https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9 Type up your rating of this essay and include an explanation. Also, include how you think they came up with their examples to use! Put your name on it and comment on two other reflections! en-us 2018-09-26 12:26:12 UTC 2025-11-03 11:07:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513367 they used real life events]]> 2018-09-27 13:51:02 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513367 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513770 I think that the story had a very strong, and it was very clear. 10/10

]]> 2018-09-27 13:51:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513770 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513880 i think that they use real life events to do the essay]]> 2018-09-27 13:51:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513880 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513897 i think that the controlling idea was strong because it was focus clear and pick a side ]]> 2018-09-27 13:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286513897 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514072 I think that the essay was strong because it was very focus,clear, and it picked a side.]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514072 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514112 i think that the story is very strong in what its trying to say. it had a strong controlling idea and it had good evidence and examples for the controlling idea. they used a book and facts from a real life event to give evidence but remained on topic. ]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514112 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514117 I think it had all the the things you need to have an controlling idea.I had focused on 1 thing it was clear and it picked a side]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514117 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514122 my rating of the essay is probably a 8/10 i chose that rating because the controling idea is very good it is focus , clear, and it has a picked side .the examples do really go with the essay becuase iits focused with the controlling idea]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514122 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514126 as I read the essay i thought it was like 8/10 because it had real life events and thing she had done. It was also good

]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514126 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514140 I will rate it a 8,because it tells example of how to achive goals or  how other people achive the goal,but only that its to much words in it so without to many words I will rate it a 10




]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514140 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514197 this essay is 10/10]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514197 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514200 10/10 amazing because he gets avery detal in the storry]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514200 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514377 to me the story was well put in had  good facts in i like how it used real life events 

]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514377 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514442 controlling idea.

]]> 2018-09-27 13:52:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514442 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514460 2018-09-27 13:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286514460 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286515900 2018-09-27 13:54:29 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286515900 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286516123 olivia
it was not to wordy]]> 2018-09-27 13:54:46 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286516123 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286516223 i think it was based on a real event. i give a 7]]> 2018-09-27 13:54:56 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286516223 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545271 I think that this story is a 9.5. This is because the story has alot of evidence relevant to the controlling idea. This story picks a side has a  very clear focus.

]]> 2018-09-27 14:35:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545271 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545640 I think it's a 9/10 because, it had clear evidence supporting the controlling idea. The controlling idea was strong and supported all the evidence]]> 2018-09-27 14:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545640 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545715 I would give this a 6.5 because this essay has good evidence, yet it need to pick a side wen it comes to their controlling idea. They could improve their grammar as well. Otherwise that, I think it's an okay essay.]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545715 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545721 I think it is a 6.01 out of ten because the examples were good but at the beginning it was a little messed up because it wouldn't choose a side ]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545721 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545905 I would rate it a 8 because the essay was pretty focused except for the beginning, which really didn't pick a side, the examples were good pieces of evidence, though]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545905 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545968 I rate this a 3 (in staar scores) 
I think this because the first paragraph wasn't picking a side, it went from goals to not following goals back to goals.]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286545968 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546021 i  would give it a 8/10 because the controlling idea wasn't very strong but the evidence was strong]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546021 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546023 I would give my rating of this essay a 4/10 because it was very wordy and the controlling idea couldve been a little better.]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546023 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546075 This essay was kind of confusing at the beginning but the rest of the essay was good. So I give it a 4 out of 5 star rating.]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546075 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546205 1~10
I give it a 7 it was good not perfect but it was good. they got their examples from a book by Kimberly Bradley's 'THE WAR THAT SAVED MY LIFE' and history of Texas in 1901.]]> 2018-09-27 14:36:42 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546205 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546463 In my opinion this story was really well put together. In STAAR scoring I would give this story a 3. I would give it a 3 because of the beginning. I don really like how they put the beginning of the story together, because they jump around form idea to idea. But the evidence is really well put together and itś just good evidence in general

]]> 2018-09-27 14:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546463 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546981 I think a 8 because it has good evidence and supports its controlling idea but it has this other sentence that does not belong there because it try's to tell you something else.]]> 2018-09-27 14:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286546981 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547075 I think that it was ok but, it could have a better controlling idea.Over all the evidence  was strong. it deserves a 8/10]]> 2018-09-27 14:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547075 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547080 I would give it a four out of five stars.I think the story was good ,but I didn't like the fact that the first paragraph was a little bit confusing on it's controlling idea.They got there first example from a book, and the last one from some type social studies class or some history text book.]]> 2018-09-27 14:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547080 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547113 i think i give the essay 9.9/10 cause their was tons of evidence and it was really clear -_- >:o >:D XD]]> 2018-09-27 14:37:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547113 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547272 l give the essay a 8/10 because it gave good evidence and good connecting sentences,but the the controlling sentence was kind of unclear to me.

]]> 2018-09-27 14:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547272 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547499 I give this essay a 6/10 because it didnt pick a side and it wasnt clear. I also think that the author got its ideas from a book, and maybe a real life event that the author knew about.]]> 2018-09-27 14:38:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547499 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547916 i would give it a 9/10 because its controlling idea is ok ,but it can be better. Also its evidance is very good.]]> 2018-09-27 14:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286547916 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286548427 9.123456787/10
wasnt tooo wordy and had a good controlling idea and used real life events ]]> 2018-09-27 14:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286548427 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286549179 I would rate the story a 3 out of 4 just because of the beginning of the story and how nit bounced form idea to idea and didn just stick with one idea]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286549179 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286584599 8/10 
cause  it has evidence and controlling idea but the 1 paragraph is confusing. ]]> 2018-09-27 15:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286584599 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585431 2018-09-27 15:33:03 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585431 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585833 I would give this a 0 out 10 it was trash, it was not entertaining 

]]> 2018-09-27 15:33:38 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585833 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585874 It gets a 7/10,good advice is given but the first paragraph is unclear and kind of changes topic.

]]> 2018-09-27 15:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585874 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585904 i will give it a 3 because the controlling idea wasn't that strong but the connecting sentence and evidence was

]]> 2018-09-27 15:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286585904 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586008 I give this essay a 7/10 because i feel like the essay could of have more to it then just what it had.Also they couldve tried to put it in their own words.]]> 2018-09-27 15:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586008 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586080 i would give it a 8/10 because the controlling idea and the introduction was really confusing and it threw me off

]]> 2018-09-27 15:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586080 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586131 I give the essay about a 8 out of 10 because all the evidence was good and strong but the introduction was kind of confusing and they didn't pick a side]]> 2018-09-27 15:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586131 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586194 4/5 cause it was really clear and strong accept for the first 
paragraph]]> 2018-09-27 15:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586194 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586324 I give it a 1/10 because it didnt have a side and it wasnt as clear]]> 2018-09-27 15:34:20 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586324 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586343 I think its a 9/10 because i don't really understand what were typing or learning about.

]]> 2018-09-27 15:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586343 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586494 Well i think that they need to work on the introduction because its a little confusing because they didn't pick a side.]]> 2018-09-27 15:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586494 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586564 i think the essay was good i would give it a 4 as well it had a good controlling idea and good evidence i also think it cool how he used real life examples it did although have it a little mixed up but overall it was good. ]]> 2018-09-27 15:34:40 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586564 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586909 I would give it a 8/10]]> 2018-09-27 15:35:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286586909 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587013 2018-09-27 15:35:19 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587013 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587172 4 out  of 8 cuz it couldve been better

]]> 2018-09-27 15:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587172 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587320 2018-09-27 15:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587320 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587347 I would give it a 7 out of 10 because the controlling idea was not very strong and the evidence would not persuade people.

]]> 2018-09-27 15:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587347 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587755 2018-09-27 15:36:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286587755 06luiram54646 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286588011 I give it a 7/10 because it has its controlling idea and its supporting evidence]]> 2018-09-27 15:36:38 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286588011 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286588032 i think its a 6/10 because everything was mixed up and it was getting really confusing]]> 2018-09-27 15:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286588032 05dejsta99989 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286590568 i feel like the writer should have had a better hook]]> 2018-09-27 15:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286590568 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286737942 i would give a 8/10 because the controlling idea always confuses me all the time]]> 2018-09-27 20:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286737942 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286737993 i give it a 8 out of ten because it needs a better ending]]> 2018-09-27 20:22:48 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286737993 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738044 I think the essay was good i would give it a 7 because it had good controlling ideas and good evidence i also think it was cool how he used real life examples it did although have it a little mixed up but overall it was a good eassy.]]> 2018-09-27 20:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738044 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738060 I would give it a 7/10 because it had a good story and its focused and its clear.]]> 2018-09-27 20:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738060 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738194 I give it 8/10 because of the intro had one sentence that was not apart of the main idea]]> 2018-09-27 20:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738194 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738322 7/10 , because there was a some word that were mis-spellled which i woudnt understand , then it was hrad for me to find the sentence]]> 2018-09-27 20:24:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738322 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738339 because... it had the supporting evidence and the controlling idea]]> 2018-09-27 20:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738339 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738342 I rate this essay an 8/10 because it had a good controlling idea and lots of evidence. It as also a little mixed up so I didn't really understand it. Other than that it was a very good story.]]> 2018-09-27 20:24:12 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738342 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738436 I will give it a 8 out of a 10 . I know he or she can make a better essay this essay is good but I know that the writer can make it better ]]> 2018-09-27 20:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738436 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738565 2018-09-27 20:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738565 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738599 i give it a 8/10 because it had good suporting ideas to the controlling]]> 2018-09-27 20:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738599 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738672 I give it a 8/10 because the introduction was really confusing ;]]> 2018-09-27 20:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738672 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738775 i give it a 8/10 because of how it was it was clear:)]]> 2018-09-27 20:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738775 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738806 2018-09-27 20:25:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286738806 https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286739504 it is not bad and helpful]]> 2018-09-27 20:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/hgainey/hon04w3v03s9/wish/286739504