I1 - Bad News by Daniel L. Bittencourt https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo en-us 2019-04-16 18:11:32 UTC 2019-04-25 17:19:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352078547 from: Joana
Hi best friend,  i’m very afraid because i have some bad news to tell you , i’m really sorry to say  that but  i was involved in a accident , i was in the street playing hide and seek with my neighbors  , then i decide climb in a tree , but accidentally i felt from the  tree and broke my leg so i can’t go to your birthday tomorrow, but enjoy your party , i see you next week in the school and i give your present ok?   
i hope you understand 
bye happy birthday 

Good e-mail Joana!

I like your ideas and you vocabulary.

The text could be divided in paragraphs to make the story easier to understand.

The expression is " I'm affraid I have some bad news "

Remember to use the past and the future when necessary!
I WILL give your present at school
I decided to climb a tree

Keep practicing!]]> 2019-04-16 18:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352078547 From: André Felipe https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352083986 To:Thiago 
Hello Thiago, I’m really sad because I Will not able to go to your birthday party. Unfortunately my grandmother gets sick and My mother’s cars is in concert, so i need to leave my grandmother to the hospital. I hope you understand this. I promise I will gives to you my present Tuesday, in collage. Enjoy your party, send a hug to everybody for me please. Have a nice day, and happy birthday to you, my old friend. Let’s go out for a beer in the weekend, I pay for you. 

Great e-mail André!

I really like your ideas, the vocabulary used and the structure of the text, great job!

Pay attention:
My grandmother GOT sick
My mother's car is BEING FIXED
I promise I will GIVE you

Keep up the excellent work!]]> 2019-04-16 18:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352083986 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352084109  From: Júlia
Hey friend,
I'm afraid I have bad news, first of all you know I love you, and I like to see you happy. But unfortunately I lost the moviment of my legs in a surf accident, it was everything going well, until I felt I lot of pain, after I discovered that shark bit my legs, but I could swim back to the beach. Hurted a lot, but now I'm fine! Don't be scared, it's temporary, but my mom is really afraid that if I go out I hurt more my legs. I know I'd promised I'd be at your 16 birthday party, but this situation it's not my choice! I hope you understand the situation. I miss you, so if you can, come and visit me, I'd like.
Miss you a lot,
Júlia

What a dramatic story Julia! I love it!

Great use of the past tenses!
Very good vocabulary and structure!
Remember
It HURT a lot
this situation is not my choice

Keep up the excellent work!]]> 2019-04-16 18:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352084109 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352084178 From Nicole
Hi bestie! I’m really sorry  that I forgot to see that because I was very confused about somethings, but today my mom told me something very bad... I’m going to move out from here now!! I’m going to live at Miami and you know that Miami is my favorite place, but whatever... The point is that is impossible for me go to your birthday party. I’m really bad about it but I hope you understand me, because you know that isn’t my fault! Hope that I see you soon.
Kisses

Great text Nicole!

Very creative idea and good use of vocabulary!

The first sentence could be more clear! 

Keep practicing!
 

]]> 2019-04-16 18:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352084178 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352084602 Hi Jordyn! How are you? I'm not good. I'm afraid I have some bad news to you. I got into trouble, I accidentally broke my mom's cell phone and my mom got mad with me, she grouder me in this week so I'll not be allowed to go to your birthday party! I'm so so sorry, I'm really sad, but I promise that I would buy you a present and what do you think about a sleepover just you and me? 
With regrates
From Marina 

Great e-mail Marina!

Very good idea and use of vocabulary!

Remember
my mom got mad AT me
she GROUNDED me this week
With regrets,

Keep up the excellent work!]]> 2019-04-16 18:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352084602 from: ana luiza to: someone https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352085285 hey there someone, so, i'm afraid i have bad news, i couldn't get to your party 'cause some bad stuff happend, i was in the car, going to your party with my brother driving, he crashed into the car in front of us, everything was fine, besides the fact that his car is really screwed, and he has to pay for the damage caused in the other car, he lost 800 bucks in this accident and his head is bleeding now, so unfortunately i couldn't go to your party and he missed his class, and when we finnaly got home my parents were REALLY pissed with him, nothing happend with me, 'cause, thank god, i was with the seatbelts on, in the backseat, so sorry about everything, i wish i could go to you party, hope you understand.

xx,
ana

What a dramatic story Ana! I love it!

This is a perfect example of very informal writing, good job! 

Keep up the excellent work!]]> 2019-04-16 18:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352085285 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086023 From: Matheus
To: João
Hi João I'm relly sorry but I will not be able to go to your birthday party.
First of all I hope you can enjoy your day because is not every day that you make it. I was very anxious about your party but I will not go because my parents broke up and my mom is so upset and I'm trying to help her, I hope you understand the situation.

What a dramatic story Matheus! I love it!

Very good use of vocabulary and structure.

Remember to end the letter (Regards, Best wishes, All the best, See you soon)

Keep up the excellent work!]]> 2019-04-16 18:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086023 from Rafaela https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086355 hi Luisa, i can't go to your house today because i have some bad news :( I was walking on the street to buy bread,and i was looking to my cellphone and out of the blue i fall into the manhole! I start to scream and a man called to the firefighter and to a ambulance,because my leg was hurting. wel,now i'm on the hospital and my leg is broken! xoxo rafaela

Great e-mail Rafa!

Very creative! I really like your ideas, the vocabulary used and the structure of the text, great job!

Pay attention:
I FELL
I STARTED
I'm AT the hospital

Keep up the excellent work!
]]> 2019-04-16 18:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086355 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086427 -Bruna Basso 

Hi Bella

I have bad news. I’m went buy your present whith my mother but  you know, it’s raining a lot and a tree fell on my car, it’s a really big desarter. The glass fall on my mom and now we are on the hospitol  but the doctor said she will need stay here so i preferer stay whith her. I will here apreciat if you understand that i will not go for your party. I’m sorry. 

Bruna  

What a tragic story Bruna! I love it!

Great ideas, good vocabulary! 

Pay attention to use the correct tense!
I was buying your present with my mother, it was raining a lot when a tree fell on my car.
It was a really big disaster.

Keep practicing!

]]> 2019-04-16 18:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086427 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086564 From Bruno
Hello joão, I am really sorry for the late reply but i have finally managed to sit down and write back to you

First for all, i am absolutely thrilled for you birthday. I am so happy for you, congratulations!

But, i have some bad news to tell you. Last night i was riding my bike when a man runed over me. I fainted and the man called the ambullancy. When i wake up i was in the hospital with my leg broken. I can't go to your birthday party. I hope you understand this.

Great text Bruno!

Very clear structure and great vocabulary, good job!

Remember:
The past of RUN is RAN
The past of WAKE is WOKE

Remember to end the letter (Regards, Best wishes, All the best, See you soon)

Keep up the excellent work!

]]> 2019-04-16 18:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086564 From Angelo Bersagui https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086673 Hi,best friend I can't go to your party,because I had an accident,I'm really sorry.

I was walking on the street and suddenly,i saw a man running a way from a cop.to stop him,I pushed the man back but,he was fat so didn't affect him.He was angry so,he punch me on the face,wich caused me to pass out.now i'm the hospital 



What a crazy story gelinho! I love it!

Very clear structure and good use of vocabulary!

Remember
He PUNCHED me 
I'm AT the hospital

Keep up the excellent work!]]> 2019-04-16 18:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352086673 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352087003 From: Guilherme 
Hi, I was going there but I soffered an accident. I was walking when I broke my legs and I an in a hospital now. That means that I cant go there today. But the doctor says that in one month I will be normal and then     I can go there. I am really sad about that I am sorry .
Guilherme 

Great text Guilherme! 

You accomplished the task. 

You could have expended your ideas a little bit more, and your structure could be better.

Keep practicing!]]> 2019-04-16 18:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352087003 https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352087112 From Miguel 
Hi best friend, I’m really sorry but I can’t go to your birthday party, when I’m going to your party it’s raining a lot and was a lot of traffic. 
We spend two hours there and then we saw the street was close, we have to come back to my house and we spend one hour until the street was liberate, but it was too late for I go to your birthday.
I promise I will give you a nice present on the school!
Bye

Good e-mail Miguel!

I like the structure and the vocabulary used in the text.

Remember to use the verbs in the past! 
I WAS going to your party
We SPENT two hours
The street WAS closed

Keep practicing!]]> 2019-04-16 18:38:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lbdaniel/hni49y2d1mdo/wish/352087112