Interesting- i liked how you talked about the facts right away instead of waiting until later to talk about them

Even Better- slides were kind of boring

I- I think it's crazy that over 58,000 have sued Johnson & Johnson

E- Though the presentation was really good, a way to better it would be sounding more interested in the topic. By using more voice inflections, the audience would be more captivated.

Interesting to know the effects of the product and that the company already knew the effects and still continued to sell the product

Sound more lively

Interesting: that they knew what was in the baby powder and have been promoting it

Even better: Maybe put a little bit more information on the slides

Interesting - I thought your topic was very interesting and how you brought up the geological facts about how talcum is mined right next to asbestos.

Even Better - The slides could have had a little bit more information on them.

Interesting they knew the paper powder had toxic things in it and they kept promoting it

Even better put more on the slides

I - How they went on for so long without being shut down knowingly harming people.

E - maybe try to be a little more energetic it seemed like you weren't enjoying it at all.

Interesting: they were able to stay in business

Even better: slides could have a little bit more info

Interesting:

It's crazy how much money they got sued for

Even Better: Maybe have your slides a little better to look at. Kinda boring

I: I had no idea this even happened! You would think they would find a way to separate the asbestos from the talcum, especially since they knew for so long.

E: With just a little more practice the transitions could be cleaner, but this project lends itself to distinct sections

Interesting- Learning the mining process of Asbestos and Talcum

Even Better- I’d like to see some more bullet points touching on the things talked about and some more interesting slides/graphics.

I: I did not know about this case before this presentation so, it was interesting to learn.

E: add more visuals to make the slices more insteresting

e - nothing of note

Interesting: How much the product was impacting the lives of so many people.

Even better: Speak with some more confidence

I- It was interesting how many cancer cases it caused.

E- Put some more things on the slides.

I: I think the info they provided was good.

E: try to read off the slices too much.

I - I thought you group members were very well versed in the content and it made learning the content more interesting

E - less screen reading, even note cards would be, also there is an overabundance of bullet points

I: there was a leak before and they knew about it

E: could read off slides less

I: 533 million people's information was just sold away for the money.

E: Can get a little rambly at points

I- I can't believe that over 533 million users had their information shared

E- Try not to read directly off the slides or move a lot when speaking. Ava did a good job with not reading off the slides

I - How they are able to sell our information for money.

E - The slides were so wordy it was hard to follow, try to stand still when you are presenting because it takes away from what you are talking about.

Interesting was they were selling people information for money

Even better more eye contact with the audience

I: it’s interesting how much Facebook tried to cover up the issues

E: I think the slides might be too crowded

Interesting: Facebook knew about everything but they did not tell anyone

Even better: less screen reading

I- The amount of info about people that was sold out

E- Try not to read off of slides too much

I- How Facebook tried to cover up the incident

E-

Interesting: That they were doing this for t

Even Better: Could have less information on the slides and maybe have some pictures.

I- That facebook knew there was a leak and didn't do anything about it.

E- Slides had a lot of words on them.

I-How the reaction of Facebook was very apathetic

E-Could have less information on the slides

I: Loved the pictures on each slide, they kept me engaged and connected with the information well.

E: With a little more practice/memorization you may not need to read off your script as much, but it was helpful in keeping structure, not a huge issue.

I- I'm surprised with how long this scandal went on for

E- Try to sound more interested in what you are saying and while your group mates are speaking. Practicing once or twice beforehand might improve stumbling

I- how the company pushed the unethical activity to just make the numbers

E- Maybe not just read off the paper in from but just have a look at it

I- The standards or quotas that employees had to meet

E- Try to read off of notes or slides less

Interesting - I thought your topic was interesting and I also thought that the way Wells Fargo got their money and made their employees behave unethically was interesting.

Even Better - Try not moving around as much when you aren't talking but other than that I thought it was great.

Interesting lots of interesting information

Even better more eye contact with the audience

I - I had never heard about this scandal so it was interesting to hear about

E - cut back on the script

I - I found it interesting how the CEO of the company looked past the problem and continued with the errors in place.

E - the slide and paper reading really retracted from the final product of this assignment. Additionally, when you are not actively speaking you should try to have good body language. Not all of your group members made eye contact with audience.

I: It was interesting to hear how they fixed their issues and tried to move forward.

E: Less reading off of your notes

Interesting: I thought the etopic was very interesting.

Even better: I thought it was good Maybe not read off the paper as much but it was pretty good.

I: I think it was structured really well throughout

E: being a bit more engaging would be helpful

Interesting- i had no idea that these things were going on

Even better-try not to lean on things around you

I- How they opened fake accounts

E- Not reading off the slides as much

I- I had never heard about this happening. Very crazy incident.

E- Try to look more entertained when another person is talking

I: I didn't even know Papa was racist, that is so disappointing. Bizarre he didn't take accountability.

E: When talking, try not to rock back and forth.

I: it was crazy that this guy used the n word.

E: less word on the slices they look overwritten.

I -interesting that this happened and I never heard about it

E - the technical difficulties at the start really damaged the first impression of your presentaion

Interesting - Your topic was very interesting and I also found the information about how all of their stakeholders were affected because of one person was interesting.

Even Better - I thought you guys did great and I don't think anything could have been better.

Interesting Big papa john was not a good person

Even better more pictures and make slides more interesting

I: I didn't know the CEO stepped down

E: could speak slower and clearer

Even better- work on not reading off the slides

Interesting: I have never heard of this and didn't even know that this had happened

Even better: Some slides could have been neater to help me stay engaged. and could have split up the slides felt like lane said a lot compared to others.

I- Did not know the founder was a racist

E- Slides are a bit wordy

I - How fast they lost millions of dollars

E - Add a little color to the slides so it would be a little more visually appealing

I- How much they lost due to the lack of accountability

E-Make sure everyone contributes to the presentation equally

I: it’s interesting how papa John blamed everything around him rather than taking accountability

E: i think body language is important. Rather than crossing arms and being behind a desk or podium, try talking with your hands more and eliminate barriers between you and the audience

I: Interesting how long they served

E: Maybe less reading straight off the slides.

I - interesting that they did a lot of the same things as Enron

E - not a huge problem but maybe spread out a little more

I- Family Run business at that size

E- Space out presenters a little bit more

I: crazy how they stole money from the company for their own benefit.

E: try to read less from the slices.

I: they used the money they stole on a golf course

E: read off slides less

Interesting: family business at that size

Even better: Space out the information a little more.

I- Unbelievable how they inflated earnings by so much ($3 billion)

E- Try not to fully read off the slides

I-how similar it was to enron

E-Looking at the slides a bit less

I - How it was very similar to Enron

E - More pictures on the slides

I interesting how they took so much money from the company

E maybe just spread out

Interesting: I enjoyed that you talked about the consequences of the decisions made.

Even better: I would’ve liked to see you guys space out a little better and not just stay in the corner. You have a lot of space in this room, try to use it.

I: Crazy they took so much money! 2.3 Billion?!?!

E: Make sure to talk slow and enunciate

I - it was interesting that amazon used to be specifically a digital book store

E - some of the group members screen read turning their bodys away from the audience

I - Interesting case study

E - Less reading off the slides

I: crazy how rich Jeff bezos is

E: speech louder so the whole class can hear.

I: crazy that they don't care about safety they just get it out as fast as possible.

E: try to add some more pictures throughout

I: Can't believe one of the factories was over 100 degrees. Reminds me of the story about how safer working conditions bring up productivity.

E: Try not to read off slides, with more practice there would be less pauses or awkward moments- watch out for "um" and "like"

I- The state of the work place in amazon

E-Try sounding more interested with the presentation

I: slides fit the theme of the presentation

E: could speak louder

I: Intresting that amazon disregarded employees.

E: Read less of the slides, and try to use more volume when speaking

I - How they are such a big company and have such good turnaround time for processing packages.

E - try to speak with confidence

I Did not realize the working conditions at amazon

E just maybe know your information better

Interesting: I really liked that photo that shows the workplace in Amazon.

Even better: I would like to see a little more nonverbal communication.

I: interesting how they force the workers to work in that kind of environment.

E: have the other group members to do more

I - its interesting how apple phones still only are good for so long due to the updates eventually being to big for the older models to handle

E - slightly less screen reading

I: Intresting how they got caught intentionally slowing down the iphones

E: The presentaion could use a little more, felt like there was something missing, kinda bland

I: they have been doing that since iphone 6 or 7

E: could read off slides less

Interesting - I thought the topic was interesting and how Apple knew what they were doing and did it on purpose when talking about shutting down the older iPhones to force people to get new ones.

Even Better - The slides could have been a little bit more appealing.

I: it sucks that this company has such power that they make these unethical things to make customers buy a new phone.

E: try to read less from the slices

I - I wonder if Apple is still doing this with their phones now

E - Less looking at the screen while presenting

I- Great unethical finding. Apple's batteries wouldn't be my first thought for unethical products.

E- Read less off the screen

Interesting: I never knew this about Apple.

Even better: try to add an extra slide or two.

I Apple was saying that the phones were getting slowed because they are old

E Less looking at the screen

I - How apple knows they are screwing their customers and everyone still has an iphone

E - Try to say "um" less

I: understandable why customers were so skeptical

E: try to rock back and forth less; stand still

Interesting - Your topic was interesting and your information on the topic was also very interesting.

Even Better - Try not to move around as much when you're not the person presenting.

I - Interesting how we have so much faith that we will be safe flying however that's not always the case, interesting the pilots were not trained for this model (doesn't see smart)

E - Nervous fidgeting (playing with fingers) not a huge problem

I: crazy that many people died because of their negligence.

E: slices were boring try to add pictures showing more about the case.

I: 346 fatalities were linked to a software failure, that is a lot of people to lose for an oversight.

E: Watch out for "ums"

I: That is crazy the your a plane company and you don't care about keeping people safe you just care about the money.

E: Try to add some more pictures to keep the slides engaging to look at.

I: all of the passengers lost their lives

E: could have more pictures

I that Boeing only cared about the money and not the people

E maybe just some pictures

I - How the FAA do not regulate all airline companies.

E - Boring slides try and say um less

I- Its very sad how many people lost their lives due to poor training

E- Try not to fidget as much when speaking

I - How they let this happened more than once is absolutely crazy

E - The slides were pretty boring

I; Crazy that it took over 300 peoples lives

E; Try to sit still, very bouncy and fidgety

I: Interesting how many fatalities there were.

E: Too Many "ums"

I: it was the largest oil spill ever

E: could maybe know your information a little better

I: Interesting how much oil was spilt

E: Practice more because it seemed a little chaotic.

I; Intresting that it's in 2010 was one of the biggest oils spill

E; Try your link ahead of time to prevent any issues

I: that is crazy how much oil was spilled and they didn't know for 87 days.

E: practice more

Interesting - I thought the ethical issues were interesting and how they related to your topic.

Even Better - Try to not look at the slides as much but you overall did a good job.

I-Just how much was affected by this oil spill

E- a little bit more practice

I - How it took them 87 days to get a cap on the rigg is wild

E - run though the presentation once or twice so you dont try and run eachother over.

I- I can't imagine the terrible environmental impact created by this

E- Know the topic more by either practicing or doing more research

I how much oil was spilled into the ocean

E look up more

Interesting: I really liked the pictures

Even better: I don’t think you need a note card for speaking for 2 min, try to not use one

I: it was crazy all the natural damage they caused.

E: try to practice before presenting looks like you guys did not know your parts

I - Interesting how it was the largest oil spill ever

E - could know the information a little bit more

I: 134 million gallons of oil is insane

E: With more practice there would be less awkward transitions. Watch out for "ums"

I :how much money they lost

E: not read straight off the slide

I: they fired 30,000 employees

E: could read off slides less

I: They lost that much money and then had to try and get all the money back from letting employees go

E: i liked the bullet points but go on about them you just read off the slide and didn't have any other information.

I- Interesting finding from Volkswagen. I never knew this was a thing.

E- Maybe try to sound more interested and read off the slides less

I: The emission being 40 times higher than what they reported is crazy, so widespread also with over 11 million cars.

E: It would have been helpful to expand on the shadows and show casters, explain how they are related

Even better- expand more on the topic and don’t read off of the slides.

Interesting - I thought the topic was interesting and how Volkswagen got away with having their emissions up to 40% higher than what they said.

Even Better - I felt like the presentation was a little short and it would have been helpful to know a little bit more information.

Interesting: I didn't know this about Volkswagen, this is a very scandalous case.

Even better: Maybe be a little more prepared to elaborate on your slides.

i: i think it’s interesting how the ceo denied having any knowledge of the situation but then admitted wrongdoing after he resigned.

e: maybe seem a little more enthusiastic and less like you’re just trying to get through it (although we did just get off break so i mean valid)

I: crazy how employees got fired because they tried to save the company

E: better voice tone

I- How they fired so many employees

E- Could have stretched the