https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER Hey everyone, this is our shared space where you will plan the Paragraphs of your Formal Letter. Remember that this is a FIRST DRAFT so mistakes are fine. en-us 2022-11-17 04:20:30 UTC 2022-11-24 09:35:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4c4.png Woman_of_Newport https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387707297 Dear Sir/Madam
I am a student at the college. I am writing to share my suggestions about how to improve the college facilities.]]> 2022-11-17 04:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387707297 Woman_of_Newport https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387717324 I hope you will consider my suggestions to develop the catering department at the college. ]]> 2022-11-17 04:46:31 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387717324 Woman_of_Newport https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387724568 Firstly, I think the canteen is a great facility, however there are not enough halal options. It would be good to improve the menu.  ]]> 2022-11-17 04:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387724568 Woman_of_Newport https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387729491 In addition, the food in the canteen is fine for me. However, there are many Muslims in my course who are dissatisfied as the kitchen staff use the same equipment to cook halal and non-halal food. Consequently, it is important to change that by buying new equipment to cook halal food. ]]> 2022-11-17 05:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2387729491 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388101048 I am a student at the college.I am writing this letter to inform you about my suggestions how to spend the money for facilities in our college.]]> 2022-11-17 11:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388101048 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388107306 Firstly, the toilet cubicles in the women restrooms are always clean, although they could be bigger. Therefore, it is impotant to change this by increasing the size of the toilet cubicles.]]> 2022-11-17 11:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388107306 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388108288 Introduction ]]> 2022-11-17 11:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388108288 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388109651 Firstly, I think the management of the college pays a lot of attention to security issues, although latest electronic security  systems are not use at the Colege Gwent. The security system may be more modern furthermore effective.]]> 2022-11-17 11:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388109651 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388112443  I writhing that letter to give my opinions about the things we require to improve in college]]> 2022-11-17 11:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388112443 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388113211 First thing we require to improve is the cantine menu because the menu has no option because have same things every day .Although other thing is the cantine don’t have equipment for halal food ,for me that is not a problem but my class mates can’t eat in cantine because that]]> 2022-11-17 11:24:58 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388113211 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114202 2022-11-17 11:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114202 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114328 lam a student at the college.lam writing a bout how to improve the college facility.]]> 2022-11-17 11:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114328 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114610 2022-11-17 11:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114610 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114614 Introduction]]> 2022-11-17 11:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114614 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114713 2022-11-17 11:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114713 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114758 2022-11-17 11:26:16 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114758 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114922 I am studen at college My class is realy big so we need mor table. ]]> 2022-11-17 11:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388114922 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115127 I am a student at the college.I am writing to share my suggestions about how to improve the college facilities.]]> 2022-11-17 11:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115127 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115439 2022-11-17 11:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115439 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115858 I am a student at College, I am waiting the latter and I would like to share some of my options to what to improve equipment in the college.]]> 2022-11-17 11:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115858 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115911 I am writing this letter to inform you that as a student who drive an electric vehicle to college I have struggle to find charging point nearby.]]> 2022-11-17 11:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388115911 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388116473 As a student…….]]> 2022-11-17 11:27:55 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388116473 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388116597 Firstly,I think the canteen is a good service,however,there are not enough halal food for me that is need to improve the menu and the coffee in canteen is not good.

The food in the canteen is fine but for me is problem as every time we bring my food from home and some time ,I go outside to eat in the restaurant .]]> 2022-11-17 11:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388116597 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388117070 I am student at the college.I am writing this letter to make a suggestion regarding improvements to the college,as the demand for new students increases every year]]> 2022-11-17 11:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388117070 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388117278 I would like to speak about a problem in the canteen.I think there is not enough space for all students we need more tables and chairs and solve this a problem we need a bigger building.]]> 2022-11-17 11:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388117278 Woman_of_Newport https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388120092 2022-11-17 11:31:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388120092 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388120793 Dear Madam,]]> 2022-11-17 11:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388120793 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388121092 2022-11-17 11:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388121092 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388121764 Dear sir]]> 2022-11-17 11:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388121764 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388121774 2022-11-17 11:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388121774 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388124337 2022-11-17 11:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388124337 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388125448 2022-11-17 11:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388125448 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388125963 2022-11-17 11:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388125963 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388128527 2022-11-17 11:39:13 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388128527 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388133130




]]> 2022-11-17 11:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388133130 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388136353 Cantine requires new equipment and new menu maybe you will consider my suggestion ]]> 2022-11-17 11:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388136353 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388136632 I am writing to share my advice about how to get extra class as well as how students in the college get more help .]]> 2022-11-17 11:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388136632 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388137432 2022-11-17 11:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388137432 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388139217 2022-11-17 11:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388139217 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388143486 2022-11-17 11:53:07 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388143486 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388143616 2022-11-17 11:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388143616 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388143739 2022-11-17 11:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388143739 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388156540 May I say that the college has easy access to the car park. Houwever, the car park is very small for the demand of students.]]> 2022-11-17 12:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388156540 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388163646 Seeing the difficult of parking sometimes,my suggestion would be to make a new car park,bringing more comfort and safety to the students.]]> 2022-11-17 12:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388163646 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388165539 I hope you will consider my suggestions to develop a new car park at the college ]]> 2022-11-17 12:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388165539 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388166280 Yours faithfully]]> 2022-11-17 12:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388166280 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388170794 2022-11-17 12:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388170794 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388172204 2022-11-17 12:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388172204 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388614647 Could I say that the college has too difficult  access to the car park. 
Although, the car park is too small for the students to access the car park.]]> 2022-11-17 16:41:59 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388614647 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388626640 We need to build a new car park for students sometimes, there are struggles to find a park space. ]]> 2022-11-17 16:48:59 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2388626640 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2390384032 I am student at the college.I am writing to inform you that you could make improvements to the technology department of the library inside the college because everything is slow and outdated.]]> 2022-11-18 19:29:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2390384032 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391459168 In addition the car park is good but there is a problem the CCTV are not enough in the car park we need more security system.]]> 2022-11-20 14:45:58 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391459168 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391461240 I hope my ideas help solve problems.
Yours faithfully 
Nawres Albaidhawi ]]> 2022-11-20 14:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391461240 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391713817 In addition, although the dishes on the menu in canteen are delicious and fresh, there aren't enough dishes for vegetarians.
It would be good to add more vegetarian options to the menu.]]> 2022-11-20 22:08:04 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391713817 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391716689 2022-11-20 22:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391716689 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391717351 Secondly, I realized that these computers sound very slow and the program used is old.Although I was happy to see so many laptops in the library, I had difficulty working on two of them.
Given the fact that I encountered a big loss of time operating on these laptops, I suggest you invest in the acquisition of new battery operating technologies and in changing new computers.

I hope you will consider my suggestions so that in the future students will benefit from a technology to facilitate the operation mode on laptops.
Yours faifhfuly, 
Brindusa Balanescu

]]> 2022-11-20 22:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391717351 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391719344 I hope you will find my suggestions useful.]]> 2022-11-20 22:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2391719344 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2394607989 Moreover, there are not enough places to sit in the corridors. Therefore, I would like you to suggest to purchase of additional chairs furthermore to create of new seating places for students.]]> 2022-11-22 19:05:55 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2394607989 https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2394668125 Eventually, I hope my suggestions for improvement of facilities for students the college management will consider.]]> 2022-11-22 20:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Woman_of_Newport/E3CFORMALLETTER/wish/2394668125