https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1 When you are done, open your journals and start writing! en-us 2017-12-14 15:24:09 UTC 2017-12-15 16:40:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228738 I learned that ARMS is a revising strategy.
I learned that CUPS is for a editing method.
I learned that you should use synonyms to increase the strength of your writing.]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228738 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228763 I didn't really learn anything]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228763 jsce7790 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228808 Three interesting facts i learned about editing and revising are, you don't just edit and revise once you edit and revise about 5 times. I also learned that you can use ARMS to help with revising. I learned that you can use CUPS to help with editing.

]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228808 mcar1260 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228870 because is makes the readers think of new words.]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228870 hmen8440 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228883 they use words more interesting than just good bad and happy]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228883 rhil1240 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228923 2017-12-14 16:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228923 syou8940 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228935 2017-12-14 16:41:33 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228935 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228960 It makes it less boring, because you're not using boring words. You're using words that are more complex but mean the same thing.]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228960 evas8230 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228967 i learned that ARMS and CUPS where a strategy


]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216228967 tcar0350 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229017 honestly, nothing really.]]> 2017-12-14 16:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229017 hmen8440 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229168 Didn't learn much only the cups and arms]]> 2017-12-14 16:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229168 jcar6800 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229174 1. They Are not the same.
2. Editing is CUPS
3. Revise is ARMS]]> 2017-12-14 16:42:09 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229174 syou8940 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229191 2017-12-14 16:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229191 jala8950 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229457 I learned that editing is looking for mistakes and revising is all about ideas. I also learned the meaning of CUPS and ARMS.

]]> 2017-12-14 16:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229457 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229583 hard work pays off]]> 2017-12-14 16:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229583 evas8230 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229598 It makes it look professional and not like we're in 1st grade

]]> 2017-12-14 16:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229598 mcar1260 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229736 2017-12-14 16:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229736 hmen8440 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229872 Elementary Memories]]> 2017-12-14 16:43:45 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216229872 tcar0350 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230220 it fixes up our words to make them more professional :))]]> 2017-12-14 16:44:33 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230220 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230355 Synonyms make your writing seem more advanced and more in depth]]> 2017-12-14 16:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230355 jcar6800 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230409 2017-12-14 16:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230409 tcar0350 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230519 an embarrasing moment]]> 2017-12-14 16:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230519 syou8940 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230768

]]> 2017-12-14 16:45:54 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216230768 jcar6800 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216300184 2017-12-14 19:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216300184 lles7050 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216304969 1.) The methods : CUPS and ARMS
2.) I also learned what CUPS and ARMS stand for. CUPS C=Capitalization U=Usage P=Punctuation S=Spelling
ARMS  A=Add R=Remove  M=Move 
S=Spelling
3.) I learned how to use editing and revising more effectively. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216304969 lles7050 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216307949 Synonyms make your story more vivid and interesting ]]> 2017-12-14 19:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216307949 lles7050 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216310681 2017-12-14 19:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216310681 amar9160 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216371366 I learned what strategies you should use for revising/editing.]]> 2017-12-15 02:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216371366 amar9160 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216371496 Synonyms give the reader more attention when they are reading,while dead words would make the reader not want to read the book.]]> 2017-12-15 02:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216371496 amar9160 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216371876 Family vacation]]> 2017-12-15 02:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216371876 rpat8480 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216506756 Three interesting facts I learned was the ARMS method, the CUPS method,.
I learned that you should use  synonyms to make your writing better and to hook the reader to keep reading more.]]> 2017-12-15 15:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216506756 sjep3570 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216512968 I now know a fast way of remembering steps of editing and revising and they are not the same and also have a specific order]]> 2017-12-15 15:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216512968 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216514403 Family vacation]]> 2017-12-15 15:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216514403 sjep3570 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216514607 My memorable family vacation]]> 2017-12-15 15:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216514607 sjep3570 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216514976 they can make the best words for the exact definition in a sente]]> 2017-12-15 15:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216514976 ddug6030 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524251 2017-12-15 15:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524251 jala8950 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524559 A Time you had to be brave

]]> 2017-12-15 15:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524559 evas8230 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524624 a bunch of stories of the struggle of a russian person in 1st grade

]]> 2017-12-15 15:50:38 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524624 dbru8040 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524642 interesting to read]]> 2017-12-15 15:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524642 ddug6030 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524729 2017-12-15 15:50:51 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524729 ddug6030 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524977 2017-12-15 15:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216524977 gcan9650 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525219 Memorable Birthday]]> 2017-12-15 15:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525219 bbar7140 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525506 2017-12-15 15:52:35 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525506 jhag8240 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525666 2017-12-15 15:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525666 dbru8040 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525742 2017-12-15 15:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216525742 dbru8040 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216529232 a dense change]]> 2017-12-15 16:00:15 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216529232 jsce7790 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216535220 A time I helped someone.]]> 2017-12-15 16:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216535220 jsce7790 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216535341 Synonyms make your writing better because then you don't use the same word 39721642622816217 times]]> 2017-12-15 16:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216535341 mmac2150 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216539797 2017-12-15 16:25:12 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216539797 mmac2150 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216539987 2017-12-15 16:25:39 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216539987 mmac2150 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216540886 2017-12-15 16:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216540886 myou2950 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216544722 There not the same thing]]> 2017-12-15 16:36:21 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216544722 myou2950 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216545038 It makes sure that u don't repeat what u firs write]]> 2017-12-15 16:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216545038 myou2950 https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216546258 something to fight for]]> 2017-12-15 16:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/apalmer110/hos38zzqeou1/wish/216546258