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      <title>ELA Block 3 Raymond&#39;s Run  by Derick Stephenson</title>
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      <pubDate>2017-01-19 18:40:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>MATTHEW; Jaireek</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition:-Main characters: Squeacky,Raymond.<br>Minor characters: Grechen,Mary Louise,Rosie<br>Setting:Harlem,New York,in the past.<br><br>Conflict: Squeacky wants to win the race and be the best.<br><br>Rising Action<br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-19 19:04:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Serena/Kalei</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition found in the passage includes us meeting ‘’Squeaky’’, Her brother Raymond, Her mom, George, and her father. We learn that she lives in a Harlem area in New York. In the Exposition we learn that Squeeky has a love for running. The conflict occurs when Squeaky, Rosie, Mary Louise,  and Gretchen get into a argument about who's better and who is gonna win the May Day Pole race. The rising action is when Squeaky begins the race after thinking about why she can win. The climax of the story is when she looks over in the middle of the race and sees her brother Raymon running for the first time, while she was running she felt kind of proud and wanted to watch but she had to keep running. The falling action occurs when she and all of the other racers are waiting for the results. The resolution is when squeaky finds out she won the race and she was proud of Gretchen because she could tell she really tried. In the end they ended up in better terms, and squeaky wants Gretchen to help her coach Raymond .</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-19 19:15:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>KAYLA  &amp; KAREN</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Exposition- </strong>Squeaky introduces herself as a runner and her brother Raymond along with her family and also Gretchen and her sidekicks . She says about her background of running and how she expects to win this years race too. Raymond is older than her but she must take care of him.</div><div><strong>Conflict-</strong>She is going against a new girl this year and really doesn't worry about it but she still wants to win. She also has to confront Gretchen and the girls who at one point were her friends.</div><div><strong>Rising action-</strong>She practiced running anytime she could even if it did mean getting in trouble with her parents and getting hit. She practice breathing exercises and all of the other things she can do until the day comes.</div><div><strong>Climax-</strong>The day comes and she is racing and imagining that she is flying through really nice landscapes. She can see Gretchen beside her which means she is really close. They pass the finish line and are waiting for the answers. Squeaky wins.</div><div><strong>Falling Action- </strong>She sees Raymond climb the fence and realises his potential. She even makes peace with Gretchen who at one point was her enemy.</div><div><strong>Resolution- </strong>She decides she might quit running and show Raymond how to run. She realizes that there are more important things to her than winning.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:43:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rayleen......Kenai</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:43:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jaireek,Matthew</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148413516</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition:-Main characters: Squeacky,Raymond.<br>Minor characters: Grechen,Mary Louise,Rosie<br>Setting:Harlem,New York,in the past.<br><br>Conflict: Squeacky wants to win the race and be the best.<br><br>Rising Action: Gretchen,Mary Louise,and Rosie stop and pick on Squeacky about the upcoming race.Then she defends her brother when she thinks they are picking on him.<br><br>Climax: Squeacky finishes the race good and beats Gretchen.<br><br>Falling Action: Squeacky realizes that Gretchen is a good runner.Also,she realizes that Raymond is a good runner as well.She plans to coach him so that he can have something to be proud of.<br><br>Resolution: Squeacky learns to respect others,and that there are more things that are important than winning.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:43:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Brionna</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148413584</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition:</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:43:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Brionna</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148415292</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition: The story introduces </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:49:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Troy </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148415402</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>           <strong>EXPOSITION  </strong>:Setting is in New York , Main Characters are Squeaky , Raymond , Gretchen .Mood is action.<br>Conflict </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:49:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Raymond&#39;s Run by Tonya and Tira.</title>
         <author>qfarm4379</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; Exposition - Squeaky the girl who loves running and practices everyday. Raymond is Squeaky’s older brother but is often known as her younger brother. Raymond is picked on a lot by many people.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Conflict - Gretchen and her friends keep telling Squeaky that she will lose the 5o yard dash this year. But Squeaky’s confidence continues to stay up.</div><div><br></div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Rising Action - So it’s now the day of the race and the pressure is on. Squeaky and her brother show up for the run.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Climax - The 50 yard dash runners are called up and now we are going to see who wins. Squeaky wins yet another year.</div><div><br></div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Falling Action - Finding out that Squeaky won another year and to see her brother run with the rest.</div><div><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Resolution - Everything settled after the race was over with and&nbsp; Gretchen and Squeaky hugged and showed amazing sportsmanship. Squeaky now sees that there are more important things to do other that winning.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:50:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Amarius </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148415834</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition:Squeaky is a runner and her brother Raymond  is too she talks about how her brother is </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:51:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Evan&amp;Malikai</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148416167</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition: The setting is in New York. People in it are Raymond, George, Hazel, Mary, Gretchen, </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 16:52:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Brionna , Xzavion</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148426318</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Exposition-</strong>The main character of this story is squeaky { Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker}and she likes to run and take care of her brother[Raymond].She will fight somebody to protect her brother because he has mental problems.They were all in new york at school and at home and squeaky was always on the track where she learned how to run but that was basically on her block she thinks she can beat anybody in running but she knows the one person she cant beat is her dad.</div><div><br><br><br><br><br><br></div><div><strong>Conflict- </strong>I think the conflict of the story is squeaky trying to prove herself and trying to figure out who she is as a person she is very confident and sure she can do good but she always has a feeling like she is trying to prove herself.She is continuously trying to prove that she is the fastest person and better at whatever she does</div><div><br><br><br><br><br></div><div><strong>Rising Action -</strong>The rising action was that squeaky liked to run and she was good at it so when ever there was a race she wanted to compete and win but she had a little competition sometimes but her main reasoning for racing is to win but deep down she really wanted to beat her enemy and her name was greachen</div><div><br><br><br><br><br></div><div><strong>Climax-</strong> The story also includes the feelings that Squeaky overcomes as she prepares herself to run . When she starts running and looks to the side she see’s her brother running also for the first time which amazes her because he is a good runner like herself. &nbsp;</div><div><br><br><br></div><div><strong>Falling Action- </strong>The falling action is when the person on the intercome begins to announce who won. At one point in the story she did question herself did her or Gretchen win. She also is proud of her brother for running and Raymond is still cheering her own.&nbsp;</div><div><br><br><br><strong>Resolution-</strong> Squeaky realizes that winning isn’t everything anymore and that her brother can run like her now so she can spend her days being his coah and he be the champion. She also considers doing piono and other activities. She does this because she has lots of metal and awards but, what does Raymond have to call his own ?</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 17:26:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Evan&amp;Malikia</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148448030</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition: The setting is in New York. People in it are Raymond, George, Hazel, Mary, Gretchen and also squeaky likes to run which is Hazel.<br><br>Conflict: It is squeaky and Gretchen had a disagreement about who was faster.<br><br>Rising Action: It is when they meet on the street and bumped into each other and at the race before it started:<br><br>Climax: it is when they are racing and she is thinking to her self also when there was a disagreement about who won which was also a mess up.<br><br>Falling action: It is when her bother was running to her and she was thinking to her self and about how she could teach her and be her coach. <br><br>esolution: It is when the got who won correct and it was squeaky that won and the race was solved and how she was just happy to be with her bother and thought to her self that Gretchen may not be so bad.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 18:38:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Amarius</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148448204</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition:Squeaky is a runner and her brother Raymond&nbsp; is too she talks about how her brother is not very smart and how much she loves to run she also talks about her enemy Gretchen this all takes place in the Harlem area of New York&nbsp; &nbsp;<br>Conflict-she is going against a new girl this year and she really is nor worried about her but she still wants to win.<br><br>Rising Action -she practiced running all of the time she even did it if she would get in trouble with her parents she practiced her breathing exercises and other things&nbsp; for her race&nbsp;<br><br>Climax-When she is racing&nbsp; she pretends she is flying through landscapes the race is close between her and gretchen&nbsp; and then she wins the race&nbsp;<br><br>Falling action-&nbsp;<br>she sees Raymonds full potential and she makes peace with gretchen&nbsp;<br><br>Resoulution-she wants to quite running and show raymond how to run she realizes there are more important things than  wining </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 18:38:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Troy </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148448263</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<strong>EXPOSITION&nbsp; </strong>:Setting is in New York , Main Characters are Squeaky , Raymond , Gretchen .Mood is action.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<strong>Conflict&nbsp;<br>Gretchen is a fast runner so is squeaky but they are arguing about who is faster and who is better than the other .<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Rising Action&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; They are racing and they are side by side and it is a very close race and it hard to tell who is going to win .<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Climax&nbsp;<br>They both crossed the finish line and they are neck and neck and hard to tell who won the race . &nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Falling Action&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;When the annoucer begins to announce who won the race.Then she started questioning who won did I win or did Gretchen win .<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Resolutuion<br>They both finally realized who is the fastest and better racer . That is Squakey and she is proud of Gretchen because she kept up and tried and also didnt give up the race .</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 18:38:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tia Edwards</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148448667</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Exposition- </strong>the main characters are Hazel and Raymond the other characters are Mr. Pearson, Gretchen, Rosie,&nbsp; Mary Louise, George, Hazels mom<br><strong>Conflict-</strong>  the big race and Hazel was going against Gretchen and also Rosie, Mary Louise, and Gretchen were picking on Hazel brother because they know he isn't able to stand up for himself his little sister hazel fights his battles <br><strong>Raising Action- </strong>When they were all on the boardwalk hazel, Raymond, Gretchen, Rosie and Mary Louise and they were picking on Hazels brother Raymond and she had to stand up for him and she didn't mind it if she had to fight because she dose not like a whole lot of chit-chat.<br><strong>Climax-</strong>&nbsp;was the setting of  the fifty-yard dash and Hazel wanted to win but so did Gretchen</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 18:40:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rayleen/Kenai</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/derick_stephenson_12/hvop7dyo72se/wish/148449101</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Exposition: Squeaky is a girl that likes to run, and runs fast. Her father runs faster than her, but that’s just between them. She has a brother named Raymond, he’s older but he’s “not quite right”. Squeaky lives with her mom, dad and 2 brothers. The big kids call her ‘Mercury”, her real name is Hazel. She has some haters name Rosie, Mary Louise, and Gretchen. Mary Louise used to be her friend, and Gretchen thinks she can beat squeaky at the race.</div><div><br></div><div>Conflict: Haters were throwing shade about Gretchen and her crew being better and winning, Squeaky in the race..and she had to prove them WRONG….&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Rising Action: Gretchen and her crew had met Hazel and Raymond in front of a candy store and was about to beef. Squeaky would rather fight you then talk to you.&nbsp; So she defends her and her brother and continues her breathing exercise while she walks.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Climax: Squeaky puts her brother in the swings and walks to find the man to get her number. When she finds him he starts talking down on her. So she walks toward the track and starts stretching. The announcer man yells on your march. Squeaky gets ready and&nbsp; then he yells go. So Squeaky takes of and sees nobody to the left of her but when she looks to her right she sees a blurred version of Gretchen and her brother running. Gretchen and her overshot the finish line.&nbsp;<br><br>Falling action was when Squeaky and Gretchen were waiting for the results of who won.<br><br>Resolution was when they found out Squeaky had won. She was proud of Raymond for seeing him in his first run, and glad for Gretchen because she got 2nd place, and showed she tried.</div><div><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 18:41:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gina &amp; Monsseratt</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Exposition-</strong>&nbsp; Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker “Squeaky” introduces herself as a runner and her brother Raymond and her family, she also introduces Gretchen and her sidekicks. She also introduces her background of running and how confident she is about winning. She also shows her love for Raymond as she is always looking after him.&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;<strong>Conflict-</strong>&nbsp; She is going against Gretchen who is the new girl this year but is still confident about winning the race. Also at one point before the race she had to stand up to Gretchen and her sidekicks&nbsp;</div><div><strong>Rising Action- </strong>She practice running all the time even if it meant she got in trouble with her parents. She’d practice breathing exercises and other things until the day of the race.</div><div><strong>Climax- </strong>It’s the day of the race and she is racing imagining all of these things and her and gretchen are both close to the finish line. Then they both passed and started waiting for the results, which lead to her actually winning.&nbsp;</div><div><strong>Falling Action</strong>- She sees Raymond potential in racing when she sees him climb the fence, and she also makes friends with Gretchen who was her enemy at first.</div><div><strong>Resolution- </strong>She starts thinking about Raymond’s future in racing. She starts thinking about coaching him and her next steps in life.</div><div><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-20 18:47:30 UTC</pubDate>
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