#v You could walk around a bit more but I really like your TED talk

#v maybe try memorizing next time. ( u got it! )

#v if you memorized the whole thing.

#V I think you were too stiff, so like move a little more.

#v try to memorize and you will better than better.....wait

#v maybe speak a bit slower so its a bit clearer love it though!

#v next time try to slow it down a bit.

#v you should try memorizing the TED talk next time

#V Try making more eye contact with the audience.

#v talk a little slower

#v maybe try to move around a little bit more and try to get higher quality photos.

#V I think you could try memorizing.

#v you should try to memorize it next time because I see the potential in you.

#v next time if you could memorize the script

#v I think you could've memorized.

#v I think you should have memorize the TED

#v try to make more eye contact.Try to stop swaying around.

#v try speaking with more feeling & go slow.

try making more eye contact with others.

#V Try memorizing and one of your map slides was confusing.

#v maybe try projecting your voice more but great job!

#v I think you could have talked a little faster or more clear but otherwise great presentation!

#v next time talk a bit slower and look at the audience more.

v# you didn't have lots eye contact to your audiance but other whys good job

#v I noticed you kept swaying around but good job.

Maybe next time you should try to memorize it because this time you did AMAZING!!

#v I think you could've memorized it though.

#v move around you were stiff

v# when some of the things went wrong you could have ignored it and act like nothing happened but other whys good job.

#V Try memorizing

#v you should definitely memorize next time! u got this!

try to speak more clear but otherwise, great presentation!

#v maybe try speaking a little slower so it will be more clear but good job!

#v walk around and look at audience.

v# you could have practicst more so you would not studerd as much but other wise I loved it.

#v maybe next time try memorizing. I think you did a great job.

#v you could have memorized a bit more A made more eye contact. Added more feeling & less swaying. AMAZING Job

#V Try to look at the audience more and be louder.

#v you just need to stop swaying and need more information.

Could have memorized & added more information but A M ZING.

#V bro I have nothing other than perfect. (even though one can never achieve it.)

#v you need to include a bit of information.

Just like Mrs Sandor said, YOU NEED TO MEMORIZE IT!!!!!

#V memorize you rarely looked at your card so I think you got this, good job.

#v YOU need to try memorize.

#V great job next time try reading a couple sentences ahead so you can remember them and look at the audience instead of looking at the card as much but great job!

#v Maybe next time try memorizing.

#v I think you could have memorized a little bit more to speak clearly.

#v you stuttered way too much and you didn't speak clearly other than that good speech.

#v Try to make the words a bit more clear but it was really good

#v try to talk more clear i could not under some parts.

#v you should have practice more so you would not have studerd as much and you could have just looked at your cards more so you would not have to studerd as much dut other whise good job.

#v you kept forgetting to click your slides & you were stampering a lot. Overall good job.

#v Try to talk louder and and look at the audience ore other than that your speech as good

#v Maybe try to speak up a little bit and memorize more so that you can make more eye contact. All of that aside, I loved it!

#V Try speaking louder.

#v next time speak a little louder other than that good job.

#v maybe next time speak a little bit louder!

#v talk louder also look at the audience.

#v you could have looked up more & memorized it a bit more. Speeck a bit more & put more feeling. Great Job.

#v you could have practice so you wouldn't have to look at your card so much also you could have pick more pictures on the slides that had only one.

#V try making some more eye contact.

#v try memorizing!

#v you could have memorized a little bit more but other whise amazing job.

#v YOU NEED TO MEMORIZE IT!! you would do great and it would take your presentation to the next level! :)

#v try memorizing

#v stop swaying around but other than that it was a great speech.

#v try to memorize the speech

#v Next time try to memorize it