Jade by Elise Song

Malia Ramos

2017-10-30 15:29:17 UTC

I like how creative she was with her story. I like how realistic the drama is in the story. I love the plot twist in the story. I like how she rarely ever needed to look at her story, she new what she was going to say before presentations even started.

Joshua Edeko

edekojos000 — 2017-10-30 15:29:22 UTC

Her synopsis was very interesting, I would actually read her story. She could improve on her eye contact a little bit. In all, how she explains her story is spot on.

Zoey

nguyezoe000 — 2017-10-30 15:29:25 UTC

She sounds like she’s very confident in her story and she really knows the information. It seems very thought out.very descriptive with her synopsis . I like the story it was very dramatic. And creative

Emely Pineda

2017-10-30 15:29:26 UTC

-so creative
-grabs the audiences attention to read the short story
-I love this!

Jordan Nash

2017-10-30 15:29:31 UTC

The format is well presented appropriate for the assignment.

Meilan :o

2017-10-30 15:29:32 UTC

- Great format!! c:
- I don't see any problems here ><
- AWESOME STORY

Leah

2017-10-30 15:29:34 UTC

It was nice and clearly done great. Informative and interesting

Blanca Colindrez

2017-10-30 15:29:36 UTC

Good content, very interesting and imaginative. Seems well organized and planned

CyMore

2017-10-30 15:29:37 UTC

Very creative
Sounds like a very good and entertaining story

Maria Garcia

2017-10-30 15:29:37 UTC

Her creativity within her short story is very good she added drama which is good to keep the audience engaged.

Saray Enriquez

2017-10-30 15:29:39 UTC

Story was really creative lots of drama. Story plot was clear and entertaining.

Skyler S

2017-10-30 15:29:45 UTC

Format:
- Story is well thought out
- Paragraphs are neat and organized
- Story is fun and cteative as well

Matthew M.

2017-10-30 15:29:45 UTC

She presents the project In a clear and confident way and really summarized her project effectively

Aidon

2017-10-30 15:29:46 UTC

Samantha

2017-10-30 15:29:46 UTC

The story is well developed and planned out. She knows her story very well and can present it well.

Matthew Vu

2017-10-30 15:30:13 UTC

Cute cheesy story, had a format that while outlandish was extremely easy to follow and had hilarious plot twists, which didn’t stray from the main point. Which is an example of good formatting in a story.

Bryan Robinson

2017-10-30 15:30:28 UTC

Perfectly formatted

Marisol Villafana

villamar002 — 2017-10-30 15:30:30 UTC

The format of her story was really good
I liked her story and It’s very creative and well thought out

Vanessa Igbeka

2017-10-30 15:31:40 UTC

Her synopsis of the story is very well thought out and has a lot of interesting plot twist that seem entertaining.

Jason

2017-10-30 15:31:57 UTC

Jade wrote a snazzy story with a format that made the plot clear. However, syntax could be improved.

Skyler B

2017-10-30 15:32:56 UTC

Very complex story line. Very brilliant story with action, suspense, romance the whole shabang.

Haley Maret

2017-10-30 15:35:32 UTC

Your story is very well throughout and strategic. Great job.

Aidon

2017-10-30 15:36:15 UTC

Very creative and organized. This was also thoughtful and well planned out.

Noel

2017-10-30 15:36:25 UTC

The story had a clear format with a problem and climax and all.