7th period Peer Feedback by Maria Pena https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9 Give your peers feedback using Paper 1 rubric descriptors. en-us 2021-03-02 18:37:23 UTC 2026-01-28 14:35:14 UTC hello@padlet.com troy martin alex martinlachev7956 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265321209 2021-03-03 18:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265321209 abby josh elliott allison https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265323539 2021-03-03 18:23:31 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265323539 Lesedi & Jaeda lesediejuoneatseclarke9821 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265324428 2021-03-03 18:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265324428 eeson michael andrew https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265324773 2021-03-03 18:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265324773 Tyler, Cason, Miguel, Eddie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265325601 2021-03-03 18:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265325601 Kevin, Cooper, Aidan, Allan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265330327 2021-03-03 18:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265330327 Angela, Charlie, Nana, Ashia https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265334019 2021-03-03 18:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265334019 Moira, Abby, Charlotte https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265341778 2021-03-03 18:26:35 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265341778 Skylar, Morgan, Etinosa, and Hector https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265355667 2021-03-03 18:28:59 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265355667 Etinosa Omoigui https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265356501 very descriptive. good analysis and evaluation]]> 2021-03-03 18:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265356501 nice mention of satire https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265361049 2021-03-03 18:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265361049 In-depth commentary on the techniques are well developed! angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265386066 2021-03-03 18:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265386066 Minor disconnect between features and commentary. Why did they matter? https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265389788 2021-03-03 18:34:59 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265389788 Nice Job! https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265391570 Extremely detailed, the connections between symbols and they meanings is distinctly drawn

]]> 2021-03-03 18:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265391570 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265403772 Use of examples shows a clear understanding of the text]]> 2021-03-03 18:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265403772 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265404487 The explanation of the literal meaning and refering to different parts of the text was a little all over the place.(Criterion A)
Really great connections to literary devices and their impact in the story. (Criterion B)]]> 2021-03-03 18:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265404487 Nosetastic https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265409504 The only thing that I would suggest is a slightly more in depth synopsis at the beginning of the presentation]]> 2021-03-03 18:38:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265409504 Pretty well done https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265417810 I was really confused at the beginning so you could work on the introduction and context and give more insight into what you're talking about and then go into the analysis and you can also work on your language choice whenever you're explaining. 

]]> 2021-03-03 18:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265417810 Good Presentation https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265418504 The presentation is well spoken and yalls ideas were laid out well. The presentation was easy to follow but I wish yall spent more time on the synopsis and included the story in the presentation.]]> 2021-03-03 18:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265418504 I enjoyed the analysis of the short story <3. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265420751 I think it did demonstrate a thorough understanding of the meaning of the text. Perhaps improve on the analysis by incorporating a few more lit features.]]> 2021-03-03 18:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265420751 Could you find any more connections to other texts that we have read? Maybe the ideas of hierarchy and societal structure in Orwell? angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265421006 2021-03-03 18:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265421006 I think Alex could have talked slower https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265421337 2021-03-03 18:40:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265421337 I think that this presentation had good ideas concerning the literal perspective of the work with good references to the text, and they have good analysis throughout that stays focused. While they could have talked slower, the grammar and language used was appropriate for the task. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265422882 2021-03-03 18:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265422882 Instead of relying on the power point so much, have some mental notes to summarize the main ideas. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265423270 2021-03-03 18:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265423270 Awesome Nose https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265423315 Demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text
Convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text]]> 2021-03-03 18:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265423315 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265423506 Good interpretation of the short story, but could have used more examples and textual evidence 

]]> 2021-03-03 18:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265423506 Hector https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265424359 the presentation was very descriptive and well organized. It was very clear on the themes and descritions.]]> 2021-03-03 18:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265424359 The ideas could have been better placed for a better understanding. The connection to Earnest was good. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265426412 2021-03-03 18:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265426412 Very Good https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265431250 There was an excellent showcase of understanding about the text. Focus was maintained throughout the presentation, and there were very little straying thoughts.]]> 2021-03-03 18:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265431250 confident flow of commentary, really good presentation skills, no noticeable pauses, relevant context, insightful analysis, https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265436322 2021-03-03 18:42:56 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265436322 very nice explanation of the details of the story (e.g. Hessian) to concrete themes (e.g. anti-German sentiment) martinlachev7956 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265445892 2021-03-03 18:44:26 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265445892 Woah! the context was very insightful and able to tie together a meaningful concept behind a strange fantasy tale! angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265452531 2021-03-03 18:45:37 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265452531 ichabod is pronounced "ick-a-bod" not eechabod. :( https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265456655 The presentation is a good analysis of the folk nature of the story. I like the mentions of specific details in the story. Presentation of ideas is effective.]]> 2021-03-03 18:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265456655 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265476800 Good Understanding of the Text, context adds to analysis
Themes and techniques were interesting and not obvious
Language was accurate, may want to vary
Organization helped presentation flow]]> 2021-03-03 18:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265476800 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265482105 I really liked how you talked about short stories having value to culture-- it was really insightful and showed your understanding of the deeper meaning of the text.]]> 2021-03-03 18:51:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265482105 I liked the story you chose! I think the analysis was very insightful, and there were good connections made throughout the work with good textual evidence. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265500049 2021-03-03 18:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265500049 Good presentation https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265514942 Very detailed analysis. Multiple examples provided for each connection and detail.]]> 2021-03-03 18:57:09 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265514942 Good presentation https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265518049 very good presentaion and ver detailed

]]> 2021-03-03 18:57:45 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265518049 nice theme/presentation, good context and explanations https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265522555 2021-03-03 18:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265522555 This is creativity at its peak angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265522995 2021-03-03 18:58:45 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265522995 Really good https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265530276 The presentation shows an amazing understanding of the short story chosen. Additionally, it’s very ‘to the point’ and includes more than enough context, commentary and more. It’s organized in a good manner as well. Overall a terrific job]]> 2021-03-03 19:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265530276 the theme is so cute! I liked the way that you presented the background, and the literary features that you talked about! It pulled the presentation together well https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265531812 2021-03-03 19:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265531812 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265551830 Not only is your presentation very interactive, but it does a great job of clearly, concisely explaining the key aspects of your short story.

]]> 2021-03-03 19:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265551830 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265569060 the presentaion is well thought out and very descrptive]]> 2021-03-03 19:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265569060 Very good https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265569209 you did a good job discussing the themes and relating it back to the social heirarchy at the the time. Also your connection to the imporatance of being ernest made a lot of sense]]> 2021-03-03 19:07:30 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265569209 Nice presentation https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265570371 the presentation was very interactive and included many engaging elements.]]> 2021-03-03 19:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1265570371 good explanation and presentation but a little monotonous https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270597779 (so like 15 on criterion d because "register is mostly appropriate to task" try not to sound bored). otherwise good evidence, interpretation, etc.]]> 2021-03-04 18:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270597779 Good on Criterion B https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270600193 I think you did a nice job of connecting literary devices and why the author chose to use them. You did explaining their importance to the underlying meaning. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270600193 Good job https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270643806 You all did a good job with the presentation, lots of information and insightful analysis but you guys sounded bored and were reading too much off the slides and didn't explain much afterwards. It was hard to stay focused when you all sounded so monotonous. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:34:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270643806 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270647475 Very thorough! Could be more clear in your speech. Phenomenal!

]]> 2021-03-04 18:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270647475 did well explaining the importance and different meanings within the short story. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270649478 2021-03-04 18:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270649478 Good Job https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270651504 Good context and presentation that make the ideas very clear and organized. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270651504 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270659894 Your analysis of the overlying theme of insanity was very clever and in depth]]> 2021-03-04 18:37:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270659894 Criterion A-- good https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270668129 Really great interpretation of the text. I feel like you had a good understanding of the deeper meaning. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:38:28 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270668129 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270678909 Nice connection between the events happening in the context and the tone behind American gothic literature.]]> 2021-03-04 18:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270678909 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270684977 Summary shows good understanding of the text, context was enlightening and helped make a more dated story interesting again, comparisons drawn between the house and characters helped with comprehension]]> 2021-03-04 18:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270684977 angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270686743 The connects are very indepth and insightful however the entire presentation could use some more illustrations.]]> 2021-03-04 18:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270686743 Good analysis of the theme https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270689156 Yall did a good job of encapsulating the overall symbolism and detail in the original text.]]> 2021-03-04 18:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270689156 Reflection https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270690009 I think that you guys had a lot of insightful commentary! There were good examples from the text and good analysis based on the topic]]> 2021-03-04 18:42:16 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270690009 The content! angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270690481 There is lots of interesting and information like the gothic topic that you explore in depth and makes the presentation very insightful. However there are tons of blocks of texts and could do with some illustrations.]]> 2021-03-04 18:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270690481 i like how aidan talked about mental health and the way it was viewed in the past. shows how well he understands the work. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270703771 2021-03-04 18:44:47 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270703771 Great Job https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270727741 You had a lot of information that was very descriptive and organized. Very good presentation overall]]> 2021-03-04 18:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270727741 good, informative presentation, good interpretation, etc. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270756411 2021-03-04 18:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270756411 great information and casual style of talking, 20 on criterion D and 20 on criterion A https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270760924 2021-03-04 18:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270760924 Good presentation https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270835121 Good job going into depth on the story.]]> 2021-03-04 19:09:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1270835121 great context/connections,overall really well done https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1274959545 2021-03-05 18:23:06 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1274959545 ees https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1274983402 strong interpretation and commentary with the addition of the fall of feudalism and theme of fate, clear and solid analysis of textual evidence and context]]> 2021-03-05 18:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1274983402 Very extensive analysis of historical context and symbolism. https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1274986004 This would score very highly on Criterion A and B.]]> 2021-03-05 18:28:45 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1274986004 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275002617 This presentation makes very strong connections to the historical context. There is repeated reference to your individual interpretation of the concrete text while also relating it back to universal themes.]]> 2021-03-05 18:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275002617 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275018502 awesome analysis! I thought there was a lot of good commentary and examples]]> 2021-03-05 18:35:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275018502 Good presentation https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275019436 great context and it was very organized.]]> 2021-03-05 18:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275019436 very interesting interpretation of the story and how it relates to shared cultural heritage. the striking features were appropriate and meaningful https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275038605 2021-03-05 18:39:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275038605 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275069357 Great job!]]> 2021-03-05 18:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275069357 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275070836 Interesting twist on the more well known myth, good understanding of a shorter text (Criteria A), good application to the real world]]> 2021-03-05 18:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275070836 well done, informative, etc. good descriptions and context https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275086169 2021-03-05 18:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275086169 Very good https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275087639 good description and use of detail]]> 2021-03-05 18:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275087639 good interpretation and connection to the themes. 25 on criterion A https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275138691 2021-03-05 19:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275138691 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275174146 Nice conclusion, shows analysis and more universal themes]]> 2021-03-05 19:08:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/hijb3a0kkancllp9/wish/1275174146