https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon 1. Comment on the writer’s style. Write the next 50-60 words to continue the story. en-us 2019-09-17 04:10:30 UTC 2019-09-23 04:10:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d2.png https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064405 Gavin]]> 2019-09-17 04:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064405 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064467  Abdullah and junaid]]> 2019-09-17 04:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064467 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064495 Ousmane]]> 2019-09-17 04:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064495 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064597 2019-09-17 04:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064597 Skullrocks https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064673 Use of short, simple sentences and non-sentences throughout the extract. No context at first to why she shouted and who she was afraid of, to build tension.]]> 2019-09-17 04:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064673 harshildeepak25 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064776 2019-09-17 04:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064776 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064793 Mohammed Hajebi]]> 2019-09-17 04:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385064793 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065016 2019-09-17 04:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065016 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065045 The writer makes use short sentences, non sentences, simple sentences and there is no advice on why she shouted and who she was afraid of, to build tension.]]> 2019-09-17 04:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065045 123456789blastoff https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065184 4th Paragraph of The Shadow Men]]> 2019-09-17 04:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065184 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065213 2019-09-17 04:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385065213 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385066593 O b a m a]]> 2019-09-17 04:26:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385066593 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385067024 Such a bruh moment]]> 2019-09-17 04:28:53 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385067024 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385067372 Creeper


]]> 2019-09-17 04:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385067372 https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385068860 The text has short sentences to create suspense in the writer's hearts and at the same time it withholds information, as per "she made herself shout", why is she shouting? There are no complex sentences or complex words, yet there is a thrilling effect because of the use of repetition of sentences. ]]> 2019-09-17 04:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vibha19/hva0e9qq2xon/wish/385068860