1B Wicked Witch - Liquify Gallery Walk by Mitchel Reeder

1B Wicked Witch - Liquify Gallery Walk by Mitchel Reeder https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B Students will leave 2 meaningful and constructive comments on at least 5 projects from the gallery walk. Each comment will be 2-3 sentences and use descriptive language and be very detailed. The first comment will be in regard to something specific that you like, are impressed with, or perhaps something that you would like to know how the creator made. Be specific and meaningful in your writing (do not simply put something like "I like it" or "Good job" because that does not give meaningful feedback). The second comment you will leave will be something specific that the creator could have done better, or perhaps a suggestion on something they could have done differently. Explain HOW they could have done it better or differently. For all comments, be sure to use constructive, professional, and supportive language. When you are done, you will have left a total of 10 comments. en-us 2021-10-20 14:23:59 UTC 2021-10-26 20:07:03 UTC hello@padlet.com Landon Lawrence https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833629075 1. The masking on your hair was very clean. I liked how you changed the color.

2. You could have made her look more witchy by extending her chin and teeth. You also could have made her fingers longer.]]> 2021-10-21 14:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833629075 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833629911 1. I am impressed on how you did your nails and eyebrows. You also did a great job with the purple skin and colored hair.

2. Something I would try to do better on is the hair and also downloading a higher quality image on a royalty free website.

Ethan Meza ]]> 2021-10-21 14:09:53 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833629911 Alex Dp https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833632306 Good blending between layers and amazing masking on the edges of the witch. The colors are unique and different than others.

Coloring could've been done better.]]> 2021-10-21 14:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833632306 Jaxon Graham jaxongraham908 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833633158 number 5 I like how well you did the nails. they look pretty natural and long. you could maybe try and make your background fit more. It’s kind of messy.]]> 2021-10-21 14:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833633158 from lindsay yount https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833633430 i really like the background on your work. i also love that you did something with the apple it makes the project look a lot better.
something to improve might be the coloring if the skin because it is a little uneven. to fit it i would hide the other layers to see where its uneven and fill the gaps but overall i think it is a really good project]]> 2021-10-21 14:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833633430 Ethan https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833633989 1. Great Background. I like how it's put together well and it looks like a witch.

2.1 Problem is the hair. The hair looks like it was photoshopped witch of course it is but we need it to make in look non photoshop]]> 2021-10-21 14:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833633989 Vaughn https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833634426 1st Comment: The way this person warped and colored the teeth were good. Also the way this person warped the fingernails was good.

2nd Comment: Something that could improve is the overlay coloring on the hair. Also the background masking could be better.]]> 2021-10-21 14:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833634426 elijah burton https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833634473 i like how you pointed her face out.

i don’t know what that is around her mouth it might look better without it.]]> 2021-10-21 14:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833634473 Coda J https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833634696 I really like the shading/shadow on the side of the neck and under the chin! Something that you could’ve done better was the masking on the hair. I suggest taking your time and adjusting the hue of the hair color so it’s not so bright.]]> 2021-10-21 14:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833634696 mason schiller https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833635955 i like the hair and background

the eyebrows are kinda curvy but idk how to fix that ]]> 2021-10-21 14:11:25 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833635955 Zoha Hussain https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833636157 I like how the witch is detailed. I also like how the witch has a detailed skin.
Something the creator could’ve done better was the background and the eyebrows shapes. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833636157 Santana https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833637878 I like how you improvised on the skin tone for your witch and shading

I think you can improve on masking the hair a little bit better or shading ]]> 2021-10-21 14:11:54 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833637878 Cord Lawrence https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833638713 Comment one: I really liked the way you constructed the face, the nose and skinnier face makes it look ten times better. The contour of your witch is also really good, and you used the burn tool well to add shade to the witch.

Comment two: You could have done a little bit better selecting a proportional bit of hair just so that it doesn’t look clumpy and less real. Also the teeth could have been shaded a little bit lighter so that you can fully see it’s details.]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833638713 Landon Lawrence https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833638972 1. I like the background you chose. The glow that you added to her skin looks very good.

2. You could have masked out the hair a little bit more cleanly. The edges have some white and are a little misshapen.]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833638972 vaughn https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833639928 Some good things are the hair coloring overlay. Also the nose and mouth editing are very good.]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833639928 Alex Dp https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640212 Eye shadowing looks quite nice and blends well with the rest of the witch. The wart on the chin is a nice addition that adds some good contrast.

Could've been more skin and hair coloring as it doesn't look to different than the original]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:28 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640212 Jaxon Graham jaxongraham908 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640421 I like how well you did the nose. it looks pretty good. you can probably take out the orange on the skin. other than that its good.]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640421 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640635 I like how you made a smooth ambre with the hair. The coloration of the teeth is a good color fr the witch.

Next time when trying to color the skin try to do more even strokes to keep it looking realistic. Maybe making a seperate leyer and designating it to skin coloration would be better next time.

Zoe R R]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640635 Thomas Nixon https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640693 I love the dirtied look as if they live in the woods. It’s unique.
A critique is on the hair where it looks like a hole in it on the bottom left. I would recommend practicing more with masking hair. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833640693 elijah burton https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833641519 i love how the finger nails look realistic on her,

you should crop out the white on the hair.]]> 2021-10-21 14:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833641519 Ethan https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833643056 1. Looks great and the background was chose good. It looks real and that's good.

2. Something I would change is the hair. I would make the blonde part a little darker. But other than that it looks great]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:09 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833643056 mason schiller https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833643186 i like the skin color it looks good

the nose is a little smooshed tho]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:10 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833643186 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833643444 1. You did a great job masking your background. Also great job on her hair and making it look realistic. The nails are also done very well.

2. Something I would work on is your hair and make sure all the white spots are gone on the bottom.

Ethan Meza ]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833643444 Digital media https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833644131 Riley Coleman
It looks good but I would mask out some of the hair that is not needed

I like the nose but it’s kind of folding so next time just push the nose up ]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833644131 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833644364 I like the pointy chin and the discoloration of the teeth is good. the shading on the skin is very good.
Things you could fix are maybe the smoothness of the eyebrow. The hair is also a little choppy so you could maybe try not to cut it off. Travis Watson]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833644364 vaughn https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833645324 The hair masking could be better. The forehead of the witch was also kind of messy.]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833645324 Abby Cervenak https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833645711 I really like how the shading of the hair is neat and colored well. I also like how most of the hair is a smooth purple color.

Next time make sure to clean up and fix any small mistakes that you may haven’t noticed before finishing. You could also improve on the shading for the skin. Some of your coloring for the hair could be a little bit cleaner.]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833645711 Santana Fernandez https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833645835 I like the glow and background you chose to go well with the skin tone of witch

I think you could improve on masking and shading of the witch]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833645835 from lindsay yount https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646255 i like how you put red hair on your witch because i feel like most people put green. i like how yours is really unique.
something to improve might be to color her skin a little bit more because i cant tell if u shaded it or not. I would just up the opacity but overall very nice job!]]> 2021-10-21 14:13:58 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646255 Jaxon Graham jaxongraham908 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646831 I like the teeth. they look good to me. you can work on making the hair more realistic. not like you colored it.]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646831 Zara s https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646844 the way you bloated the knuckles looks very good. they don’t look fake. they are also not to big or too small.

the eyebrows are thin but they are all wiggly. maybe try and keep them all equal i guess you could say.

]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646844 Coda J https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646884 I really like how you colored the hair, and the witches skin. Also, I thought it was cool how you changed the color of the apple. Something I would suggest is that you add a background to really complete the assignment.]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833646884 mason schiller https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833647760 i like the color of the witch

the background is just white tho]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:19 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833647760 elijah burton https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833648545 i love how discolored her teeth are i tried to do that with man and it didn’t work.

maybe lower down the saturation on the hair.]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833648545 Garrett https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833649634 I like the way you did the skin, maybe fix up the hair a bit

]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833649634 Arjun Nair https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833649723 They were great color choices, there were really good shading I wish you can tell me some tips on how you did it. Your witch looks amazing.

The witch was a bit see through so you can’t actually see how it looks so I wonder if you turned up the contrast on your picture. Also I think you could have did more liquify on the face. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833649723 landon lawrence https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833649842 1. You stretched the nose and chin very well. The eyebrows have a good curve.

2. The hair is the same color as the background. It’s hard to tell the difference because they are the same shade.]]> 2021-10-21 14:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833649842 Thomas Nixon https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833651905 The nails were done well. As well as the bloating.
I think the color could use some work. It hurts the eyes. The masking on the hair needs major work. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833651905 Jaxon Graham jaxongraham908 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833652412 I like how well you did the mole. it looks very realistic. you should probably color the hair more. it looks like its barely colored.]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833652412 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833653044 1. Very good job at changing the original image and making it look like something brand new. I love the effects on the image making her look like a scary ghost. The background is also done very very well.

2. The one thing I would say to change is that the effect is a tad bit to strong. Besides that very good job

Ethan Meza ]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833653044 vaughn https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833653394 The eyebrow editing is sharp and clean. Overall the face editing is really good.

There seems to be some face filter that looks kind of weird. The background is the same color of the hair which makes it hard to see.]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833653394 Santana Fernandez https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833654729 I love the background and amazing shading you did on the witch to go hand and hand

I think you could improve on the masking of the hair to remove all the withe pixels]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833654729 mason schiller https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833654761 i like the color because it looks like a painting

but the chin is kinda sticking off to the right ]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833654761 Alex Dp https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833654918 Skin coloring on the witch is good and adds nice contrast between the dress. Hair masking is done nicely and looks great.

Liquify tool could've been used more as it still looks a bit like the ori]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833654918 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833655131 I like how you have bruises on her wrists. And the hair is very good with shading and cutting.

You could do better on the forming of the chin but maybe smoothing it. The teeth could use a bit more discoloration but the shape is perfectly fine. Travis Watson]]> 2021-10-21 14:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833655131 elijah burton https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833656054 i love how her mouth looks bloody it’s kinda scary.

i would change the background to something more grim]]> 2021-10-21 14:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833656054 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833656836 Riley Coleman
I like it but the chin just needs to be a little bigger

Just get rid of some of the unwanted hair ]]> 2021-10-21 14:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833656836 from lindsay yount https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833658375 i like the way you made the witch’s mouth and face look. i like the way its wiggly and scary like a witch.
something to improve could be the hair. there are some parts cut out of it so to fix it i would just be more precise when masking the background. i love the overall witch!]]> 2021-10-21 14:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833658375 Coda J https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833659033 I really like the background, the teeth, and the shading! Something I would suggest is that you take your time on the masking of the hair. Also, don’t chop off big parts off of it. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833659033 Zara s https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833659142 I like the way you bloated the knuckles. they don’t look fake and they are not to big.

I think you could improve the eyebrows. they are still a little thick. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:16:37 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833659142 Thomas Nixon https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833661467 It looks fantastic. I can tell you put great work into this.
The background image doesn’t fit well though. A black and white background doesn’t fit with the witch. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833661467 Abby Cervenak https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833662834 I really like how the shading for the skin is very clean and neat. I like how the shading is even throughout the picture. How were you able to get the shading even and so clean?

One thing you could improve on is making the blonde part of the hair a little bit darker. I think that you could of maybe added some more warts on the face. You could also make the teeth a little bit more yellow.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833662834 Zoe R R https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663105 I specifically like the chin that you made with liquify because it is something that i struggled that you executed well. The liquifying in your witch over all is very good and very skillful.

Next time try to do some skin coloration by making another layer and using the brush tool with the layer inverted. I feel like it would add another edge to the witch and make it look more scary.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663105 landon lawrence https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663444 1. The skin looks really good, i like how you used different colors to create a unique tone. The hair also looks great because of the different colors.

2. The eyes look a little bit crooked. They could have been manipulated to look a little bit more even.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663444 Garrett https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663461 I love the background and the proportions of the witch, the green on her skin is everywhere maybe fix that]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663461 Zoha Hussain zoha_hussain_468 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663582 I like how the creator color the hair because the hair itself looks like it’s not photoshopped.
One thing the could’ve worked on shading and the skin highlight areas. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:15 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833663582 Shawn Francis https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664203 The photo looks really good the colors and background work well together and you did a very good job with the liquify and burn tool. The small criticism I have would be to darken the left side of the hair and to smooth the chin in the liquify menu but even still it looks really good.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664203 Jaxon Graham jaxongraham908 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664466 I like how well you did the hair. I like how it fits into the background. you can work on making the skin more like actual skin. it kind of looks like its glowing.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664466 Arjun Nair https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664865 The bloating on the knuckles looks good so does the nose. Also the liquify on the nails are really good.

I think you could have colored the skin to make it look better.Also I think the coloring on the hair could have been better because it almost looks the same as before

]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664865 Ethan Meza https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664965 1. Good Job on background matching her hair and skin. The paint filter on the picture looks very good. Eyebrows and nose are done very well. Great job

2. I would add more color to the bottom left because there is some white. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833664965 Myron https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833665782 I like how you were able to change the hair color.
I like the way how you masked the background out. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833665782 vaughn https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833665835 The skin coloring looks similar to class example which was good. The hair coloring is also nice and clean.

The eye and eyebrow editing overall could be better but its still good. The hair masking also could be better merged.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833665835 Santana Fernandez https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666016 I love the idea of the color of the witch and that it almost fades into the background

You can’t see any major details of the witch to clearly see because of the color so I can’t properly tell what to improve on]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666016 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666103 It’s really good and stuff the colors that were picked was amazing.The background was amazing to and fits with the theme of the character.]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666103 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666185 The nails look good and natural. The mole really added to the picture.
You could make the chin pointier and make her face a little more messed up. The shading could also be a little better on her hands compared to her face. Travis Watson]]> 2021-10-21 14:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666185 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666908 I like it but just get rid of some of the unwanted hair

Just adjust the chin a little bit ]]> 2021-10-21 14:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833666908 mason schiller https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833667481 i like the green hair and the background

the right eye looks a little big tho]]> 2021-10-21 14:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833667481 elijah burton https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833667488 i love her hair color the saturation is really nice.

it still looks a lot like her i would change her face more.]]> 2021-10-21 14:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833667488 Zara s https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833669253 i think the eyebrow are good. you didn’t make the eyebrows too thin. and the still have a normal eyebrow shape.

I think that the hair could be improved. the hair still looks very blonde and on the left side a lot of it got erased.]]> 2021-10-21 14:18:44 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833669253 landon lawrence https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833669840 1. The skin color looks really good. I like how you added the green.

2. The teeth are a little bit too big. You could have used the warp tool to bring those in a little bit.]]> 2021-10-21 14:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833669840 Amit Murthy https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833670012 Comment 1: I liked the way the teeth looked. The shading was really good. The hands also looked really realistic and good.
Comment 2: I think the hair could be shaded better. They could make the coloring look better. The background can also be masked better. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833670012 Garrett https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833670573 The witch is amazing I love it the background is cool and I love what you did with he skin.]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833670573 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833670670 It’s so good you did a great good at it.the colors and shading is so good on this drawing.]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833670670 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833671199 1. Great job with hair color and skin. Also nice background it fits good with the colors.

2. The hair could be done better because it is not cropped that well and you can see white. Besides that great job!

Ethan Meza ]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833671199 Zoha Hussain zoha_hussain_468 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833671415 I like the way they shaped the witches face.
I really thing they could’ve worked on would be shading on the face. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833671415 vaughn https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833671881 The hair masking is very clean and goes well with the background. Also the facial editing is good and nice.

The skin coloring could be more in the lines and cleaner. So could the hair editing.]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833671881 from lindsay yount https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833672252 i love that you made her hair purple. i really like the color purple with the green shirt. i like the way you made your eyebrows too how they are very skinny.
something to improve could include adding some shading on her skin. to add some depth i would use the burn tool. nice project though!]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833672252 Thomas Nixon https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833672738 I kinda like the transparency of the witch. And the blue apple.
The top of the witch is too bright. The background is too pixelated. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833672738 Joseph Kieszkowski https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833672939 I love the color of that hair of the witch. I also like how you got most of all the hair colored. one thing that could be done better is that you could make the knuckles smaller and fix the nose

]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833672939 Coda J https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833674021 I really like the darkness under the eyes and shading on the body! Something I would suggest is that you take more time on the masking for the hair. Also, try to have the color of the hair consistent. Overall, good job!]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:46 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833674021 Abby Cervenak https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833675232 I really like how you made her hair a nice ombré purple color. All of your witch is very clean and neat.
One thing you could improve on is adding some shading. I can’t really tell if there is any shading.]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833675232 Santana Fernandez https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833675323 I like how did the amazing details on the apple and the masking of the hair on the witch with great color choice

Just the shading on the witch itself to improve on]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833675323 Zara s https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833675463 The nails look really good. they are not to long and aren’t too short.

i think the hair could be improved. the hair isnt that even.]]> 2021-10-21 14:19:57 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833675463 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833676501 Riley Coleman

Just fix the chin and use the health tool to fix the skin ]]> 2021-10-21 14:20:04 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833676501 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833677450 The knuckles on the hands look disturbing which is good. The teeth are also sharp which is very good.
Discoloration would look a bit better on her teeth. And her jaw could be smoother same with the cut on her hair. Travis Watson]]> 2021-10-21 14:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833677450 Garrett https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833679441 The witch looks cool I like the pink if her skin but maybe make the nose pointier]]> 2021-10-21 14:20:33 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833679441 Myron https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682521 I like how your background works with your witch.
I like how your nails are stretched to make her look scary ]]> 2021-10-21 14:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682521 Brian Copeland https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682709 comment 1 you did a good job on buffing the knuckles you got her out here looking like finna cast a spell maybe do chin a lil bit better like you can see where it was photoshopped at but overall good stuff]]> 2021-10-21 14:21:22 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682709 Ethan https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682749 1. Looks good. I like the color of the hair and the background is good.

2. One thing i would fix is the color of the skin. I would get a darker color and change the shading.

but other than that its great.]]> 2021-10-21 14:21:22 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682749 zoe r r https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682896 I really like the way the skin is colored and the effect it gives the project. The nose is also liquified extremely well.

A suggestion I would give is to try and mask out the hair a little bit better on the left side. You can make it look cleaner by making smoother selections and not smudging the colors too much so that it looks muddy. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833682896 Max M https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833683524 I like the face because it looks very good stretched and the witches skin looks darker and very neat. Also, the hair looks very nicely colored.
one thing you could've worked on was the hair is glowing and doesn't look completely immersed into the background photo.]]> 2021-10-21 14:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833683524 from lindsay yount https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833683665 i like the way you colored her teeth to look rotton. her mouth looks really good.
something to improve would be maybe color the hair evenly because some parts are super bright and some have minimal color. to do this i woild make a bigger brush to cover more surface area. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833683665 Amit Murthy https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833685544 Comment 1: I liked how the mouth looked. The coloring was really good. I also liked the nose. It looked good.

Comment 2: I think the background could be better. Also the skin could look better. I think you should change the color of the skin.]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833685544 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833685574 Cord Lawrence

Comment 1: I like your background and the lighting the pumpkin gives off, it helps make the picture more spooky looking. I also liked the contour, and how you used the burn tool to make your shading look more realistic.

Comment 2: You could have put a little more effort in when liquefying your eyebrows just because they don’t look very realistic. The teeth also look fake so you could have used the burn too ll to shade them in, and look more realistic.]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:03 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833685574 Arjun Nair https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833685848 The coloring on the skin of the witch is really good, I also really like the shading on your witch.
You would have did more bloating on the knuckles and I think you could haves I’d more liquiding on the nails

]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833685848 Alex Dp https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833686048 Masking is good and noticeable. Coloring is quite different and nice.

Blending could have been done better by taking more time and thoroughly going back through.]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:10 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833686048 Zoha Hussain zoha_hussain_468 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833686733 I like the fact that they shaped the arms so the witch would actually look like a witch, not only by the face. I also like how the lighting of the background and witch match.
I think it needs a bit more work on the shading.]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833686733 https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833687142 The dark circles under her eyes look great and distressed. The nails are sharp which is also good.
The eyebrows could be smoother. Discoloration on the teeth would look better. Travis Watson]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:26 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833687142 Zara s https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833687854 I think that the nails look good. the nails still look real and they aren’t to long or too short.

i think you could improve on the hair. it isn’t the even. there are some places where it’s bright green and some where is not.]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:37 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833687854 Myron https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833688033 I like how your hair and purple skin make your witch look spooky.
You also have great nails and eyebrows.]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:40 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833688033 Joseph Kieszkowski https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833688146 I like the background of the witch.I also like the look of the dress and how it looks greener.
one thing I would fix is the chin there was no chin in the witch.One more would be make the knuckles bigger]]> 2021-10-21 14:22:41 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833688146 Shawn Francis https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833689960 The photo look good the colors and background work together pretty well and you did a very good job with the liquify tool. The small criticism I have would be to clean up the hair color and add more shading.]]> 2021-10-21 14:23:10 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833689960 Max M https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833690104 I like how well the details on the witch are. The shadowing on it are just perfect and look so good.
One thing you could've worked on was the hair which looked not as immersed and the witch]]> 2021-10-21 14:23:12 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833690104 Coda Jones https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833690456 I really like the background and the pointy chin because it gives off a witchy vibe. Something I would suggest is to focus on a bit more shading on her body. You can add some with the burn tool. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833690456 zoe r r https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833690954 The ambre of the hair is really nice for it fades into one color and the other seamlessly. I also really like hoe the fingers look around the apple.

Something I would suggest is to work a little bit on the liquefaction on the chin. I would also recommend using the skin tools that we learned a while back to help with the skin coloring. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833690954 Ethan https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833692494 I like how scary it looks. You really bring scary out of holloween. Looks Great.

2. One thing i would change is the background. I think you could have gotten a better photo.
But other than that its great.]]> 2021-10-21 14:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833692494 Amit Murthy https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833695386 Comment 1: You did a good job on her hands. You also did a good job on the background.
Comment 2: I think the skin could be shaded better. Also the hair could be more realistic. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:24:37 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833695386 Max M https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833697197 I like how the shadows are on point and everything about the texturing is just perfect to the eye.
The only thing I could think that you could have worked on is the hair is the same color as the background and you cant really see the hair outline.]]> 2021-10-21 14:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833697197 Alex Dp https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833700155 Liquify tool was greatly used and can be seen. Coloring is nicely used and blends well throughout the entire project.

Masking could have been better for the coloring by making sure to go back in and check every detail]]> 2021-10-21 14:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833700155 Joseph Kieszkowski https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833702098 I like the color of the witch it looks really nice with the hair color.one thing I would fix is the nose it has to many lines on it with stretch marks]]> 2021-10-21 14:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833702098 Ethan https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833703960 1. The photo and the pictures are great and matched well. I like how it looks. It looks really good with the witch and a lot of other things.

2. One thing i would change is the shading. The shading needs to be improved. Make it darker and your set.

But other than that its great]]> 2021-10-21 14:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833703960 Max M https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833704553 This one looks like a lightning witch and it's very cool looking. Also the colors on it are very pleasing.
But I think I would add more detail and outline to the witch itself because that's the main focus for the project.]]> 2021-10-21 14:26:58 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833704553 Amit Murthy https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833704742 Comment 1: I like the skin color. I also liked the hair. The shading was pretty good.
Comment 2: I think the background could be better. You should mask it and get rid of the pixels.]]> 2021-10-21 14:27:02 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833704742 Joseph Kieszkowski https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833707504 I love the background it gos with the witch.The hair also gos with the witch. one thing I would change is the color of her skin It looks like a zombie more then a witch would make it less grean]]> 2021-10-21 14:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833707504 Max M https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833717595 Coloring of the skin looks pretty good and the shading is really neat and well done.
But the knuckles weren't as bloated and I didn't see any moles on her face]]> 2021-10-21 14:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833717595 Amit Murthy https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833718992 Comment 1: The knuckles looked good. The shading was also good. The liquify looked good.
Comment 2: I think the background could be better. I think the masking could be better.]]> 2021-10-21 14:29:11 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833718992 Amit Murthy https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833726300 Comment 1: The nails looked really good. The liquify looked really good. I liked the hands.
Comment 2: I think the hair could be better. I think you should mask it to make it more realistic. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833726300 Shawn Francis https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833932954 The photo looks pretty good the colors look nice and you did a good job with keeping the colors together. The criticism I have would be to add a background, to warp the witch more and to do a bit more shading.]]> 2021-10-21 15:29:59 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1833932954 Arjun Nair https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1834194250 I really like the coloring on the hair and also the skin. I also like the look of the nails

I think that masking of the hair can be better and also I think that you could have liquify the face a bit more ]]> 2021-10-21 16:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1834194250 Shawn Francis https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1837586462 The photo looks pretty good the colors look nice and you did a good job with matching the image and the background together. The criticism I have would be to add a bit more color on the cloths, as well as to liquify and

shade the witch a bit more.

]]> 2021-10-23 04:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1837586462 Shawn Francis https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1837588093 The photo looks good, the colors and background work well together and you did a good job with the hair. A criticism I have would be to liquify the face a bit more and to add more shading.]]> 2021-10-23 04:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1837588093 Georgia Pratt https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1846169526 Your hair is very good because of the hombre effect of green. I like how you utilized the burn tool for the teeth. I think you also efficiently did your witches nails. Good job!

You may want to next time do a better job on the skin because it looks like pepperonis. ]]> 2021-10-26 20:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1846169526 Georgia P. https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1846173160 Love how you really did a good job of messing up her face to make her look witchy. Good job with skincolor-and nail length. Maybe next time cut more white out around her hair, it will look most efficient that way. Good job overall.

]]> 2021-10-26 20:04:13 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1846173160 Georgia P. https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1846178504 Awesome job on having no white space around the hair; interesting hair color. The nail length is great. Also, great job on the teeth and I like how your hair is wavy. I actually didn’t know there was a tool that did that. Maybe next time don’t do that glow thing to the eyes because it doesn’t look realistic ]]> 2021-10-26 20:07:03 UTC https://padlet.com/reederm1/WITCH1B/wish/1846178504