My Favourite/ The Main Attraction at ACGHK by Teacher LPSMC https://padlet.com/zoomteacher03/i33yqyrmu0sspa8h en-us 2024-03-21 00:35:27 UTC 2024-04-15 03:09:25 UTC hello@padlet.com Example (Type your group number here) zoomteacher03 https://padlet.com/zoomteacher03/i33yqyrmu0sspa8h/wish/2950492045 My favorite attraction is the cosplay competition on the main stage. This is because I got to see many talented teenagers dressing up and pretending to be their favorite Japanese anime and comic book characters. For instance, I saw a boy who dressed up as Goku from Dragon Balls and a girl who dressed up as Monkey D. Luffy from One Piece. Also, the costumes are very detailed. What's more, they told me that they made the costumes themselves. Therefore, it is a real eye-opener and I really like the cosplay competition on the main stage.

]]> 2024-04-11 03:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/zoomteacher03/i33yqyrmu0sspa8h/wish/2950492045 https://padlet.com/zoomteacher03/i33yqyrmu0sspa8h/wish/2953717016 Do you know what is the Animation-Comic -Game Hong Kong event? Have you ever been there? It is a large event from the annual Hong Kong Fair that integrates comics, animation, video games, toys, and cosplay. It was first held in 1999. It is now held every year at the Hong Kong Convention and Exhibition Centre.

About Animation-Comic-Game event, the most what I am interested things is cosplay competition. In this event is a performance art in which participants wear costumes and accessories to represent a specific character. Cosplay costumes For example comics, manga, anime, cartoons, video games and movies


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Comment from Mr Lam:

  1. Good rhetorical questions.

  2. Do you know what Animation-Comic -Game Hong Kong is?

  3. You also need to tell the readers you went to ACGHK recently and it was the 23rd ACGHK (2021)

  4. In the body paragraphs, you need to tell the readers what you saw as well (e.g., the participants, atmosphere, things that you can do etc.)

  5. About Animation-Comic-Game event, the most what I am interested things is cosplay competition. --> Among the things that I did and saw at ACGHK, my favorite attraction is the cosplay competition.

  6. You briefly introduced the cosplay competition but you also have to tell me WHY you like it.

  7. represent a specific character --> pretend to be characters from different comics, manga, anime, cartoons, video games and movies. (you may also give specific examples afterward. e.g., "For instance, I saw some teenagers dressed up as (character names) from (movie names) and they looked amazing."

  8. Don't forget the structure of a body paragraph: Topic sentence (you had a good one) --> RICE --> Closing (you did NOT have one)


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