Your Poetry, p1 by Leslie Hefler https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e Share one of your favorite lines from your poem. If you comment on a classmate's line, please be kind and encouraging. en-us 2020-02-03 18:52:31 UTC 2020-03-01 22:47:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f54a.png Haddie Mckellar https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/449582554 For my favorite line from my "Sleep" Poem, "Slashes in her sides, seeping of red and dark, glass shards stuck in her heart. She sits and weeps, too insecure to even try to soar over the sky." This is talking about one of the sheep i encountered while i was in that state of between sleep and awake. I was counting Sheep. I call this Poem " Sheepcatcher" It is supposed to be a play on words for dreamcatcher, but instead, it seemes like im 'catching' sheep. 
For my next poem about Snow,  this is my favorite line, "  I wrote my name in letters of gold, i still see it in old photographs. Every single one makes me laugh." I have many many more parts of that poem that i love so much, mostly because i based it on My feelings of trying to get over the loss of my brother, and going to a place, basically my second home, a place we always used to go with my brother. It is called Hume Lake. It is not the christian camp, though. It's a cabin i have went to over years of my life and the lake i went to, and the one huge log from a deceased tree that floats in the water. This poem is very special to me, so another part of the poem i love is this one, " It’s as cold as the sun, and there isn’t any fun on Wednesdays. The mirror reflects on me instead, i can’t manage to get out of bed. The lake waits for me, but i stay. Drinking black coffee is my dismay" I know that this is very long, but i feel as if it all flows together. This poem is called, " It's as cold as the sun". Thank you for reading this. I hope you liked my favorite lines from my poems i made for PP#3.]]> 2020-02-24 16:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/449582554 Mark Wang mwang25_10 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664286 For my favorite line form the 2 poem is "Once your in the wonderful world of sleep
You might make the leap
To a third world
One that you can be undisturbed". This is talking about when you go to sleep and you enter the world of dreaming. Side note the first 2 lines are supposed to be together but since that one line is 2 long for this pallet it was made into 2.
]]> 2020-02-27 20:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664286 Jacob Critchfield https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664343 My favorite lines came from my final poem. The name of my final poem is America's Pastime. The lines are '' Man on second with two outs 
As I come to bat I feel like Mike Trout''. Those are my favorite lines because Mike Trout is my favorite baseball player.


]]> 2020-02-27 20:26:33 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664343 Aidan Martin https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664514 My favorite line from my snow poem is "And then it hit me right in the head my most evil foe 
For it was my sister who had come to play in the snow.' This line is about two siblings having fun in the snow.

]]> 2020-02-27 20:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664514 Tuan Pham https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664883 One of my favorite line from this power poetry is from my metaphor poem "Good Lies". The line is " You make lies seem good".]]> 2020-02-27 20:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664883 pguti25_3 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664969 My favorite line from one of my poems is "Fly to my freedom".   This line came from my final poem. my final poem was about someone being trapped in heart broken situation. this line was inspired by a true story.]]> 2020-02-27 20:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451664969 Carimel Valenzuela cvale25_1_2 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665146 My favorite line is "I still hear the same sounds.Until night arrives,  And I can finally sleep" this line was in my sleep poem

]]> 2020-02-27 20:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665146 Cassie Zietlow cziet25_3 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665160 One of my favorite lines from the poem is "The wonders of the pages swirlin' and twirlin' ". This is from my poem "Book Worm". This is about someone may feel when reading a book. ]]> 2020-02-27 20:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665160 Hannah Reyes hreye25_1_2 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665366 My favorite line from one of my poems is ]]> 2020-02-27 20:28:25 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665366 Zoe Om https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665391 My favorite line is from my metaphor poem which is titled " Night Sky." Where the line is, 
"Standing up, he declared to the stars,
Just as if they’re his own silent audience, his dream."
I found it very clever it and I'm really just proud of it.
]]> 2020-02-27 20:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451665391 Noelle Huynh https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451751951 My favorite line is from my final poem called my hope." That the hurt stops hurting". I feel like that was just one of the lines I really felt.]]> 2020-02-28 00:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451751951 Natalia Ortega norte25_1_1 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451820001 My favorite line is from the poem about snow. "Locked inside 
away from the world
I sit, overwhelmed as my mind twirls". This is my favorite line because I can relate to it the most and I also know that at one point something has been stuck or bothering someones mind. Whenever your overthinking about something, are stress, or just have something on your mind its like your on lock down and can't focus on anything else.  Your mind is like a blizzard with thoughts falling and flying around just like snow does when its snowing.
]]> 2020-02-28 04:38:08 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/451820001 Leah Zeutzius https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452093257 My favorite line was from my final poem: "As you go around,
And wear a crown
of shining diamond stars
You are the ruler 
Of your universe"
]]> 2020-02-28 17:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452093257 cvale25_1_2 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452095551 2020-02-28 17:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452095551 Sophia Amancio saman251_3 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452095655 My favorite line I wrote was"I thought it was over but there was only more" and the reason why this was my top favorite line is because of the suspense I was able to build.]]> 2020-02-28 17:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452095655 Isabel Nunez inune25_1_2 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452096207 My favorite line in my poem which is my sleep poem is ¨The desperate cries for help are as loud as a lions roar¨ I love this line because it shows the amount of intense emotion and to me it is a very moving line that sets part of the mood of the poem.]]> 2020-02-28 17:06:17 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452096207 Jaden Houdashelt jhoud25_3 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452096498 One of my favorite lines was actually from my own poem called, "Expectations". "Navigating teen life has been one heck of a thing", I stated. I wrote that because my life has been so crazy lately. I've been so busy and my head has felt so foggy. I am busy like every single day and really have no time to mess around. I really just want to sleep for like a whole century  and then later wake up and do it again.  I really felt this line stated what I have been feeling like. Recently I have grown to learn that poetry is my thing, it's a way I can express myself and it relieves my stress. Writing down how you feel and turning it into a beautiful poetic art piece is something that everyone can do, it has little to none rules. 

]]> 2020-02-28 17:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452096498 Kayley Van kvan25_4 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452096817 My favorite line from any of the poems I have written, is "I’d stay there forever,
At the meadow of life." This line is from my last poem. I especially like this line because I wrote about a meadow, and this meadow was a place I really enjoyed going to, it took away my problems and made me relaxed.


]]> 2020-02-28 17:07:08 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452096817 Marc Martinez mmart252_3 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452097258 My favorite line from my poem is "Ugh, I have two write another poem" because I can realest to this poem because poetry can be hard for me.]]> 2020-02-28 17:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452097258 Isaac Aguilera iagui25_2 https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452098570 My favorite line I wrote was from my snow poem, "And on the ground he dropped" This was my favorite line because it is where John the kid freezes to death. Everyone else cannot get to him in time so he dies.  ]]> 2020-02-28 17:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/leslie_hefler/hvyuwfdodl6e/wish/452098570