Critical Writing - GROUP 2 by NTU PEAP https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir Fashion Marketing & Branding en-us 2021-04-22 00:47:57 UTC 2025-11-13 23:36:33 UTC hello@padlet.com n0938592 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447573496 well constructed sentences, clear structure and a well thought out argument]]> 2021-04-22 14:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447573496 sashasmith2000 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447573501 language that is going to suit the reader ]]> 2021-04-22 14:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447573501 getting to the point - not wordy https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447574407 2021-04-22 14:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447574407 no slang https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447574612 2021-04-22 14:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447574612 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447575442 not using abbreviations ]]> 2021-04-22 14:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447575442 elsmith286 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447575997 Professionally using sophisticated language to convey ideas 

]]> 2021-04-22 14:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447575997 concise https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447578580 2021-04-22 14:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447578580 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447579515  ]]> 2021-04-22 14:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447579515 Correct sentence structure https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580049 2021-04-22 14:47:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580049 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580638 Mature wording

]]> 2021-04-22 14:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580638 Speaking Intelligently and with confidence emmeeson https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580753 2021-04-22 14:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580753 clear and concise ideas https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580848 2021-04-22 14:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447580848 appropriate use of terminology and technical vocabulary https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447589816 2021-04-22 14:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447589816 sashasmith2000 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447678715 personality: sophisticated, family orientated
what does the reader already know: about the company, basic facts that you can find on the website, the brands position, their mission etc
Do they have more or less power then you? More because they are part of the company but we have the power highlight things through the report
what language do you need to consider? something that is going to be engaging and insightful for the reader - highlighting points that they might not already know ]]> 2021-04-22 15:04:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447678715 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447687621 personality: environmentally and ethically conscious, modest style, sensible
reader position: senior within the company]]> 2021-04-22 15:06:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447687621 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447689296 they have more power than you because you are trying to persuade them that they should take on board your recommendations to help the brand]]> 2021-04-22 15:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447689296 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447692757 the reader's position is higher (thus they have more power), they could be a marketing manager of sorts. The language has to be formal and insightful, since they already know a lot about the brand. New findings have to be presented with evidence and explanation of relevancy and validity. 
Personality of the brand is quite sophisticated, feminist; the brand is a comfort-space

]]> 2021-04-22 15:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447692757 care about both their consumers and the people who made their clothing. https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447694530 2021-04-22 15:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447694530 Personality elsmith286 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447697730 Sophisticated, family lovers, sustainability lovers, independent ]]> 2021-04-22 15:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447697730 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447700330 personality: sophisticated, consciously aware, relaxed, caring]]> 2021-04-22 15:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447700330 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447702657 personality: 
Sustainable and ethical, they want to make a difference to the world and ensure everyone working for them and buying from them are comfortable. Have lots of evidence of the good things they do.]]> 2021-04-22 15:09:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447702657 eltheobald https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447705259 Personality: Sophisticated, Traditional, Nostalgic]]> 2021-04-22 15:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447705259 they already know the ethics and morals behind the brand https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447707968 2021-04-22 15:09:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447707968 n0938592 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447710342
| What is the personality of the company your reader works for? | Elegant, sophisticated, conscious
| What does the reader already know about the topic of the report? | The brand values and goals, the aspirations to move into the new market
| What is the reader’s position in the company? | 
| Do they have more or less power than you?  | More power
 | What do you need to consider when using language (e.g. word choice, sentence length)? | A variety of sentence lengths and effective language and punctuation]]> 2021-04-22 15:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447710342 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447712020 2021-04-22 15:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447712020 https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447718018 i think its important to try and not be condescending in your tone and over explain things that the reader would already know about their company]]> 2021-04-22 15:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ntu_peap/i7vm8l7q2cgts5ir/wish/1447718018