https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r • Use your name to identify yourself. • Be polite, friendly, and encouraging. • Feel free to ask a question to the author. • If you have a suggestion, don’t be rude about it; give constructive (helpful) feedback. • Aim for correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar. en-us 2017-04-13 02:23:49 UTC 2025-10-25 22:41:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/166871029 I have a question. Did you ever find out what the "tall hairy shadow" was?]]> 2017-04-18 19:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/166871029 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/166872740 I like how you described what the footsteps sounded like and how close it was getting to you. I also like how you said how the scream that you heard rattled in your ears and how you could feel sweat trickling down your face very descriptive]]> 2017-04-18 19:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/166872740 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/166873210 was that tall hairy shadow your Dad???]]> 2017-04-18 19:53:58 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/166873210 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167360217 all of your sensory details rocked especially how you described the tall hairy shadow  and the noise of the footsteps also I have a ? what was the figrue did you find out]]> 2017-04-20 18:57:31 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167360217 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167360793 I like how you described the footsteps with ]]> 2017-04-20 19:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167360793 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167360851 I liked how descriptive your wards were like when you used the words seemingly rattled my ears. I also LOVED your beginning. Great job Ismael!]]> 2017-04-20 19:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167360851 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167361083 I like how you describe what it was. what was it?]]> 2017-04-20 19:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167361083 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167361216 I really like how you used a very descriptive middle/ending when you said in your story, and there was a chill in my spine a chill that wouldn't go away. And when you said in the story, and a tall hairy shadow darted out of my room, my heart stopped,.]]> 2017-04-20 19:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167361216 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167362899 did you know what the scream was? ]]> 2017-04-20 19:09:12 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/167362899 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/173162713 Dear Ismael
I really liked all of your sensory details,but I must say that I have been petrified to go to sleep ever since and it would be of much appreciation if you could find out what it was before I go to sleep today,thank you
P.S...this is you from the past. ]]> 2017-05-22 14:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/173162713 https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/173163868 I thought landmarks was a really good paragraph, Because you guys where so descriptive and I did't know about Lucy the elephant. ]]> 2017-05-22 14:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/hj441eqjzr3r/wish/173163868