https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f Made with a curious mind en-us 2017-05-30 11:19:09 UTC 2025-11-06 09:27:04 UTC hello@padlet.com mayroberts52 https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174385234 2017-05-30 11:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174385234 juliec2 https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174385595 Ovreall the presentation was clear and colourful and straight to the point. Dai awn.
There were however some monir errors to correct:-
Remove blank slide 10 and 6.
Slide 5 - 3rd sentence in paragraph Going Solar space required after the full stop after the word building.
Slide 5 -  T last sentence is missing the Invert before Your're and remove second dash afrer credit. 
Slide 1 - Construction is mis-splet. I would also decresase the size of the letter so you can get the tilte all on the same line or split of a barn on the second line and also underline the whole title.
I hope you find this feedback constructive and useful. 
Regards
Julie

]]> 2017-05-30 11:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174385595 mayroberts52 https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174386826 Julie has included some very detailed feedback for you regarding each slide. Maybe you could look at local suppliers for solar panels as a step to reducing carbon footprint

]]> 2017-05-30 11:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174386826 leannemumford https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174387090
I have looked through your power point presentation, why don't you provide some pictures, check for spelling mistakes and also some of the links didn't work but overall a great presentation, well done!

]]> 2017-05-30 11:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174387090 leannemumford https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174387514 2017-05-30 11:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mayroberts52/i7xs6o2wsl4f/wish/174387514