Life Below Water Feedback Padlet by Ashleigh Lowe (5G) https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa en-us 2021-08-26 05:14:25 UTC 2021-10-29 03:52:08 UTC hello@padlet.com aslo3424 https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1697792220
Instructions

Please share some meaningful feedback with our Year Five students. Use the + button at the bottom of the Padlet below to leave a descriptive and specific comment about something you learned, noticed, admired, or enjoyed. 

Title the post with the student's name or "Team" if it's for the whole team.

Example sentence starters:

  • "When you _________ I felt _______"
  • "The way you expressed ________ made me think______"
  • "I enjoyed the way you ________ because ________"
  • "You have inspired me to take action by _________"
]]> 2021-08-26 05:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1697792220 Stella star4553 https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1847399017 In your web site you put so much detail and explanation into your explanations and hybrids. In the realisation written by Ashleigh I felt like the way you expressed the characters feelings really had a strong effect on the story and how it had a really powerful message.
In Charlottes story it had strong information and like Ashleighs she had a really powerful message and emotion with images supporting the text, it made me feel like tacking action so I want to take action by spreading awareness and picking up plastic when I can.  ]]> 2021-10-27 06:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1847399017 Kate kaly8411 https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1847423405 I loved your video as it was informative as well as inspiring, but be more confident and try to show photos of some ways you have taken action. You did an amazing job on informing and advocating towards this goal and I am so beyond joyed to see the final product of your hard work. Good job and keep on advocating for equality as well as justice! 🐠🐟]]> 2021-10-27 07:05:51 UTC https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1847423405 Feedback from Charlotte's Mum https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1847648168 Dear Charlotte and Ashleigh, I really enjoyed viewing this Life Below Water exhibition. I like the way that you were able to bring many aspects of your research into the site to share with us. I particularly liked listening to the rap songs written by Charlotte and Ashleigh. The reflections shared were thoughtful and insightful into your achievements and challenges in completing your Year 5 Exhibition. Congratulations on successfully completing your presentation, you have both inspired me to reduce, reuse and recycle especially in relation to plastic.]]> 2021-10-27 09:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1847648168 Feedback from Luciano Colosimo The Kings School https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1853083339 I really liked your raps they were great you obviously showed great knowledge about your topic.]]> 2021-10-29 03:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1853083339 Noah kharzoo, The kings school https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1853100834 I really likes your raps they were very informal and i know that you already know about the topic great job!!]]> 2021-10-29 03:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/aslo3424/hsi5s1tshc0f2fpa/wish/1853100834