https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy Provide some feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-26 14:44:27 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309955 -not much eye contact
- I like how you connected the story to you.

]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309955 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309967 -different project than the rest 
-a bit quiet, but confident 
-uses hand gestures that get the audiences attention.]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309967 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309981 Her presentation was good she speaks to the audience and uses hand gestures. Her creative story was very well detailed and it correlates to the story. ]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309981 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309998 Could use make more eye contact with audience.
Interesting story and liked how she related it to herself.]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309998 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309999 Voice is projected well and body language is open. There are inconsistencies with grammar, but overall the chapter looks good.]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191309999 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310003 She gets louder but then quite afterwards and doesnt have a steady tone in her voice. 
Her character and setting seems like it came straight out of the book. 
Very creative. 
Short but to the point.]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310003 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310018 -Different project choice 
-Not much audience eye contact
-confident and with hand gestures 
-not much variation in her boie]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310018 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310021 - Quiet
- Interesting character choice and plot 

]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310021 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310031 - gave a personal connection to the project 
- eyes on the screen ]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310031 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310036 Quiet and pauses a lot. Nervous body language (continuously shifting and moving). ]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310036 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310037 - Good answers 
- I like your story since you connected with it personally 
- This chapter would've added a lot more Pizzazz in the book. ]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310037 nguyezoe000 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310072 - seems confident
- good gesture and good stance
-Very little eye contact 
- does look at the screen quite a bit
-  I like the ties you had with the stories!! 
- this story seems interesting!!!]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310072 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310078 She explained and gave her viewpoints. Was interesting and could understand what was going on.]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310078 villamar002 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310092 Not much eye contact but she has a really good summary for her story. Very good plot ]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310092 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310161 - Good idea about the story
- Tries to make eye contact as much as she can]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310161 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310168 Needs more feeling in voice. 
Should've talked a little more about the chapter but I'm glad she made it about herself in a way.]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310168 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310172 - ties it to her own personal which makes it more interesting to the audience as they are able to learn about their peers.
-very little eye contact with audience
- reading from screen
-ties her character directly to piper]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310172 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310192 -needs to speak louder
-needs to elaborate and clearly state points 
-eye glued on the screen
-good story and story line
-needs a sense of professionalism, verbal and nonverbal gestures ]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310192 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310197 -very confident
- made little  eye contact 
-described her story pretty well]]> 2017-09-26 15:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310197 edekojos000 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310241 -Lack of eye contact
-Very short
-Should have read some parts of the essay.
-Uninteresting]]> 2017-09-26 15:31:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310241 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310303 Cymore is honest. She reads and faces the screen. She also rarely looks at the class. She seems to have put a lot of work into her paper. Good, loud voice]]> 2017-09-26 15:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310303 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310382 *Good understanding of the objective
* speaks in a low tone but, can be heard
* could have improvements on eyecontact
* touches the surface of the topic however, doesn't dig deep into the subject]]> 2017-09-26 15:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310382 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310394 Interesting take on creating a new character could speak up more ]]> 2017-09-26 15:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310394 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310464 Some eye contact, good knowledge over the book, needs more detail and knowledge over the subject, good elocution, though needs more enthusiasm . ]]> 2017-09-26 15:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310464 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310804 - Seems interested in topic
- Monotoned
- I was able to understand her ]]> 2017-09-26 15:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191310804 https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191311278 Is very interested in creating a story or a set of relationships behind her character. Her voice is relatively clear and loud, but has no real objective in her argument.]]> 2017-09-26 15:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/hes71viqz4vy/wish/191311278