Show not Tell Padlet 6.3 by Neelam Khemlani https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor Use the space below to post your group show paragraph. Remember to use your tell as your title. en-us 2018-09-17 03:46:15 UTC 2018-09-25 15:10:49 UTC hello@padlet.com The pepperoni pizza was delicious 2025_mcanakis https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282391030 WINNER
My stomach was rumbling. I could smell the pizza in the oven, it was the most heavenly smell that I had ever experienced! As it came out of the oven, you could see the chef’s face regretting giving the pizza to another person. It looked like even he wanted to eat the pizza!! As the waitress was carefully bringing the pizza to the table, you could hear the bubbles of the cheese pop on the pepperoni pizza.
The time has finally come. The time everyone has been waiting for. It was time to feast upon the pizza. It looked so warm and mouth-watering, I couldn’t wait!
As I grabbed a piece of the pizza the cheese drizzled everywhere. It took me one second to put it into my mouth. It felt warm and toasty. I started chewing it slower so the pizza would last longer.  
 “Mmmmm” I sighed while devouring the pizza.
The peporoini  pizza was juicy, crunchy, tough and soft at the same time, It was the most delicious pizza I had ever put in my mouth. 



]]> 2018-09-17 15:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282391030 The Cake was Delicious https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282393998 The cake was moist and smooth. As it melted in my mouth, I could feel, warm, chocolate dessert running down my throat. When I tried it I felt as if a bomb of flavours erupted. I could see the smooth glaze spreading out of the gorgeously scrumptious cake. The beautiful colorful chocolate flowers made it look as if it was disguised like a bouquet. The intense aroma of the heavenly dessert blew me away. My mind was in blank as if I was trying a cake for the first time. Every single bite was just as wonderful as the last one. 


]]> 2018-09-17 15:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282393998 SUSANA HAS ALLERGIES By Luciana, Justina, Camila.😝 https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282394458 WINNER
Winner chosen by teacher.
After Susana ate those peanut cookies, she felt her face getting hotter and hotter. She didn't  know that the cookies had peanut in them. She called her mom. Her face was getting irritated and itchy . “MOOOOOOOOM!” she screamed at the top of her lungs. “What’s the matter Susie? Oh my God your face! What happened?”  her mom asked. “Why didn’t you tell me that these cookies had peanut in them?!” yelled Susana. “I hate this mom! Please help me!!!!” Susana got really worried. “Ok sweetheart, we’ll call the ambulance, get your coat. The ambulance got to their house and and they took them to the hospital. 
          “Susana Olivia Patricia Walker Sandwich to the doctor’s office!” a man said out loud.  Susana went to the doctor’s office. Her eyes started to water and dropped tears because she was scared. The doctor said “Everything will be okay, we just have to inject a vaccine in your arm. You’ll be back to normal.”

Well done! No key words from your tell in your show plus you included dialogue. 
]]> 2018-09-17 15:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282394458 My Room was a Mess https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282394881  
I walked into my room, I could see stuffed and wrinkled clothes that smelled like rotten cheese on top of my bed, hanging on my dresser, and all over the floor. I could see the dark green stains of water and humidity on the walls. There was pizza all over the room and the floor was very sticky because of the cheese. The desk was full of notebooks with a strong and disgusting smell in them. I could hear a dreadful sound from the static TV. I tried to step into the room but couldn’t because of the banana peels that were all over the floor. I could smell the rotten fishy smell from the leftover cans of sardines. 

 Well done! You did not write key words from the tell in your show.
]]> 2018-09-17 15:25:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282394881 THE POOL WATER WAS COLD The pool water was cold The sun was shining ,the birds were singing, it was just a beautiful day. I thought it would be a good idea to go in the backyard pool. But I now regret even thinking about going in that icy cold water. I walked over to the pool with my towel in hand, ready to go in. I removed my sandals and set them aside the pool. I quickly realized this was a bad idea. I dipped my foot nervously in the water, just to realize how icy cold it was. I felt like I was stepping on a big pile of snow, BAREFOOT! The icy water sent chills up my spine, making me shiver from head to toe. I felt my foot burning in the polar water and jumped immediately out. My frosty foot was . I tried dipping my foot once more, I dropped in the other one and sat on the edge of the pool, just to receive the gust of chlorine from the arctic pool water. st_1205464 https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282397761
Try not writing out key words of the tell when you write about the show. Attempt to change some words without the reader knowing you are referring to a pool that is cold. Show them through words so that the reader may guess that you are writing about a pool. ]]> 2018-09-17 15:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282397761 The student was nervous about the exam https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282398134  
By: Lucca Urbano, Emma Senzasono, Andrea Velez, Sofia Macchiavello  

As the student was walking in the classroom his hands were shivering and his head was spinning. He could not stop thinking about the exam. All his friends were ready to go but he was extremely nervous. As he was doing the test his paper was all wet from all the sweat and nerves he had. He had forgotten his glasses so he saw everything blurry. When the teacher asked for the papers, he was sure to get an F. He could hear the teacher grabbing and checking the tests. He could hear the red permanent marker squeaking against the paper. 

When he went out of the class  he could see his classmates all happy but he was feeling horrible. He could  smell his own fear. He could hear his parents already grounding him for the bad results. A couple days later he got the results and he got a A+. So from that day on he was confident with all his tests. 😊👍                                             

Try not to use key words from your tell in your show.
 
]]> 2018-09-17 15:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/282398134 rdhfgjhkj st_1205464 https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/285578915 2018-09-25 15:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nkhemlani1/higu608pruor/wish/285578915