main ideas
+ supporting
+ supporting
Concluding sentence

]]> 2021-11-13 00:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887672850 Draft 2 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887681120 I'm having a bad feeling when I revisited my old home. It's still okay, but things aren't normal at the apartment: Where're the playground, the mart, the restaurants? I can only saw a bank that I can feel some darkness inside. I'm so worried: The owner is going to remove all houses while my family isn't able to sell the old house yet. With Covid-19 is still affecting on, that's so terrible and if things are still going on, my old house will be ruined until it's a bunch of trashes.]]> 2021-11-13 00:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887681120 how to generate ideas oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887681136 2021-11-13 00:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887681136 How to generate ideas oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887883998 2021-11-13 05:04:47 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1887883998 You did it! Great! oanh_lt68 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889807188 Marks: 10]]> 2021-11-15 00:20:17 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889807188 Second draft chilan2511 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889833343 My house has never been the same since the past years. My family moved to an apartment 4 years ago. When we first moved there, the house was so beautiful: the wall paint and furniture. The house has always been like that but there were lots of other differences. On my bedroom wall, there are lots of artistic paintings that I have been drawing. My room is a bit messier than it was before. The living room is filled with toys and books over the time, more lively than the cold, lonely living room before. My parents' bedroom has lots of diapers, baby toys since we just welcome a new family member. The house has change a lot with noisy, lively and happy atmosphere]]> 2021-11-15 00:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889833343 Repost tranminh1107 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889842062 When I was little, I lived in a small house with my parents in Sai Dong. The people were very friendly and nice. The streets were small but it was ok. There weren't any trees then and it was a bit polluted. But now, the streets are wide and there are lots of trees. The street is still a bit polluted since there is a small factory there. The people are still very nice and I'd say the place had improved from when I lived there.]]> 2021-11-15 00:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889842062 Reply to Cuc tranminh1107 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889848381 wdym by "the people that I almost hit"]]> 2021-11-15 00:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889848381 Second draft https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889856962 My favorite place is my hometown. It's been a lot more changes since the last time I visited it. My hometown is a beautiful and fully decorated every day. The last time I got to my hometown is 3 months ago. And yesterday I went back to my hometown. A part my village road is now renewed into a better road. The market and the school are now really quiet because everyone are afraid of the pandemic. The school have just done constructing a new P.E house, you can go swimming in that place. Everyone don't go to there really often. My aunt's house is now under construction to make a bigger house. That's a lot of big stuffs have changed in my hometown. That makes my hometown better and better through days. That's really great]]> 2021-11-15 00:48:12 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889856962 Second draft trongminhnguyen2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889858541 Ha Noi has changed really much in the past years because of the population, the pollution there is in Ha Noi. Many years ago, Ha Noi was a country with nearly no polution and the population wasn't really that much, but many years later, they invented many different transports like motobikes, cars, and buses, the worst thing is that the population grew really quick since then. But the good thing about it is that the

civilization of Vietnam grew a lot, the best is probably technology. Many different things like smartphones, computers were invented, but those stuff are still still kind of dangerous for children. Because of Covid-19, children in the world all have to sit at home and look at their screens all day, that will really harm there eyes. I still think living long ago is better than now. I hope the population will grow slower and the polution will be less.

]]> 2021-11-15 00:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889858541 Draft 1 nampoop https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889868621 From the first time i went to my primary school, it was very old and rusty. But then it is cleaner and more mordern the time i went to secondary school. They have added some new TV to the classroom and they rent some more computer for the ICT room. Because of the lockdown, they can spend more time in fixing the school.]]> 2021-11-15 00:53:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889868621 draft 2 :VV https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889935905 One of my favorite places, when the summer is coming, is my hometown. It has a lot of beautiful rivers as many as it used to have but they have a little bit different from the last time that they don't have any trash in rivers anymore. It also has more houses than last 2 years. The sky is blue, the air is fresher and there are trees everywhere. Everyone goes out less so the road is clean, it looks like everyone have changed a lot as much as I could see. After that trip, I feel different from the last time because I can see the work they have done so far I feel happier and more confident.]]> 2021-11-15 01:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1889935905 final draft chimaihoang1019 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1891408421 My hometown has changed a lot. My grandparents’ house is now bigger, there are more lights in the house. My neighbours’ house and gardens are bigger. The streets are wider than they were which makes everyone feel comfortable There are more works for people here because there are more factories so people want to live here, but only before the COVID-19 pandemic. My hometown also looks more urbanize. It’s not really good because urbanize may cause more pollution of air, water,… and more nature beauties can be destroyed. My hometown is now better and better everyday and I really want to comeback there again.

]]> 2021-11-15 14:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1891408421 Draft 1 sontt2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1891659766 I have lived in hometown(Ha Noi) since I was born until now. In my grandmather story, my hometown was very poor. In the past, Ha noi was not large, there were only 4 counties. It was very different from now. It was very easy to see people riding bike on the street. But now almost people use motorbike and car. There are many buildings than 50 years ago. It makes Ha Noi more dirty and poluted so I pretty sad . I love my home town.]]> 2021-11-15 15:51:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1891659766 Draft 2 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1893004983 It has been 5 months since I have come to Thaou. Yesterday, I went to Thaou and there were so many changes. They have made a big improvement by building wind turbines but it makes the town is not as pleasant as before. The turbines are noisy and farmers cannot work as efficiently as they used to. Due to Covid, the street is not as narrow as before. Houses are built with cement instead of traditional communal house and people have started to use lots of motorbikes makes the air highly polluted. All this make an adverse effect on this small town and I don’t like it as before ]]> 2021-11-16 03:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1893004983 Draft 2 nguyentruongsonhuminson https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1893071867 1 month ago, my hometown has changed so much. There is a big park and stadium. I remember that there was a small stadium 2 years ago. However, this stadium is much larger and more beautiful than the old one. Many children in my hometown love the new place. People can do exercise and play there. It is very fresh and clean because everyone my hometown like it and want it to be fresh. I love those changes and I want to go to my hometown so much.

]]> 2021-11-16 03:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1893071867 Notes: Changes in ice cream shop buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1896309380 1. Intro
- Intro about Trang Tien's ice cream shop
- Some history info
+ First sold at 35 Trang Tien in 1958
+ Made by Mr. Khanh
+ Have many favour
+ Famous with green rice ice cream (actually I don't know what is "Cốm" in English
2. Changes
a) Positive change
- Have re-design
- Cleaner
- Friendlier
- More beautiful
b) Negative change
- Less yummmy
- Don't have enough ice-cream
3. Concluding
- Love ice-cream :D
- Hope it will be more succesfull =)))]]> 2021-11-17 08:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1896309380 Draft 1 buithimyhanh2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1896372354 I often eat ice-cream at Trang Tien street. Its first sold at 35 Trang Tien street in 1958. Trang Tien's ice cream made by Mr. Khanh. It has a lot of favour, but the most famous is green rice ice-cream.

It has changed a lot since 2021 including positive and negative change. First, the positive change is it has re-designed. All the colour, the board, etc changed so it looks more beautiful, cleaner and friendlier. Next, the negative change is about the quality of the ice-cream. It's less yummy than normal, maybe because of Covid-19 so it has less money to make ice-cream. Also, they don't have enough ice-cream too. Sometimes, when I call an ice-cream, they said all of them has been sold.

I love ice-cream at Trang Tien street. Hope it will be more succesfull during Covid 19]]> 2021-11-17 09:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1896372354 2nd draft ( actually write again ) sonnt712 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1896487311 Currently, I do not live in Hanoi but I live in the countryside, my hometown is not affected by covid 19 so I can do all I want without wearing a mask.After school, in the morning, I will go to the neighborhood to play with my friends, and in the afternoon, I will go to the sand next to the field to play football. I have a close friend here, I've been playing with him since I was 2 months old
Currently, my hometown is not affected by covid 19 but from the beginning of July to the beginning of August, my hometown was slightly affected by covid 19 .So I need to stay at home even though it's not required by the state, but I think it doesn't make much difference whether I stay at home or go out to play. My grandparent' house is very very large, it is about 1 km² wide and has a lake so I can catch the fishs , climb trees, shoot marbles, weed , hoe, grow vegetables, jump rope and many more else .My grandparents also have a lot of dogs and cats so I can play with them, they also have a lot of chickens so I can chase them if I'm sad.
When covid 19 affected my hometown, once, I went to the market to buy some things, there was not a single person in the field, and there were as many people on the sand as there were in the field. And on the village road, it's only me. At that time I thought: "I am the last survivor in the world" :))))))))). When I went to the market to buy things, only a few essential food stores were still active. At that time, in addition to the sales people, only me and another person were the buyers.
But after all, everything seems to be waking up after a long sleep, people go to the market to buy goods, the streets are crowded again, in the fields, the farmers go back to doing their daily work, the children in the neighborhood The village invites each other to the sand, after the first day of the end of the distance, everyone eagerly prepares to start a new normal life. The next day, everything was right back on its own. A fresh space, people go to the fields to plow, children scream, play on the sand, and bright smiles.]]> 2021-11-17 10:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1896487311 Second draft nguyentueanhlol https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1899380898 Ha Noi has changed a lot over the past years. The streets, buildings, schools, etc. They are all different now. The streets were very narrow and broken, I tripped a lot because of them! Now, they are widen and are perfectly polished. According to my parents' stories, there weren't many huge, modern buildings before, just small simple houses on the way. I remember I used to visit a small park every week and run, play around that place. Now, I feel really happy because that park got larger. They even planted more trees and flowers. They look so pretty! I'm glad that most of the changes of the city is positive despite the negatives like pollution. But, the single thing that hasn't changed is the citizens' friendly, lovely attitude towards each other.]]> 2021-11-18 12:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1899380898 Second draft [Final]. duongyenthy2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1901629848 There has been many differences since the last time I went back to my primary school.

The last 2 years - the time when I was studying in my primary school, it didn’t have as many technological devices as it has now. I think the biggest change is the school’s color of paint. It has turned from milk-white into white. Even though the school’s vastness didn’t change, but it looks newer. The school is now cleaner and fresher, I love this part the most as I’m a clean person :))). So those are all the positive points/advantages of my school. But, besides the good sides, the number of trees is not the same as when it was, the school has fewer trees which is quite sad.

To be honest, I miss the old version of the school more as I have spent most of my childhood there. I had a lot of experiences that bonded to my old school. For instance like the memories with my friends or the first years of going to primary school, which only happens once in each person’s life.

So overall, my primary school has changed a lot. Some of the changes are good, but I don’t really like some. However, I still love my primary school so so much, and I hope I can go back to my school one day, after the lockdown.

]]> 2021-11-19 08:27:46 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1901629848 Thy duongyenthy2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1904326860 Double check your work: there r some words that you need to include the "s" because those words are plural

E.g: "All the colour" => "All the colourS"]]> 2021-11-21 12:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1904326860 Final Draft sontt2009 https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1907240987 I’ve lived in Hanoi since I was born. In my grandmather story, my hometown was very poor. In the past, Ha noi was not large with only 6 counties and 46.118 ha area. But still now, as you see, Hanoi has 29 couties with 334.470,02ha, 7 time more than aucien Hanoi. It was very different from now. It was very easy to see people riding bike on the street. But now almost people use motorbike and car. It makes Ha Noi more dirty and poluted than before. So I'm pretty sad . There are many buildings than 50 years ago. It made Hanoi more modern but lack of park, garden for children and it made me feel unpeaceful. My grandmother said that Hanoi 50 years ago’s people lived more close, much more care each other than Hanoi modern live. But I don’t think so. I still love and care my family, my friend and my home town. ]]> 2021-11-23 00:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/oanh_lt68/i91tt1zeryr7jl0h/wish/1907240987