- Demography study for introduction unclear

- Use SWOT and not SWOC

- Mention your design strategies on your site / design

- Low carbon not only focus on car-free, additional of trees and shrubs can make the area low carbon

- Elaborate the images presented on board

- There's active activities on river, but not enough active activites on land (eg. activities like flying fox, etc.)

- Create landscape where public can do active activities and not just boring lanscape design

- Indicate the addition of land from original site (use dotted line)

- Lack of indicating zoning areas on site

-Study on how to solve flood.

2) EMPHESIZE THE MAIN IDEA.

-Focus more on main activities and programme.

3) IDEA CONCEPT.

-Study more on concept and try to refine more in execution.

4) PRESENTATION & GRAPHIC COMMUNICATION.

-Arrange board composition properly

to suit our own presentation.

-Highlight more on main component of design.

5) URBAN DESIGN

-More softscape than hardscape

-Shading element

2. The current issue is okay, but if you can solve the real issue regarding industry zone (waste Management and environmental issue)

3. To provide a program schedule (from morning to night)

4. To propose more programs at eco-industry park area

5. To design layout inside the factory tour zone

6. To calculate car parking capacity

7. To redesign the focal point and intersection point of the two pedestrians exist. (Redesign the platform plaza)

8. To rethink the function of the main building. (To be the center that lead the people to both zones on the side)

9. Reconsider industrial factory tours zone access. Usually at the back of the factory is a waste storage area)

10. Hierarchy of the pedestrian access needed to be clear.

11. To provide more human eyes level perspectives to show activities.

• Focus more on main activities and programme and why.

2) IDEA CONCEPT & JUSTIFICATION

• Fahamkan, justification dan apakah kaitan dengan community and urban

4) PRESENTATION & GRAPHIC COMMUNICATION.

• Susunan content untuk presentation

• Highlight more on main component of design

• Pilih diagram, gunakan perkataan yang bersesuaian ketika presentation dan pakaian yang kemas

4) URBAN DESIGN

• More softscape than hardscape

• Locate pedestrian walkway

• How and why hexagon shape created

-Understand what is urban farming vs community garden

-linear farming hard to maintain

2) Comments from all panel

-Outcome proposal still don't reflect concept.

-zoning placement looks separated, instead it should be integrated

- apply 5 urban elements in proposal, such as creating own district in site, creating few interconnected nodes (reflect the issue stated) and connect to existing node-temple

-make pavement between the farm interesting by adding shading.

- people need to walk too far through pavement in order to reach to riverside, should have axis from the corner and spread through the riverside (fishing hut). Fishing hut only concentrated at one zone, should disperse along the riverside from the axis.

-do 1 commercial zoning kiosk+cafe.

-Dikepilkan bersama fail yang berkenaan yang akan dimasukkan bersama di dalam board final design saya nanti

1. Tambah lebih gambar gambar yang menunjukkan aktiviti yang disediakan (lokasi, aktiviti, target user)

2. utamakan laluan pejalan kaki masuk ke dalam site. Pathway yang direct ke main building( sense of welcoming,attraction)

3. Reorganize building layout and response to the site contact

   
   

1. Namakan setiap nodes dengan nama iconic supaya kena dengan identiti.

2. Explain gambar mengikut flow as tourist experience.

3. Hanya menggunakan pokok jenis Palm sahaja.

4. Hedges Shrup (eye level) untuk saperate the area.

5. Buat semula zoning base on current urban plan.

6. Identify fishing spot dalam zoning.

7. Jenis retaining wall untuk elak hakisan tanah.