expert author by John O'Brien https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0 Made with a curious mind en-us 2017-04-27 17:18:26 UTC 2017-05-22 16:58:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Growing.png bias obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169232652 Bias is being in favor or against someone or something. Heres bias in a sentence, I am so biased for the denver broncos, there my favorite team. Here's a bias I wrote towards the patriots on my fireworks, " : I have a strong bias for the New England Patriots. I Think they're a bunch of little babies that cheat and wine. The guy that does the most whining is their star quarterback Tom brady and his brady bunch. If this little baby don't get call his ways sometimes he will swear and throw crap till he gets his way. Also this team has a huge cheating problem and here's some proof. There the reason that the coaches cover their mouths when they talk because they hired someone on the sidelines in the middle of the game to lip read the other team's coach. They also illegally videotaped another team's practice. Plus as everyone knows they defiled the balls against the colts in the NFC championship. They also switched the cleats to metal cleats( it's against the rules to have metal cleats) on joe montana and he got kicked out of the game for wearing metal cleats. But in total they cheated 16 times that we know of. The patriots are also known for hiring cheating coaches. Like when one of our broncos coaches cheated. So we fired him and the patriots picked him up right away.
This is my favorite response because first of all I get to talk trash about the New England patriots and show my hate for them. Other than that I liked how I show my bias towards the patriots by showing how they're a bunch of cheaters.  


]]> 2017-05-01 17:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169232652 close reading obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169233266 close reading is where you closely review or analize a poem, book etc. where you find the texts form or its meaning. You use close reading alot in reading tests and in vocabulary.com. ]]> 2017-05-01 17:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169233266 inferencing obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169233427 inferencing is where you make a conclusion on something like a comerical based on evidence and reasoning. Like in a skittles comerical the guy whould do anything for skittles, so you can infer that he really likes skittles. Heres inferencing from my story, Once they all calmed down and stopped crying. A very very stupid sausage stood up and said “ All we have to do to get out of this mess is to expire.” Then everyone started talking pieces off their body and started throwing their body pieces at him. One carrot asked his his buddies to pick him up and use him as a spear. They even opened up a dorito bag and spit the dorito in half to use as a sword. The onion took chunks off to throw as a gas grenade to make him cry. The tomatoes started rolling down to the section with toothpicks. Then grabbed the toothpicks and threw them up to the strawberries so they could charge at the sausage. They even got the blueberries to allow them to chuck their body pieces at the sausage. They were going to throw the tomato up in the air think chuck a toothpick at him for he would explode. Right before they were about to all of this he shouted at the top of his sausagey lungs, “STOP!Maybe this wasn’t the best idea.” Then everyone else said “Well duh.” Then they finished him.
From this part of my story part of my story you can infer the the food are very mad at the saugguse

]]> 2017-05-01 17:17:32 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169233427 mood and tone obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169234985
mood is like the feeling of the story, like it's a sad mood, mad mood, lonely, moody, etc. tone is the attitude towards the story. Like being commanding towards the story. Here is an example from my writing doc, It was one nice day in suva, fiji. Sunny skies and not a single cloud out. Employes of the local market where getting a brand new shipment of food. The mood In this part of my story 

]]> 2017-05-01 17:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169234985 symbolism obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169236073 Symbolism means to represent something or to define something using symbols. One example of symbolism is, black is used to represent death or evil. This is symbolism because It shows black as a symbol to death or evil.

]]> 2017-05-01 17:25:10 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169236073 foreshadow obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169236159 Foreshadow means to show or indicate something before it has happened. Sometimes foreshadowing is used earlier in the story for like a meeting between 2 people or the end of the world. Authors use foreshadowing to tell the readers that something is about to happen in the story. an example is in the beginning of the story they show something that's about to happen in the story but then they go back before that event and continue the story from there.

]]> 2017-05-01 17:25:29 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/169236159 Dialogue obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/170003853 Dialogue is a conversation between two people. Heres dialogue in a story, karen screamed, “WE NEED SOME MILK.” I screamed back saying, “ YOU NEED SOME MILK.” and here is an example from my writing doc, . Dario asked with a threatening voice, “Where's the sausage”. The manager burst out laughing, “ha ha ha, we don't have any sausages they sold out a long time ago.” 
these two examples are dialogue because they show a conversation between at least two people.

]]> 2017-05-04 17:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/170003853 Imagery obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/170233852 Words that create a scene or an experience for the reader. Heres imagery in a sentence, You could hear the cracks of the wooden floor as the man walked across the hallway. This is an example of imagery because it puts an image into the scene. This impacts the the mood of the story by making it more detailed and as if it was really happening. here's an example from my writing piece,  "Right after that they heard a “SPLAT” from on of the tomatos.

]]> 2017-05-05 17:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/170233852 obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/170234308 2017-05-05 17:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/170234308 favorite books https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172394711 holes is my faveorite book becasue it is so interesting and well written. My second favorite book is unbroken. Unbroken is a great book because it interesting how the louie survives through the story]]> 2017-05-17 17:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172394711 topics I have mastered in noredink https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172396687 I have mastered articles. I think mastering articles is important because it interdouces nonuns to a sentence. anouther topic I mastered was commly confused words. This Is a very important because it helps you write the correct meaning you want in a sentence.]]> 2017-05-17 17:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172396687 inspiration for writing obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172642121 what inspires me to write is creativity. creativity insires me because it alows me to create any story I want that will intertain me and the others the read it.]]> 2017-05-18 17:08:25 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172642121 inspiration for writing obrien_john22 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172855520 what inspires me to write is that you can make any story or poem in the world that anyone could read and could possible make their day a little bit better.]]> 2017-05-19 17:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/172855520 Jack you have to make it so that people can not post. rosebr_logan09 https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/173199194 2017-05-22 16:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/obrien_john22/ht9u8cgb2xc0/wish/173199194