https://padlet.com/26skhurram/hv6drhmgvbkz Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:53:08 UTC 2019-12-06 16:12:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 26zlessing https://padlet.com/26skhurram/hv6drhmgvbkz/wish/420833319 I think a really good part of your story is when you said “Liv ran inside almost fainting” and when she wished that she got a pretzel before all of that. Another part I thought was good and a little funny was that she was accused of stealing but then she stole the hat, glasses, shirt, and pants anyway but wished she stole boots! However a suggestion I can give is that you could’ve gave a little more details of what the inside of the mall looks like.]]> 2019-12-06 16:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/26skhurram/hv6drhmgvbkz/wish/420833319