WRITING EVALUATION ACTIVITY by Nhi Trần Lê Mai

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mainhi11420 — 2025-07-09 17:02:22 UTC

First of all, the merit of spending more money on students’ spare time activities can improve their mental health. For example, if students only focus on class for a long time to study, they will not communicate far more than joining outside activities or doing exercise. This results in their not being able to make more friends as they go outside and talk with more people.

--> One reason why more money should be spent on students' spare time activities is that they can improve their mental health. These activities give students a break from academic pressure and allow them to relax. For example, instead of spending their time studying in class, students who join sports or clubs have a better chance to make friends, hence reducing stress through social interaction.

B PHƯƠNG LINH MINH

mainhi11420 — 2025-07-09 17:03:15 UTC

The second reason why more money should be paid for spare time activities is it helps us to earn more experience and skills. Some activities challenge sense of solving problem of people. Through this activity, they decide a right choice and solve a problem easily in some situations. In addition, the skills such as communication. For example, in the emergency, people who have already taken part in free time activities knowing what they need to do like evacuating or helping the others.

C PHƯƠNG LINH MINH

mainhi11420 — 2025-07-09 17:03:59 UTC

The main advantages of free time activities is help students know more about the world. It helps students to develop their life skills like communication. Students can know how to have new friends and they can also connect with more people have better skills than them. Moreover, students know to work in a team and connect with people in the group to solve the problem. In addition, free time activities also help students to increase problem-solving skills, it teaches them how to deal with the problem in real situations and give them more life’s experience. They can solve the problem better when they have experienced it.

D - KHÔI TUẤN ANH

mainhi11420 — 2025-07-09 17:04:28 UTC

First of all, the reason of more money should be used for free time activities is that more time to relax for children and they also learn some better skills. Children nowadays must study a lot in school and extra classes, so they need to have free time to relax their mind more comfortable. After school, they will do some activities they want such as: play badminton, play football or play video games... alone or with their friends. Moreover, if they spend money for free time, they can learn some life skills such as they have more opportunities to make new friends, not to inactive, just at home, and they can learn new knowledges from some activities.

E VINH THÀNH

mainhi11420 — 2025-07-09 17:05:58 UTC

To begin with, on the one hand, free time activities helps students improve learning productivity. This is because entertainment by sport helps people create more happiness and enthusiasm. To illustrate, playing sport help our brain and body relax after hours sitting on chairs at school.

On the other hand, if individuals do not play sport in their free time, they are easier to get sick. One explanation is that students cannot play sport. This is because of not play sport, it will decrease strength of the students.

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mainhi11420 — 2025-07-09 17:06:18 UTC

One of benefits of spend money on free time activities is training health, building communication skill and relax. This is because when you have free time you can playing sport, or do a lot of activities what you like and it help you to training health and you can meet your friend. If you doesn’t like playing sport, you can playing game because it help you to relax after you finish class. For example, when you playing football, you need to communicate to another people in your team and you can improve your communication skill.