https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3 Post some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 14:35:32 UTC 2025-12-20 02:40:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712181 -I think you should try speak up next time
-I like how you provided I like how educated you were about your presentation and the story you were presenting on

]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712181 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712228 I love how clear your voice. You have us information that we didn't learn from the first PowerPoint regarding the transgender prisoners. I feel like you need to speak up a little bit because I cannot hear you very well. Good job! :)))]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712228 morenosc000 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712270 1) I like your presentation! But I would recommend using more statistics to really back your research and opinion.
2) I like how you included the hiv slide 
3) over all good job! Try including

]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712270 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712278 Try to speak up while presenting

I liked when you told us about the employment and getting fired when they came out.


]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712278 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712412 -  I like how you tied in reasoning for imprisonment. 
- I like that you stated that people would commit crimes to be imprisoned again since they don't have job opportunities]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712412 perezale008 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712420 -I liked your point about how transgender imprisonment is not covered by media so much
-I like how as the presentation progressed you started to become more comfortable with yourself speaking in front of the class.
-Look up from your iPad more often to make sure the audience is engaged

]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712420 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712426 Speak up and have more confidence when presenting. Very good PowerPoint well organized and nice to read. ]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712426 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712438 I really enjoyed your facts and information. Your did a good job on your presentation and I found your examples very interesting.]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712438 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712458 I liked the format of your presentation, but you should speak up a little louder if you could. I also liked that you talked about PREA in your presentation I haven't heard of that before. Also that you included videos about your topic.]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712458 leepeang000 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712462 The presentation was very informative and well organized. I like how you briefly explained everything but got to the point without talking too much ]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712462 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712490 I like the layout of your presentation. It is very short and straight to the point, it would be easier to read through and still have a clear understanding of how transgender prisoners are treated differently. I like how your presentation added onto Emily's it gave us more of an understanding! Overall it was great! ]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712490 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712495 I like how you included statistics to back up your claims, it makes 
your statements more valid. Your inclusion of the rights and laws and different point of views allows us to see multiple people's view point on the topic. ]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712495 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712524 Be calm. 
I like how you tied in the pros and cons of isolation.
I like the HIV stats. 
Speak a little louder. 
Good layout. ]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712524 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712525 You seemed a bit nervous but did good!! Liked the layout/color font of your presentation but think it would help if you added a couple of pictures to your slideshow. Good job !]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712525 jacobjam000 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712537 I like that you did a lot of research about the project and the presentation was good]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712537 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712676 I like how you said that transgenders in prison don’t really get much media attention neither do females, but male prisons get a lot of media attention and that’s what we are mostly exposed to.
The reason transgenders go to jail really shocked me.

]]> 2017-09-27 15:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712676 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712795 •I really like the information that you provided about transgenders in prisons.
•The color of your slides really capture the attention of the audience. Very good.]]> 2017-09-27 15:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712795 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712842 The inclusion of videos is a nice addition to the presentation as well as the thought and research in the prison]]> 2017-09-27 15:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712842 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712893 Your power point was organized very well and I like that you addressed the physiological side affect of transgenders in prison.
-try to collect your thoughts before speaking, it will help to keep you from saying “umm”]]> 2017-09-27 15:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712893 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712969 It's nice how you didn't just read from the slides, but you could speak a little louder]]> 2017-09-27 15:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191712969 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713188 Very nice and put together nicely
I think you should speak up more and feel confident about your project
Also don't say "um" and "like" alot. ]]> 2017-09-27 15:11:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713188 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713270 Research and presentation were both good . I like your point about employment discrimination caused them to commit more crimes. It was a very organized presentation and I like how you added pictures.]]> 2017-09-27 15:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713270 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713916 -Increase speaking volume.
-I like that you added some reasons that trans individuals would be incarcerated. 
-Be a little more enthusiastic.]]> 2017-09-27 15:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713916 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713963 The pictures add a good perspective of the change explained ]]> 2017-09-27 15:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191713963 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191714974 -You were saying "um" a lot, just take a minute to properly organize your thoughts
-You had a lot of good and valid information in your slide and you did job composing it]]> 2017-09-27 15:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191714974 https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191716195 Karina~ Try to speak a little louder, some points I can't hear what you're saying. Also try to flow your words and sentences together when speaking]]> 2017-09-27 15:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hoqri3ikuvk3/wish/191716195