https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3 en-us 2018-06-15 15:36:14 UTC 2025-12-23 14:13:44 UTC hello@padlet.com cjmcnabb https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830698 Sentence 12 needs some help. Rewrite sentence 12 to make it clearer.]]> 2018-06-19 17:13:29 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830698 cjmcnabb https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830722 Write a detail sentence to go after sentence 25 that will help the reader understand how the race ended. ]]> 2018-06-19 17:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830722 cjmcnabb https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830734 Things get a little choppy between paragraphs 4 and 5. Rewrite sentence 28 to help things flow better. ]]> 2018-06-19 17:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830734 cjmcnabb https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830746 This paper just kind of... ends. Write a better conclusion for this paper. (1-2 sentences)]]> 2018-06-19 17:13:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267830746 kobaisme https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267831588 Realizing that she hadn’t recovered from her previous race her pace slowed to a jog. 

]]> 2018-06-19 17:19:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267831588 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267831769 Realizing she haven't recovered since the last run she jogged.]]> 2018-06-19 17:20:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267831769 kobaisme https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832121 The media was eating this story up asking for interviews and statements!]]> 2018-06-19 17:23:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832121 sc109653 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832243 Realizing that she hadn't recovered from her previous race she pace slowed to a jog.]]> 2018-06-19 17:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832243 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832319 Meghan let McMath cross the finish line first.]]> 2018-06-19 17:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832319 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832605 Realizing that she hadnt recovered from her previous race her pace was slowed to jog]]> 2018-06-19 17:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832605 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832630 The media was overflowing with viewers.]]> 2018-06-19 17:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832630 kobaisme https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832716 Meghan Vogel was an amazing athlete who displays great sportsmanship and is a true hero. ]]> 2018-06-19 17:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832716 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832758 Meghan Vogel was honored for being a amazing athlete and good sportsmen ship.]]> 2018-06-19 17:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267832758 sc109653 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833125 Vogel made Mcmath finish the race first, and then Vogel finish the race.]]> 2018-06-19 17:29:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833125 sc109653 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833486 Vogel became a hero because she help Mcmath so the media want to know how she feel.]]> 2018-06-19 17:32:36 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833486 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833641 Realize that she hasn't recovered from her lastest race]]> 2018-06-19 17:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833641 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833785 She crossed the line frist and they was trying to defend that about her race.]]> 2018-06-19 17:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833785 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833831 Realizing that’s haven’t recovered from her pervious race, her pace slowed to a jog.]]> 2018-06-19 17:34:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833831 sc109653 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833990 Meghan Vogel got the award because she help Arden when she got a cramp. She deserves the award for kindness.]]> 2018-06-19 17:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267833990 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834046 2018-06-19 17:36:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834046 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834356 McMath crossed the line first.]]> 2018-06-19 17:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834356 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834506 The media was chewing up the story with many viewers]]> 2018-06-19 17:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834506 xc334367 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834611 She didn't recover from her last jog ]]> 2018-06-19 17:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834611 xc334367 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834736 She crossed the line first but she got defended when the race was over ]]> 2018-06-19 17:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834736 xc334367 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834808 The media was questioning and on her about the time she had ]]> 2018-06-19 17:41:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834808 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834831 Meghan Vogel got the award because she helped Arden when she got camp she deserves the kindness award]]> 2018-06-19 17:42:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267834831 ar434936 https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267836370 the media was overflowing with views.]]> 2018-06-19 17:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cjmcnabb/hero3/wish/267836370