My delightful wall by Alexandra Conell https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax Made with a curious mind en-us 2018-03-12 16:51:21 UTC 2026-02-26 01:40:40 UTC hello@padlet.com conell666 https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/240987709 2018-03-12 16:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/240987709 Hire https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/241559487 Describing your schooling and qualifications definitely makes you sound knowledgeable and helps to make you credible. It's also good that you state what you're passionate about, so you seem credible and passionate about your job. The only thing to improve upon would be to appear more confident, as you sound confident speaking about your history with working with others and your desire to help people]]> 2018-03-13 18:20:05 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/241559487 Hire https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/241692447 She seems like a very hard working person, with plenty of previous experience and earned knowledge to make her a perfect candidate for this position. She seems a bit nervous, but I can tell that she'll be able to get over it quickly and follow through with her hopes about helping everyone get back on their feet asap. 
She seems very driven as well, and I think that's a very good trait to have in this field.]]> 2018-03-14 02:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/241692447 Hire https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/242158346 It seems obvious that she would really like to help people. Talking about her education from Alma makes her sound creditable.  She talks about her previous experience as a swim instructor. She says she has great leadership skills and communication skills. I think she would be a good hire, because she seems passionate about helping people. She also seems driven from all of her experience and education. ]]> 2018-03-15 01:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/242158346 HIRE conell666 https://padlet.com/conell666/hut919orhnax/wish/242386731 The wording in your elevator speech has been developed well.  However, you do not have to be that specific about your school or the names of your majors, instead just saying that your majors were related to healthcare.  It is also very informative that you discussed your time as a swim coach, as that would give the employer some idea of your past experiences.  An improvement can be in your presentation of the speech.  In the current video, it sounds like someone reading rather than an actual part of a conversation.  Your tone of voice is the improvement to make.
 
 
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