Double-Sided Journal Feedback by mythinee kumaran

Aesthetic (Fonts, colors, readability etc.)

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 12:03:24 UTC

Aesthetic (Fonts, colors, readability etc.)

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 12:04:23 UTC

Content (Activities etc.)

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 12:04:56 UTC

Content (Activities etc.)

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 14:34:48 UTC

Areas for improvement

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 14:35:01 UTC

Potential prompts / activities that can be added

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 14:35:16 UTC

Which elements did you like the most?

mythineekumaran0372 — 2023-06-23 15:03:19 UTC

Overall Aesthetic

2023-06-24 11:57:38 UTC

1. Elements should follow the same navy blue font colour theme
2. Elements should at least 0.5cm away from the border/edges of the booklet
3. dots for in the background should be a faded/ translucent navy blue instead of white for design consistency
4. For those that require caregivers to answer more thought-provoking questions, or draw certain abstract ideas, can provide prompts. guide notes to facilitate their thought process and make it easier for them to answer the question
5. Design of the page should be consistent but not repetitive so good to change up the elements or positions of the elements
6. any design with lists, recommended to add border around

Overall Aesthetic

2023-06-24 12:01:52 UTC

1. Elements should not overlap one another
2. There are some pages that have a lot going on, can choose to focus on the important things and remove/reduce the size of the less important ones
3. Colour and design style of icons should be consistent. Some style of icons looks very different from others so design may not look as consistent
4. recommended for elements where users are interacting with it (e.g. tracing/ colouing/ connecting lines), should all be the same colour)
5. background of certain pages should not be completely blank, recommended to add some art or elements in the bg to make it look less empty

Element I liked the most

2023-06-24 12:04:20 UTC

I think the content of the journal is very well done. Very well thought out and the creative side is also very well ideated, the activities seem very fun!! GREAT JOB GUYS <3

Potential prompts & activities to be added

2023-06-24 12:09:58 UTC

Pg 11:
1. Recommended to give them a few quotes to choose from, bc they may not have time to find them
2. Ask them to circle or highlight the keywords in the quotes and rank their favorite from 1-5

pg 31
Maybe instead of asking them to draw their favorite scenery can ask them to paste picture of their Favorite scenery or paste artefacts of things in their Favorite scenery

e.g. Park--> paste actual fallen leaves
Beach--> paste actual seashells picked up