IELTS writing by Baoloc UniLang

3 ways of reducing traffic congestions in big cities

unilangbaoloc — 2021-08-17 12:12:19 UTC

Firstly, one thing local government can do is improve public transport efficiency and service in big cities. There has been a rapid increase in car, motorbike owership and usage in recent years. Everyone has at least a vehicle. If there are public transportation, the number of cars and motobikes can be reduced in the road.

Secondly, the government should encourage people to use bicycle and go on foot in the near way. It doesn't only reduce the number of vehicles, but it also helps to protect the environment.

Last but not least, traffic management is the best way. Many people don't follow the traffic law, which make the traffic congestion. Therefore, more police officers and street cameras in order to make sure that everyone is following the traffic law

Advantages of studying abroad.

unilangbaoloc — 2021-08-19 12:34:55 UTC

The biggest reason is the chance to experience different styles of education. Becoming an international student can greatly broaden your study option. You will experience a brand-new country with incredible new outlooks, customs and activities.

When studying abroad, you can take in new culture. Every country has own culture, you can find incredible new foods, customs, traditions, and social atmospheres. You will have the opportunity to witness a completely new way of life.

One huge benefit of studying abroad is chance to learn a new language. Learning a language can be a real challenge, but there nothing quite like living somewhere which that language is spoken natively.

Studying abroad is also a good chance to find a good job. With a new perspective on culture, language skills, a great education and a willingness to learn. Needless to say, all of these are very attractive to future employers.

While studying abroad, you will meet a lot of people. This gives you the opportunity to make friends with people from all kinds of different cultures and learn about other countries and customs

Studying abroad make you become independent. Leaving your home country, you may have concerns and sadness, sometimes you will feel homesick. But it is the challenges, if you overcome, you can become a more mature person

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.What are the advantages of such a solution?

unilangbaoloc — 2021-08-24 12:40:13 UTC

this solution can restrict the growing demand for cars, motorbikes and reduce the risk of air pollution. Almost every big city on the world is suffering from the heavy amount of traffics on roads which often cause congestion. It waste the time of people, cause pollution due to the harmful gas eliminated by cars. If the government decides to impose a heavy tax on private car owners, people will not often use their vehicle and when people make the decision to purchase a car, they will also take the cost of heavy taxes into considerations, and may, in the end, postpone their plan of having a car. There aren't a number of cars and motorbike on roads, there will not be smoking, and the air pollution is reduced

Vy homework:

unilangbaoloc — 2021-08-29 10:48:03 UTC

Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Vy

2021-08-31 09:49:44 UTC

Many people think that hosting the Olympics wastes a lot of money. instead, it is more necessary to use the money to improve social problems. However, the Olympics bring many great benefits to the host country. Lack : thesis statement

From the point of view, organizing the big Olympics requires a huge cost. For example: The Athens Olympics were the most expensive, by the time it took place. Immediately after hosting the Olympics, Greece had to incur a huge debt of up to 168 billion euros. Moreover, the investments in the Olympics in Greece are unlikely to pay off for the long time, such as: many stadiums and equipment are no longer used after the Olympics. The tourism industry has also not benefited much from the Olympics.

Beside, the Olympics bring a lot of  benefits to the host country. For instance, the Olympics in Sydney in 2000 brought many benefits to Australia. There are about 100,000 new jobs created by the effects of the Olympics, and the Games increase the number of tourists to Australia by 1.6 million. This has greatly improved the Australian economy and society.
- This is not a report, no number is needed
In conclusion, hosting the Olympics has many benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, having the Olympics is very necessary to bring the countries of the world together.

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

unilangbaoloc — 2021-08-31 12:20:47 UTC

Body 1 : people's opinion - job satisfaction
Body 2: your own opinion - big salary

Bao Han: Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

unilangbaoloc — 2021-08-31 12:20:48 UTC

Some people think that high pay is more significant than job fulfillment. But in my own opinion, I disagree with this view because lack of job satisfaction could harmful to work performance and result in loss of job.

First of all, the absence of a sense of contentment in the work place could cause losing job. This occurs because there would be less dedication to work which would lead to poor work attitude, reduce productivity and ultimately loss the job. High salary just is an initial motivation for the workers. If workers keep making mistakes when you are not satisfied with job, their salary also goes down.

On the other hand, work contentment happens when an employee feels he or she is having jo stability, career growth and a comfortable work life balance. A person who enjoys job can concentrate more in his or her work, make better result. They may also work longer hour effectively, which in-turn helps the company grow of goodwill with the clients.

In conclusion, job satisfaction in my opinion is more paramount in any organization than a big salary

Vy

2021-09-01 16:58:51 UTC

It is controvertial that earning a great salary is more important than being able to do what you love. I completely agree with this opinion. Nowadays, people who want to have a good life need a hight salary to pay for personal necessities, this is more important than job satisfaction.

Firstly, people want to do the work they love and always have job satisfaction. However, the quality of life is getting higher and higher, requiring people to pay money in daily life. therefore, a high level of income can well provide the necessities of life, it helps them to feel happier and more peaceful.

Secondly, job satisfaction is generated from a large amount of income. The impact of the increase salary will help people quickly get the job done and achieve their targets. When there is a high income, people will relieve stress due to life pressure.

In conclusion, I support the idea that a high salary is much more beneficial than job satisfaction because it reducing numerous predicaments which people face. Beside it preserves tranquillity and creates motivation in work.

Bao Han

2021-09-03 11:44:26 UTC

The bar chart compares the percentage of Canadian boys and girls choosing activities as a hobby for their free time.

Overall, it is clear that male teenagers prefer all types of activities much more than female teenagers . While purchasing is mostly preferred by boys, it is also the lowest for female teenagers

There is a significant disparity between males' and females' preferences. The percentage of boys playing sports is twice as high as that of girls (more than 30 percent for boys and about 10 percent for girls). The number of female teenagers who go shopping (over 5 percent) is only one-seventh as many as boy teenagers.

However, there is not a big difference in computer games and music. For both genders, computer games accounted for between 14 percent for girls a less than 20 percent for boys. Music is preferred as a valuable free activity by the same number of both girls and boys in Canada, at around 19 percent.

Vy

2021-09-04 09:56:53 UTC

The bar chart shows the favorite recreational activities of young people in Canada.

Overall, it can be seen that more young men than young girls participate in various leisure activities. It is noticeable that male teenager spends time higher than female teenager for shopping and doing sports.

For male teenager, shopping accounts for the highest at 35 percent, while for girls, it accounts for just over 5 percent. Similarly, young mens spend more than twice as much time as girls in sports (around 26 percent and 12 percent respectively).

On the other hand, there was no difference for all teenagers at online gaming and music listening activities. In terms of gaming, mans spend about 17 percent and 14 percent on girls. In addition, listening to music is popular among both sexes. This form of entertainment accounts for about 19 percent for both boy and girl.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezcNFdnshbk

unilangbaoloc — 2021-09-05 11:53:21 UTC

write a short review about this video: 100-150 words
- what did she talk about.
- what you think about her talk.

Bao Han: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezcNFdnshbk&t=15s

2021-09-07 04:25:14 UTC

She talks about women equality. When she was 11 years old, someone thought that women should be in kitchen. She was shocked and angry about that. After class, she talked with her dad. He encouraged her to write letters, and she did, she sent it to some powerful people that she could think at that moment. Finally, she succeed. She realized the magnitude of action. Then, she talked about gender equality, somethings the women need to have. I totally agree with her, because people of all genders have equal rights, responsibilities and opportunities. Gender equality is a human right. Everyone benefits from gender equality

Vy

2021-09-07 10:03:19 UTC

She talked about the equality of women in America and the world. She told a story about when she was 11 years old, she saw a commercial, a student in her class had the idea that women should only be in the kitchen. This shocked and hurt her. she told her dad who encouraged her to write, she did. Then she wrote letters to powerful people in her country such as Hillary Clinton, Linda Ellerbee and Gloria Allred. What's special is that she got a response from these people. Not only that, she succeeded in changing people's minds about the importance of women when she was 11 years old. She is very talented and I support the idea that there should be gender equality in the world. Women are also very talented, they can controls to do many things, they have vision. Therefore, the world needs equality of rights, status and advantages among all genders

Tuesday 7/9 HW

unilangbaoloc — 2021-09-07 12:42:26 UTC

unilangbaoloc — 2021-09-07 12:43:00 UTC

Bao Han

2021-09-09 03:00:49 UTC

The line graph illustrates the figures for daily travel by workers in the United Kingdom using three different forms of transport from 1970 to 2030.

It is clear that, car is the most popular mean of transport in UK commuters throughout the given period. While, the number of people use car and train increase gradually, the number of bus user decrease steadily.

Over the first period of 50 years, the number of people use-> using car to commute rose from 5 million to 7.5 million. And the number of commuting rail passengers reached 4 million. On the other hand, in the number of bus users there was a small drop of approximately 0.5 million.

By 2030, the number of people using car is expected to hit a peak with 9 million people. And the number of train users is also predicted to grow up, to nearly 5 million. By contrast, the number of bus user is predicted the less popular choice with under 3 million people use a day

Vy

2021-09-09 10:12:18 UTC

The line graph compares the figure for British people who travelling to work everyday by car, train and bus from 1970 to 2030.

From the chart, it can be seen that the UK people prefer to travel by private vehicle rather than using public transport. Besides, cars and trains are used with a significant increase in the number of people while the figure for bus users tends to decrease.

The number of car users increased gradually from 1970 to 2000 (about 5 million to 7 million), it was remained unchanged until 2010. From 2010 to 2020 there was a significant increase to about 8 million people. Similarly, trains go up rapidly between 1970 and 2020 (approximately 2.5 million to 4.5 million people). However, the number of bus users drop steadily over a period of 50 years (about 0.5 million people).

By 2030, it is predicted that the quantity of people traveling by car will achieved about 9 million people, and the number of people traveling by train will also reach nearly 5 million. On the contrary, the people who using the bus will decrease further, to about 3 million users per day.

Vy: Aluminium recycled

2021-09-25 09:52:29 UTC

The diagram illustrated- illustrates the process used to recycled -> recycle aluminium cans. / the process of Ving - the production of beverage cans from used ones.

Overall, the process involves 7 stages, begining- beginning with the use and collection aluminum cans ~~of human~~ and ending with new can products ready for sale again.

To begin with, used cans should be put in recycling bins instead of throw away and destroy the environment. They are then collected and transported to the factory where they are recycled and created into new products. At the factory they are sorted, washed and put in a compressor ready for recycling. Following this, the aluminium is heated to a high enough temperature to melt. After that, they are pressed into aluminum sheets about 2.5mm-6mm thick. Next, they are rolled up to be create new cans. After creating new cans they are transported to the beverage factory to be filled with various drinks. Finally, they are distributed to stores for consumption. Then the whole process is repeated again

Bao Han: aluminium recycle

2021-09-26 05:21:54 UTC

The chart describes how aluminium cans are recycled

Overall, the whole process is a cycle which can be divided into 7 steps. Beginning with used cans (which are) collected from various places and ending with new cans delivered to the retailers.

In the first step, instead of being thrown out- thrown away, the used cans are taken to the ~~collection centre.~~ ~~The cans are collected and transported t~~o the factory, ( repeated ideas) where they are sorted and cleaned. In a special machine, the cans are then shredded and compressed.

The (resulting) metal is then heated to a temperature high enough for the aluminum to melt. It is then rolled out flat to a thickness of between 2.5mm and 6 mm, depending on what it is going to be used for. The aluminium is now ready to be recycled into new packaging, such as drink containers. Finally, the empty cans are sent to a soft drink factory to be filled. The cans can now be sold and reused by the general population.

Bao Han: frozen fish pies

2021-09-26 09:54:30 UTC

The picture illustrates how to make frozen fish pies.

Overall, a fish pie consist of fresh salmon, peas and sauce with sliced potatoes, there are ten stages in its manufacture, from delivery to dispatch. One of the ingredients, potato, goes through its own six-stage preparation process before it can be added to the pie. -> potatoes ans salmon are under a number of stages of preparation before being added into the pie.

The potatoes, which are delivered up to one month. In the work place, they are cleaned, peeled and cut into slices. The slices are boiled and then chilled before being stored.

While - Meanwhile, the fresh salmon is delivered to factory with twelve hours or less. The fresh fish is steamed oven with lemon juice and salt. After that, factory workers remove and dispose of the skin and bones, and the fish is inspected. Following inspection, pre-prepared peas, sauce and potatoes are added. The result are wrapped and frozen. They are ready for dispatch or they may be stored at the factory before being dispatched

Vy: Fish pie

2021-09-28 09:17:29 UTC

The diagram illustrated -> illustrates the process of fish pie production line.

Overall, a fish pie consists of ingredients of peas, sauce, potatoes, salmon and has to go through 10 stages -> , which is produced throughout 10 stages, beginning with the delivery of the ingredients and ending with the products to the consumer -> consumers / for consumption . However, one of the ingredients are potatoes and salmon that needs to prepare before being added to the pie.

The first ingredient is potatoes, which are delivered to the factory for up to a month for processing. In the factory where they are cleaned, peeled and sliced thinly. Next, they are boiled, then chilled and store -> stored .

~~When the fresh salmon is delivered to the factory, lemon juice and salt are added, to the salmon and cooked in the steamer within 12 hours or less of delivery~~.-> After being delivered to the factory within maximum 12 hours, salmon is marinated with salt and lemon. Subsequently, factory workers remove the skin and bones and the fish is inspected. In the next step, the prepared peas, sauce and potatoes are added. The finished fish pies are wrapped. Finally, they are frozen and distributed to stores.

to the consumer.

Bao Han: Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

2021-09-28 09:43:50 UTC

Bike riding is better than using other types of vehicle, but not many people prefer this means of transport. There are several reasons of -> for this unpopularity and some solutions could be be suggested promoting - to/ in order to promote the usage of bicycles.

Firstly, cycling is more physically demanding than riding a motorbike or driving a car. Some people don't - do not have the good health,->; they will -> tend to be exhausted after a long ~~way - >~~ journey. ....Therefore/ To deal with.... / to solve...-> the government could launch campaigns to raise citizens’ awareness of the harmful effects of motorbikes and cars on the environment, and this could encourage people to cycle more often.

Secondly, in the modern life, people are getting much busier than in the past, so individuals want to spend as little time on transport -> travelling/ commuting as possible. They tend to use other types of vehicles such as motorbikes or cars, which would take less time. Therefor -> for that reasons/ consequently/ as a result, in the peak hours, there will be traffic jams, it make -> which makes people move slowly. To solve this problem, raising the taxes and price of petrol are the best way to reduce the number of vehicles, ~~at that time~~ people will use the cycling -> thus more people start opting to cycle. Additionally, more lanes should be built to serve only cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel with bicycles.

Last but not least, ~~the biggest~~-> another reason is safety. There is not much place to park the bike. People often feel anxious when they leave the bicycle outside. Building more parking is the good solution. The government should add more street cameras and police offices to make people feel safer

Vy: Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

2021-09-28 10:40:45 UTC

Using a bicycle is friendly to environment that does not produce emissions like other vehicles. However, nowadays bicycles are not chosen by many traveller -> travelers as a means of transport. My essay below will analyze both causes of not preferable -> such unpopularity and solutions -> suggestions to encourage people to use bicycles.

One of the main causes of this issue is that bicycles are not suitable for traveling in long distances and it is difficult to share lanes with other vehicles. Therefore, people choose to ride a motorbike or a car to save time and be safer than using a bicycle. Furthermore, many people are inactive, they think that cycling is very tiring and sweat -> sweaty a lot when going to work -> during the journey. ~~So that~~ -> as a result/ consequently/ for that reason, they prefer to travel by public transport such as bullet train or bus to be more comfortable and faster.

There are a number of solutions to help solve this problem. The first solution, + is that the government should build more lanes to serve only cyclists, which will make cycling much faster. The second solution is organise ->Another measure to be taken is to organize campaigns to raise people's awareness about the harmful effects of motorbikes and cars on the environment, encouraging people to cycle more often.

In conclusion, there are many reasons why bicycles are not popular. It is necessary to come up with solutions to encourage people to use this pollution free vehicles.

Hung: ingredients make a crepe cake

2021-10-01 09:26:34 UTC

repare sugar, flour, eggs, milk.
- blend egg-white with a little sugar when you see a little bubble then you blend with sugar twice again.
- blend only egg yolk until you can see bubble.
- then you mix a both.
- saute that on the pan with small fire and stir once, then you have a cake so delious and good.

Vy

2021-10-01 09:30:02 UTC

- boil the egg, grated green mango. 
- make sauce: 1 tablespoon salt and sugar, 2 tablespoon comquat juice, fried onion, then mix them toghether
- put rice paper in a bowl, add mango, dried beef mix with sauce. Finally cut the egg and put it on the top of bowl