https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35 Overall Score & Rationale for Evidence & Commentary Score en-us 2021-01-11 20:16:52 UTC 2021-01-15 18:07:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f9d0.png karen_savella https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1076089921 Evid. & Commentary Score: ____
There are textual references, but they are limited.]]> 2021-01-11 20:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1076089921 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092264895 Evid. & Commentary Score: 2
The writer shows understanding of the piece but doesn't go into any depth and was a little bit vague. ]]> 2021-01-15 17:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092264895 rmorse22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092265863 Evidence and Commentary Score 3: makes textual references but limited commentary]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:05 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092265863 jhunt2210 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266109 Overall Score: 2
Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Makes some references to the text, with little to no commentary.

]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266109 dcolelli22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266208 Evid. & Commentary: 3
No debatable thesis, limited commentary]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266208 jshur21 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266423 Evidence/Commentary: 2
There are a few lines of evidence/quotes from the text, but commentary isn't very in depth]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266423 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266611 Evidence and commentary:2
Uses textual references but commentary is simple and limited]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092266611 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092269067 Evidence and commentary: 2
The evidence is simple]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:46 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092269067 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092269128 Evidence & Commentary: 3
It had textual references but they were uneven or limited in places. ]]> 2021-01-15 17:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092269128 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092270418 evidence and commentary:2
They give brief evidence, but do not expand on it and connect it to ]]> 2021-01-15 17:56:04 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092270418 dcolelli22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092272305 Evid. & Commentary: 2
Brief/simple commentary, thesis does not fully respond to prompt. ]]> 2021-01-15 17:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092272305 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092273767 They were very brief and do not elaborate on their evidence ]]> 2021-01-15 17:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092273767 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092273881 thesis; 1, the argument wasn't explained well but enough 

evidence and commentary; 2, they didn't expand or touch on any of their claims very much. The evidence given wasn't very connected to their claim and was very brief.

sophistication; 0, they didn't really have a very good thesis to work with]]> 2021-01-15 17:56:49 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092273881 jshur21 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092274239 Evidence/Commentary: 2
The selected quotes do somewhat tie into the thesis, but commentary isn't strong enough]]> 2021-01-15 17:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092274239 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092275307 Evid. and Commentary: 2
The evidence is brief]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:09 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092275307 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092276295 Evidence and commentary: 2
Uses some textual evidence but the evidence is somewhat simple ]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:23 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092276295 jhunt2210 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092276598 Overall Score: 3
Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Commentary is brief and slightly inaccurate. 

]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092276598 dcolelli22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092277319 Evid. & Commentary: 4
Defensible thesis, explicitly explains evidence, vivid writing style.]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092277319 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092277367 Evidence and Commentary: 2
Commentary is simple and short and didn't explain much]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092277367 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092277926 Evidence & Commentary: 2
Brief commentary and doesn't answer prompt fully.]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092277926 rmorse22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092278408 Evidence and Commentary Score 1:
vague reference, little commentary]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092278408 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092278835 evidence:2
does not elaborate enough on evidence given]]> 2021-01-15 17:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092278835 jhunt2210 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092279993 Overall Score: 6
Evidence and Commentary Score: 4
Makes and properly integrates several textual references, each accompanied by equally excellent commentary. 

]]> 2021-01-15 17:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092279993 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092280554 Evidence and commentary score: 4
Uses great textual evidence that consistently helps explain the thesis ]]> 2021-01-15 17:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092280554 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092280598 Evid and Com: 3 Makes textual references but commentary is limited.]]> 2021-01-15 17:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092280598 jshur21 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092280647 Evidence/Commentary: 4
Selected quotes are very relevant to defense of the thesis, commentary is in-depth and accurate]]> 2021-01-15 17:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092280647 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092282776 Evid. and Commentary: 4
the evidence defense the claim and explains how it connects]]> 2021-01-15 17:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092282776 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092283257 Evidence & Commentary: 4
Good explanations and evidence. The explanations helped the quotes make sense. ]]> 2021-01-15 17:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092283257 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092284048 does not elaborate on evidence or connect completely back to the thesis ]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092284048 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092284701 Evid. and Commentary: 4
Gives great evidence with great explanations to back it all up. All of the writers evidence and analysis relates to their topic sentence without repeating it. ]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092284701 jhunt2210 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092284952 Overall Score:  3
Evidence and Commentary Score: 3
Writer appropriately uses and integrates their evidence, which they back using good commentary. ]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:16 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092284952 dcolelli22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092285247 Evid.& Commentary: 3
Simple commentary, commentary explains relationship to evidence]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092285247 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092285833 evidence:4
the essay was neatly organized and the evidence was selective to their thesis.]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:29 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092285833 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092285896 Evidence and Commentary:3
Uses well put together evidence to help support thesis]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092285896 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092286394 Evid and Com: 3 Multiple textual references, but very simple commentary.]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:36 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092286394 rmorse22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092287096 Evidence and Commentary 4:
Had textual references that defended thesis and consistently explains the relationship to the thesis.]]> 2021-01-15 17:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092287096 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092288166 Evidence & Commentary: 3
Has evidence and explanations but it isn't even or complete everywhere. ]]> 2021-01-15 18:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092288166 jshur21 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092289050 Evidence/Commentary: 3
Although there isn't a lot of either, when used evidence is relevant, and commentary is accurate]]> 2021-01-15 18:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092289050 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291183 Evid. and Commentary:3
Explains the evidence ]]> 2021-01-15 18:00:43 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291183 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291208 Evid and Com: 4 Evidence is provided that defends thesis, and commentary is thorough.]]> 2021-01-15 18:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291208 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291388 evidence and commentary 4
they used relevant text examples with explanations that connected back to the debatable thesis.]]> 2021-01-15 18:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291388 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291689 evidence:2
they give some evidence and some commentary, and it lacks organization]]> 2021-01-15 18:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092291689 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092293901 Evid. and Commentary: 3
Has okay textual evidence to defend the thesis but isn't fully explained in some spots.]]> 2021-01-15 18:01:20 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092293901 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092294185 thesis; 1, a short and sweet thesis that helped explain their argument well enough 

evidence and commentary; 2, it was very simple and very little commentary

sophistication; 0, not very good ]]> 2021-01-15 18:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092294185 rmorse22 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092295425 Evidence and Commentary 3:
Makes textual references that defended the thesis, commentary was uneven]]> 2021-01-15 18:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092295425 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092297263 Evid and Com: 2 Makes references, but commentary is simple.]]> 2021-01-15 18:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092297263 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092300192 evidence and commentary 3 
simple commentary but could elaborate more  ]]> 2021-01-15 18:02:34 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092300192 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092308625 thesis; 1, definitely created a good argument 

evidence and commentary; 4, made many relations to the text and sounded very sophisticated, understood the text and showed it 

sophistication; 1, knew what they were talking about ]]> 2021-01-15 18:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092308625 https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092315783 thesis; 1, the thesis had a good argument that  could be argued 

evidence and commentary; 3, explained it to a good extent 

sophistication; didn't get it to a great extent ]]> 2021-01-15 18:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_savella/hi1u2xvofuct8y35/wish/1092315783