My 7th grade writing feedback by Bolt https://padlet.com/24aliverance/7feedback Please comment appropriately on my pieces, thanks! en-us 2018-12-05 13:50:41 UTC 2019-11-12 16:48:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png all stars 24adiluzio https://padlet.com/24aliverance/7feedback/wish/312213396 Star 1
I liked how they were formatted, really intresting
Star 2
I liked what most of them are based off.
the wish
I think you should work on grammer an example of you not is in your screen play,: we saw some TEENAGER]]> 2018-12-07 13:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/24aliverance/7feedback/wish/312213396