https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c :) en-us 2018-01-31 14:22:47 UTC 2018-03-02 15:52:48 UTC hello@padlet.com http://quotespictures.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/life-without-ballet-is-pointless.jpg 23crodrigues https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c/wish/226579339 Hi Everyone! Please leave some positive comments on my writing pieces
~Catherine]]> 2018-01-31 14:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c/wish/226579339 23mvirgil https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c/wish/236921678 Your usage of vivid vocabulary is clearly demonstrated  throughout the piece. Great work! I am impressed by how sophisticated your writing piece is ; continue to use your talent Catherine! In the future I suggest checking to make sure that you vary the sentence lengths a bit more. Overall, excellent job! -Morgan Virgil]]> 2018-03-01 14:35:49 UTC https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c/wish/236921678 23emauer https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c/wish/237454486 Hey Catherine!! I absolutely loved your essay it persuaded so well, I'm absolutely on your side with this topic!! I loved your explanations/warrants and personal input in this because I could really see the compassion you have for a topic. This really lets people know that you are serious about this topic and ready for a change. Also, you had really strong data to support your point and what you were trying to say. This strong data and crazy statistics was just another way to see how this is a conterversial issues and that the amount of death from car crashes need to stop! Next time, maybe try to save some of your great ideas from the intro for the body paragraph because I felt that good data was immediately introduced. Overall, excellent job Catherine a real strong essay! -Ella M]]> 2018-03-02 15:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/23crodrigues/i48d6iri7l6c/wish/237454486