https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb Give me feedback on my writing essays! en-us 2022-01-31 17:42:58 UTC 2022-03-10 17:59:45 UTC hello@padlet.com John_Laudman https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2023940227 Super cool story. I like how passionate you are with wanting to get a sports center or complex. 


John;)]]> 2022-02-01 18:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2023940227 https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2027516469 One thing I really enjoyed in your piece was the hook. Your hook made me want to read more of your story and people who enjoy playing sports or know sports may consider reading more of this article. Another thing I enjoyed in your story was how your story was nice and flowing. You had a good use of word choice and transition words. ]]> 2022-02-03 13:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2027516469 27mmartucci https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2027700873 Something I liked about your persuasive essay is your hook, it was good and descriptive and when I first read it    I wanted to keep on reading. Very Nice Job! Another thing I liked about your persuasive essay is their was good descriptive words and good compositional risks as well and it brought out your persuasive essay more with all of the descriptive language and compositional risks.
Good job 🅿️!]]> 2022-02-03 15:17:45 UTC https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2027700873 27abalagot https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2088344791 One thing I liked about your presentation was your hook where you had that question “Do you ever want to throw up everyday wen you put on your shoes?” As soon as I read that it had me hooked the whole way through. Another thing I liked about your presentation was that it was organized and I understand what I’m reading for example there was nothing confusing for me. One wish I have is to make some of the slides less wordy. For example for “Benefits Of Buying Our Product” I suggested you maybe did bullet points instead of a paragraph. Overall your product and presentation was great.]]> 2022-03-10 13:43:45 UTC https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2088344791 27lkoehler https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2088535984 -Star: I love the way you formatted your slide it looks really neat and organized
-Star: I love how you showed your product in real life examples it makes me want to buy it
-Wish: I wish you could add more photos of your product]]> 2022-03-10 15:10:02 UTC https://padlet.com/27askara1/i15cighh7efkerb/wish/2088535984