https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6 Boring Beginning -- "Hi! My name is Billy. I'm going to tell you about my time at a haunted house." en-us 2018-10-23 18:52:23 UTC 2021-07-10 16:24:39 UTC hello@padlet.com agroome https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296146008 Using what you have learned about entertaining beginnings,  revise the following beginning listed above about Billy and the haunted house. Using two of the entertaining beginning techniques, re-write the beginning above (Ex: Re-write the beginning using sound action). ]]> 2018-10-23 18:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296146008 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296527420 Lucas Chin-"Did you hear that, George?" I said. "Didn't Hear a thing!"Said george. "Creaak." "Did you hear that?"I said. "Yeah, I heard that too! What is it Billy?"]]> 2018-10-24 15:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296527420 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296527452 Sarah Hemel- "Ahh," I screamed. I just saw a giant bug swing while I was at the haunted house. My friend dared me to do this. I don't like scary things, I can't even read a scary book. If I do I think I'll stay up all night just thinking about it.]]> 2018-10-24 15:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296527452 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528228 gia vitelli- BOO! I stared to run. there was some thing chasing me. It looked like it was a crepey man foloing me. Then I ran to the door but it would not open.]]> 2018-10-24 15:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528228 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528362 Shawn Lobo- I was walking down the staris the i herd a big groning noise.]]> 2018-10-24 15:58:50 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528362 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528489 Dia Patel-  Whats up my name is Billy. CREEK! I heard as I walked inside of the haunted home of ZOMBIES!]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528489 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528742 Alex Mikita- "BOOM" Jim did you hear that. That was the scary and it freacked out. It was]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:29 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528742 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528749 Paige Fedak- "WOOSH" I heard as I stepped foot in the scariest haunted house ever.  As I started to walk through I heard a "SMASH" come from upstairs. I screamed at the top of my lungs as a zombie walked slowly around. It was groaning like how zombies do. ]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528749 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528876 Omar Sanchez- BOOM did you here that who ever no lets go check it out.What is that gre- jump]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:42 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528876 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528926 Andrea Lopez- Boom! Went the door behind me. ]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528926 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528976 Ben Cenker-"Slam." the door opened with out warning, Billy then ran to the door witch closed in front of him. Then he trembled in fear as he walked in the door, then he said to himself "Why did I come in here?". He ran for his life when he heard the sound of a blood radleing scream.]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296528976 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529014 Ali Geffrard- hi my name is oh no no please no help! ]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529014 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529017 LUCAS CHIN-I dove behind a clothes rack as a skeleton emerged from a door. "I WILL FIND YOU." He said in a scary voice.]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529017 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529033 Run I should run!]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529033 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529040 Francisco Salto: awwwo! huh what is that uh is that a wolf? grrr! it's getting closer why is it here this is a city .  Is there more of them? I need to tell the town people. uh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!]]> 2018-10-24 15:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529040 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529053 Jake LaRusso -  "Woosh" as a plate pass by me and howling sound was around me, " Did you hear that" I wispered. "What noise?" my friend said.]]> 2018-10-24 16:00:00 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529053 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529067 Randy Collaguazo--BOOOOOO! I screamed and started running but when i was running i fell to the ground.I told my friend why we had to do this but i did not finish because we hear a loud noise.HAHAHAHA! we rand out the door and went to our house]]> 2018-10-24 16:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529067 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529145 krish patel-billy went inside the house and started shivering. He walked upstairs and started walking towards the bedroom. As he walked inside and Creek! the floor board was loose.]]> 2018-10-24 16:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529145 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529299 Klever Jimenez- "CRASH" the door in front of me smashed into the wall. A old lady screamed at my face and swallowed her spit. "AHH" i screamed. I thought this was going to be a haunted house not a disgusting lady spitting in my face. I was ferious i screamed and yelled "LET ME OUT".]]> 2018-10-24 16:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529299 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529469 Randy Cela- Bang!!! The door closed rapidly behind  me suddenly I heard I heard loud  foot steps i opened the door from a room then BAM!!! lightning hit over the  house i got so scared i went downstairs and the door was locked.]]> 2018-10-24 16:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529469 https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529546 Jayda Alexis - My coriosty turned into hoorr    ]]> 2018-10-24 16:00:52 UTC https://padlet.com/agroome/hztsv9ddfvc6/wish/296529546