https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1 Things I'd like to improve before I record en-us 2018-02-06 20:58:22 UTC 2018-02-14 10:30:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Clouds.png https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420051 I enjoyed this task and I felt that my choice of words were good. I also followed my success criteria by keeping my work believeable. Next time, I would like to be a lot quicker in my work.]]> 2018-02-14 10:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420051 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420284  I engaged my adiance 
I enjoyed this task I found it hard to think of what to say but a wrote at a resanoble speed and got round it evn]]> 2018-02-14 10:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420284 r_roberts https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420618 I used adverbs and adjectives to describe my animals and I have checked over my work and have chosen my words that I use carefully . I think i could slow down how I speak when I do my voice over. ]]> 2018-02-14 10:20:05 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420618 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420769 2018-02-14 10:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420769 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420772 I have used adventures vocabulary.
I have engaged the audience.
I did not use present tense.
I did use present tense
 
   ]]> 2018-02-14 10:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420772 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420895 I really enjoyed this task because I think I followed my success criteria and I used adventurous vocabulary. I also think I captured the spirit of the frightened and worried polar bear quite well. 🐾

]]> 2018-02-14 10:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420895 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420999 I would like to do a task like this again, I really enjoyed it. When I record I would like to speak slowly so it sounds like David Attenboure ]]> 2018-02-14 10:22:09 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231420999 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421016 I used adventures vocabulary and present tence next time I need to use more adverbs]]> 2018-02-14 10:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421016 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421025 I have used 3rd person, present tense.
I have started to use adventurous descriptions.


]]> 2018-02-14 10:22:17 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421025 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421387 I used third person present tense 
I used Interesting vocabulary to describe the Polar Bear 
Next time I think I should use a variety of sentence starters 

]]> 2018-02-14 10:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421387 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421565 I managed to complete this task with confidence and independence without support of the teachers. I completed my success criteria and I used my first person and present tense to describe the feelings of the polar bear in this video. I included my technical vocabulary and adventurous vocabulary and I referred to my previous knowledge in the lessons.]]> 2018-02-14 10:25:10 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421565 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421662 I have used adventurous and imaginative volcabulary. I have used third person and present tense and I have made it factual and have used my notes to help me write it. Next time I need to use a different range of sentence starters]]> 2018-02-14 10:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421662 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421678 I think I have timed my writing so it fits in with the video.
I think i have used third person present tense
I think I need to use more adventurous vocabulary

]]> 2018-02-14 10:25:44 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421678 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421689 2018-02-14 10:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421689 r_roberts https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421741 2018-02-14 10:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421741 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421748 I struggled slightly with this task,butin  the end I really enjoyed the task. I accidentally wrote in past tense and present tense. Other than that I kept to my success criteria🎅🏽😎🐾🐾☃️]]> 2018-02-14 10:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421748 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421775 I used 3rd person and present tense next time I should use more adverbs ]]> 2018-02-14 10:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231421775 https://padlet.com/r_roberts/English1/wish/231422179 I used 3rd person. Next time I would like to use more adjectives 

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