Wk 2 L2 Outline Feedback Discussion by https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b Put your responses here. en-us 2021-01-20 20:09:49 UTC 2022-02-18 02:45:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f43b.png Questions patrick_coleman2 https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/1107569648
  • What strengths and weaknesses are mentioned in your feedback?
  • What needs the most attention in your outline?
  • Do you have any questions about the feedback?

    • ]]>     2021-01-20 20:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/1107569648     Kiernan https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054456811 1.problems choose good.Lack of datas.

    2.need more data to support my ideas.

    3.No
    ]]>     2022-02-18 02:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054456811     R1—Lambert 1256974987 https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054461488 1.
    S:The questions raised are constructive and worth thinking about
    W:More data are needed to support the idea

    2.The debate about immigration is fraught with ambiguity

    3.In the introduction section, do we need to repeat the topic, summarize the main points, or not mention the topic at all?For example, this is about the housing problem in New Zealand. It mentioned the aging population, the affordability of housing, the poor quality of housing and the shortage of housing supply in New Zealand. Should I focus on the two problems I want to express, or should I mention all of the above problems?]]>     2022-02-18 02:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054461488     R1-Chenxi Li https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054464005 2, I need to put data to support my ideas.
    3, How many in-text citations can we use in the report? ]]>     2022-02-18 02:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054464005     LEOn https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054465123 1.lack of data
    2.Looking for matching data, good writing, dont make mistakes
    3.Not yet]]>     2022-02-18 02:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054465123     Aoi https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054468780 1. Focus on one problem. Link solution directly to a specific problem.
    2. need to write information in general. 
    3 no]]>     2022-02-18 02:45:21 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/i70xl6lx09svjp2b/wish/2054468780