Our own versions: '2 mothers in a hdb playground' by Sarah Ong

Part 1: Creative writing

sarahong0601 — 2024-04-22 10:08:23 UTC

Write a poem that is a dialogue between the 2 characters you were assigned
The 2 characters, like the mothers in Arthur Yap's version, should be in competition
Title your poem: '2 ______(people/objects) at _________ (place)'

Questions to consider:

Why are they competing?
What is the nature of their competition? Are they openly competing, or is the competition more subtle?
What are the characters' attitudes towards each other? How can we convey their competitiveness through tone?

Part 2: Evaluation

sarahong0601 — 2024-04-22 10:09:17 UTC

Task: Evaluate which line you feel is most effective in conveying the characters’ rivalry, and explain your choice. In your explanation, you may consider the tone of the line.

Zayar,zixuan,austin

kaung_zayar_lin1 — 2024-04-25 01:51:26 UTC

2 Library books on a shelf
-My author is so smart He can see something and already can come up with a story for it
-Yea lah, but who has a better sales rate? Our author is not as smart as you but even with an author like this we can somehow do better than you? You never thought about that have you? -Sorry that we are not doing good, but how can blunt book have a decent wood

nabilah_mahadzair1 — 2024-04-25 01:52:10 UTC

Dhaya

boopathy_dhayanithi2 — 2024-04-25 01:52:43 UTC

2 drinks 1 carton

Coke, you may boast of your global fame,

But your flavor leaves much to be claimed.

An empire built on bubbles and hype,

Yet lacking flavours, in every type.

So go on, Pepsi, with your blue and red,

But in the world of cola, you're easily misled.

I may let you linger in my shadow,

But true greatness, you'll never know.

2024-04-25 01:52:55 UTC

Evaluation

boopathy_dhayanithi2 — 2024-04-25 02:19:02 UTC

Austin Zayar zixuan

kaung_zayar_lin1 — 2024-04-25 02:20:09 UTC

“Sure, sure. we all know who’s the better twin”. This sentence was very obvious and ding dong was very frank with bing bong, stating that he is the better twin in front of his face. Showing how high his ego Is and how much he wants to compete with bing bong