I heard a fly buzz- when i died by Tonyetta Clark https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb Made by tonyetta, Briana, ally shhhhhhwab en-us 2017-04-03 12:53:37 UTC 2024-11-06 14:07:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Bigthunderstorm.png Poem Meaning schwab817 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164315661 Death cant be a perfect thing. Even one small thing can change the outcome of something]]> 2017-04-03 13:04:03 UTC https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164315661 Figurative Language nolan779 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164316553
  • "And Breaths were gathering firm" - everyone held their breath when she was about to die.
  • " The Eyes around - had wrung them dry" - Her family was done crying fro her when she was ready to die. 
  • "Was like the Stillness in the Air-" Everyone was still and were watching her.
  • "I willed my Keepsakes - Signed away" - She gave away all her belongings to her family / friends.
  • And then the Windows failed - everything began to grow dark.
    • ]]>     2017-04-03 13:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164316553     clark866 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164318223 2017-04-03 13:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164318223 I heard a Fly buzz-when I died- schwab817 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164318657 I heard a Fly buzz-when I died-
    The Stillness in the room
    Was like the Stillness in the Air-
    Between the Heaves of Storm-

    The Eyes around-had wrung them dry-
    And Breaths were gathering firm
    For that last Onset-when the King
    Be witnessed-in the Room-

    I willed my Keepsakes-Signed away
    What portion of me be
    Assignable-and then it was
    There interposed a Fly-

    With Blue-uncertain stumbling Buzz-
    Between the light-and me-
    And then the Windows failed-and then
    I could not see to see-]]>     2017-04-03 13:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164318657     Imagery clark866 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164320192
  • The stillness in the room was like the stillness in the air 
  • The eyes around-wrung them dry
  • Breaths were gathering firm
  • There imposed a fly
  • uncertain stumbling buzz
  • between the light and me
  • and then the windows failed and then i could not see to see
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  • "I heard a Fly buzz - when I died -" give emphasis to the fly buzzing
  • "The Stillness in the Room
    Was like the Stillness in the Air -" How everyone was watching her and waiting.
  • The Eyes around - had wrung them dry -
    And Breaths were gathering firm" - Bringing attention to everyone that had cried for her and were holding their breath

    • ]]>     2017-04-04 12:02:15 UTC https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164585789     An over dramatic death nolan779 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164586021 How would you feel if the last thing you heard was a fly?]]> 2017-04-04 12:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164586021 Consonance clark866 https://padlet.com/clark866/hygjnx1j7hyb/wish/164588775
  • room and storm
  • firm and room
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